* James M Snell wrote:
>   When servers or clients receive digitally signed or encrypted Entry
>   Documents, they are under no obligation to preserve the integrity of
>   the signatures or the encryption. They are allowed to modify member
>   resources in ways that can invalidate signatures.  If such
>   modifications are made, it is recommended that any invalid signatures
>   be removed.

This should be "Servers should remove invalidated signatures". However,
this may give the false impression that support for signatures is re-
quired, and does not address what to do if the server does not know if
a signature has been invalidated. The phrasing of "the integrity of the
signatures or the encryption" is also easily misread.

>   A server can require that Entry Documents received from a client,
>   either via POST or PUT, be digitally signed with a valid
>   signature or are encrypted, or both.  How such requirements are
>   communicated to the client are considered out of scope for this
>   specification.

s/are con/is con/.

>   Signatures and encrypted elements are considered to be foreign markup
>   within an Atom document and are required to be handled according to
>   the rules specified in Sections 5 and 6.3 of [RFC4287].

I don't think it's useful to repeat this information here, "Handling of
signatures and encrypted elements in Atom documents is discussed in
sections 5 and 6.3 of [RFC4287]" would be better.
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