Hi Med, Thank you for your review. We have not made changes to the references per the explanation below. We will continue with publication shortly.
Thank you, RFC Editor/sg > On Feb 24, 2025, at 6:07 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: > > Hi Sandy, all, > > Please see inline. > > Cheers, > Med > >> -----Message d'origine----- >> De : Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >> Envoyé : vendredi 21 février 2025 17:42 >> À : Benoit Claise <benoit.cla...@huawei.com> >> Cc : debcool...@gmail.com via RT <iana-mat...@iana.org>; Aitken, >> Paul <pait...@ciena.com>; Thomas.Graf <thomas.g...@swisscom.com>; >> RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; opsawg-cha...@ietf.org; >> opsawg-...@ietf.org; BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET >> <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; Mahesh Jethanandani >> <mjethanand...@gmail.com>; Benoit Claise >> <benoit.claise=40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org>; auth48archive@rfc- >> editor.org >> Objet : Reference questions - Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9710 <draft- >> ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-12> for your review >> >> >> Hi again, >> >> Apologies - I spoke too soon. May we update these references as >> follows? >> >> 1) RFC 4646 has been obsoleted by RFC 5646 (BCP 47)? May we >> update the text to refer to RFC 5646? >> > > [Med] We have considered that one in the past but decided to leave the OLD > for the reasons in > https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/isMt-QcqpKiM03krGRa9g1PSwsk/ > >> 7.4.2. NEW >> >> Description: A UTF-8 [RFC3629] encoded Unicode string >> containing a >> human-readable description of an Information Element. The >> content >> of the informationElementDescription MAY be annotated with >> one or >> more language tags [RFC4646], encoded in-line [RFC2482] >> within the >> UTF-8 string, . >> >> 2) RFC 5102 has been obsoleted by RFC 7012. We see the following >> note about this in the RFC. Is it correct for the NEW text to >> continue to refer to RFC 5102? >> >> Note that, as per Section 5 of [RFC7012], [IANA-IPFIX] is the >> normative reference for the IPFIX IEs that were defined in >> [RFC5102]. >> > > [Med] Changing Section 5 of 5102 to Section of 7012 is broken given that > Section of 7012 does not define IEs. I would leave 5102 for consistency. > Thanks. > >> >> Examples where NEW text refers to RFC 5102: >> >> 6.12.2. NEW >> >> Description: A description of the abstract data type of an >> IPFIX >> information element. These are taken from the abstract >> data types >> defined in Section 3.1 of the IPFIX Information Model >> [RFC5102]; . >> >> >> 6.13.2. NEW >> >> Description: A description of the semantics of an IPFIX >> Information >> Element. These are taken from the data type semantics >> defined in >> Section 3.2 of the IPFIX Information Model [RFC5102]; >> >> 6.14.2. NEW >> >> Description: A description of the units of an IPFIX >> Information >> Element. These correspond to the units implicitly defined >> in the >> Information Element definitions in Section 5 of the IPFIX >> Information Model [RFC5102]; >> >> >> 3) RFC 9565 obsoletes RFC 7125. Please note that we changed >> "updates" to "obsoletes for accuracy. >> > > [Med] ACK. > >> When the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) >> was >> considering [RFC9565], which updates [RFC7125], . >> >> Current: >> When the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) >> was >> considering [RFC9565], which obsoletes [RFC7125], >> >> The current files are available here: >> >> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 >> Fwww.rfc- >> editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9710.xml&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucada >> ir%40orange.com%7C5c449be08c0f42a2555408dd5296e361%7C90c7a20af34b >> 40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638757530480129803%7CUnknown%7CTWF >> pbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4z >> MiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=q%2FsPd0a >> qq4tU8PwC%2B9J1BTIAVMr3mX9ZX%2FvPLeBb5eA%3D&reserved=0 >> >> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 >> Fwww.rfc- >> 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We have received all of the needed >> approvals and will continue with publication shortly. >>> >>> Thank you, >>> RFC Editor/sg >>> >>>> On Feb 20, 2025, at 1:09 AM, Benoit Claise >> <benoit.cla...@huawei.com> wrote: >>>> >>>> Thank you Sabrina and Sandy, >>>> >>>> All looks good to me. >>>> >>>> Regards, Benoit >>>> >>>> >>>> On 2/19/2025 11:00 PM, Sabrina Tanamal via RT wrote: >>>>> Hi Sandy, Paul, all, >>>>> >>>>> We've updated the registry to reflect the changes in the diff >> and fixed the typos, as noted by Paul (thank you for pointing >> these out): >>>>> >>>>> >> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 >> Fww >>>>> >> w.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fipfix&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair >> %40 >>>>> >> orange.com%7C5c449be08c0f42a2555408dd5296e361%7C90c7a20af34b40bfb >> c48 >>>>> >> b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638757530480358358%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d >> 8ey >>>>> >> JFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjo >> iTW >>>>> >> FpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=J2YkNCwUKzOPKy%2BRJr3p% >> 2Bh >>>>> Atw3N6P%2B2YaFP56aiquJU%3D&reserved=0 >>>>> >>>>> Let us know if any other changes are needed. >>>>> >>>>> Thanks, >>>>> Sabrina >>>>> >>>>> On Wed Feb 19 19:48:34 2025, sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org >> wrote: >>>>>> Hi Paul, Sabrina, Authors, >>>>>> >>>>>> I removed the two instances of '(previously the "X" >> registry)'. 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side) >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Please review and let us know if any further updates are >> needed. >>>>>> >>>>>> Thank you, >>>>>> RFC Editor/sg >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> On Feb 19, 2025, at 6:56 AM, Aitken, Paul >> <pait...@ciena.com> wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Sabrina, there are still some discrepancies between the >> RFC-to-be >>>>>>> and the registry. I've checked sections 4, 5, and 7 of the >>>>>>> RFC-to-be, but not yet section 6. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Also, RFC9710 is not listed in the "Reference" column for >> any of >>>>>>> the changes. Whether that's an oversight in the RFC, or an >>>>>>> expectation that IANA will automatically add it; I believe >> it >>>>>>> should be listed against each modified element. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4.1.2. NEW / sourceTransportPort >>>>>>> 4.2.2. NEW / destinationTransportPort 4.4.2. NEW / >>>>>>> collectorTransportPort 4.5.2. NEW / exporterTransportPort >> The RFC >>>>>>> says "See [RFC0768]" while the registry says "See >> [RFC768]". >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 262 messageMD5Checksum >>>>>>> >>>>>>> "messageScope Information lement" should be "messageScope >>>>>>> Information Element" >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 285 anonymizationFlags >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The text is correct, but the right-hand edge of the table >> is wonky. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 340 informationElementDescription >>>>>>> >>>>>>> "with its ownlanguage tag" should be "with its own language >> tag". >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> P. >>>> >>> > > ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ > Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations > confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc > pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu > ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler > a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. 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