Hi John, Thanks for your review. With your approval, AUTH48 is complete. We will continue with the publication process shortly.
Thank you, RFC Editor/sg > On Mar 12, 2025, at 7:28 PM, John Scudder <j...@juniper.net> wrote: > > Thanks for the reminder. I just reviewed the comprehensive diff. Looks good; > approved. > > —John > >> On Mar 12, 2025, at 7:15 PM, Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org >> <mailto:sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org>> wrote: >> >> [External Email. Be cautious of content] >> >> >> Hi John, >> >> Just a friendly reminder that we await your approval before continuing with >> the publication process. Please see the files at the locations listed below. >> >> Thank you, >> RFC Editor/sg >> >> >>> On Feb 28, 2025, at 11:33 AM, Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>> wrote: >>> >>> Hi John, >>> >>> We do not believe we have heard from you regarding this document’s >>> readiness for publication. 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Thanks. >>>>> >>>>> Cheers, >>>>> Med >>>>> >>>>>> -----Message d'origine----- >>>>>> De : Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org >>>>>> <mailto:sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org>> >>>>>> Envoyé : jeudi 20 février 2025 00:05 >>>>>> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com >>>>>> <mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>> >>>>>> Cc : Paolo Lucente <pa...@ntt.net <mailto:pa...@ntt.net>>; RFC Editor >>>>>> <rfc-editor@rfc- >>>>>> editor.org <http://editor.org/>>; John Scudder <j...@juniper.net >>>>>> <mailto:j...@juniper.net>>; grow-...@ietf.org <mailto:grow-...@ietf.org>; >>>>>> grow-cha...@ietf.org <mailto:grow-cha...@ietf.org>; j...@sobornost.net >>>>>> <mailto:j...@sobornost.net>; Warren Kumari >>>>>> <war...@kumari.net <mailto:war...@kumari.net>>; >>>>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <mailto:auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> >>>>>> Objet : Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9736 <draft-ietf-grow-bmp-peer-up- >>>>>> 05> for your review >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Hi Med, >>>>>> >>>>>> We have 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>>>>>>> [RFC7854] defines a number of different BMP message types. >>>>>> With >>>>>>> the >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ^^^^ >>>>>>> >>>>>>> exception of the Route Monitoring message type, these >>>>>> messages are >>>>>>> >>>>>>> TLV-structured. Most message types have distinct namespaces >>>>>> and >>>>>>> IANA >>>>>>> >>>>>>> registries. However, the namespace of the Peer Up message >>>>>> overlaps >>>>>>> >>>>>>> that of the Initiation message. As the BGP Monitoring >>>>>> Protocol has >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> NEW: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> [RFC7854] defines a number of different BGP Monitoring >>>>>> Protocol (BMP) message types. With the >>>>>>> exception of the Route Monitoring message type, these >>>>>> messages are >>>>>>> TLV-structured. Most message types have distinct namespaces >>>>>> and IANA >>>>>>> registries. However, the namespace of the Peer Up message >>>>>> overlaps >>>>>>> that of the Initiation message. As BMP has >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> (2) S3.1 nit >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> CURRENT: provided for here for completeness >>>>>>> >>>>>>> NEW: provided for completeness >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> (3) S3.2 No explicit mention of the IANA registry in the >>>>>> description of the info type. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> CURRENT: Information Type (2 bytes): defined types are: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Cheers, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Med >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> De : Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org >>>>>>> <mailto:sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org>> Envoyé : >>>>>> mercredi 12 >>>>>>> février 2025 00:52 À : Paolo Lucente <pa...@ntt.net >>>>>>> <mailto:pa...@ntt.net>> Cc : RFC >>>>>> Editor >>>>>>> <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>>; John >>>>>>> Scudder <j...@juniper.net <mailto:j...@juniper.net>>; >>>>>>> grow-...@ietf.org <mailto:grow-...@ietf.org>; grow-cha...@ietf.org >>>>>>> <mailto:grow-cha...@ietf.org>; j...@fastly.com >>>>>>> <mailto:j...@fastly.com>; Warren >>>>>> Kumari >>>>>>> <war...@kumari.net <mailto:war...@kumari.net>>; >>>>>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <mailto:auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> >>>>>>> Objet : Re: >>>>>> AUTH48: >>>>>>> RFC-to-be 9736 <draft-ietf-grow-bmp-peer-up-05> for your review >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Paolo, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thank you for your reply. We have updated the document as >>>>>> described below. In particular, thank you for your explanation >>>>>> regarding 3a and 3d. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Regarding item 6, please verify that this is correct, as it's >>>>>> different from what I see in Section 4.4 of RFC 7854. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please confirm that the bit ruler appears as >>>>>> expected. >>>>>>> Typically the numbers appear over the hyphens. 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following questions, which are also in the XML >>>>>> file. >>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, may we replace "oversight" with >>>>>> "overlap"? >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> As the BGP Monitoring Protocol has >>>>>>> been extended, this oversight has become problematic. >>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>> As the BGP Monitoring Protocol has >>>>>>> been extended, this overlap has become problematic. >>>>>>> --> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> That works! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] We find the "corresponding missing registry" >>>>>> somewhat >>>>>>> confusing because it seems to refer to the registry being >>>>>> renamed as >>>>>>> "missing". Please consider whether the suggested text would be >>>>>> more clear. >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> In this >>>>>>> document, we create a distinct namespace for the Peer Up >>>>>> message to >>>>>>> eliminate this overlap, and create the corresponding missing >>>>>>> registry. >>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>> In this >>>>>>> document, we create distinct namespaces for the Peer Up and >>>>>> Initiation >>>>>>> messages to eliminate the overlap. >>>>>>> --> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> That works! Thanks! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Section 3: Please review the questions below. >>>>>>> a) It is unclear to us whether Section 3.1 refers to the >>>>>> updates to >>>>>>> the "BMP Initiation Information TLVs" registry [1] or if it >>>>>> indicates >>>>>>> that "Initiation" should to be updated to "Initiation >>>>>> Information" in >>>>>>> the "BMP Message Types" registry [2], or both. >>>>>>> Please review the IANA registries and let us know if updates >>>>>> are needed. >>>>>>> [1] >>>>>>> >>>>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*2__;JSUl!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8Ozvn9JhcnMo$ >>>>>> >>>>>> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*2__;JSUl!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8Ozvn9JhcnMo$> >>>>>> Fwww. >>>>>>> iana.org <http://iana.org/>%2Fassignments%2Fbmp-parameters%2Fbmp- >>>>>> parameters.xhtml%23initi >>>>>>> ation-information- >>>>>> tlvs&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com >>>>>> <http://40orange.com/>%7 >>>>>>> >>>>>> Caf7fe6848cf14d2f7c6808dd5139ff39%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5 >>>>>> d20%7 >>>>>>> >>>>>> C0%7C0%7C638756032026725501%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hc >>>>>> GkiOn >>>>>>> >>>>>> RydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjo >>>>>> yfQ%3 >>>>>>> >>>>>> D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=kONuXoBoZbKf%2B%2F81zg3sFobfYl%2FEnTOe%2B >>>>>> vJ%2F >>>>>>> oIpTiIE%3D&reserved=0 [2] >>>>>>> >>>>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*2__;JSUl!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8Ozvn9JhcnMo$ >>>>>> >>>>>> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*2__;JSUl!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8Ozvn9JhcnMo$> >>>>>> Fwww. >>>>>>> iana.org <http://iana.org/>%2Fassignments%2Fbmp-parameters%2Fbmp- >>>>>> parameters.xhtml%23messa >>>>>>> ge- >>>>>> types&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com >>>>>> <http://40orange.com/>%7Caf7fe6848cf >>>>>> 14 >>>>>>> >>>>>> d2f7c6808dd5139ff39%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C >>>>>> 63875 >>>>>>> >>>>>> 6032026732823%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlY >>>>>> iOiIw >>>>>>> >>>>>> LjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0% >>>>>> 7C%7C >>>>>>> >>>>>> %7C&sdata=PFitO9UHG1aVU5y57k9%2B8logYahgeBxu2y8eFwrC5rs%3D&reserv >>>>>> ed=0 >>>>>>> b) If updating the entry in "BMP Message Types" is intended, we >>>>>>> suggest describing the action in the IANA Considerations >>>>>> section as >>>>>>> well. Please provide text. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> None of the two, we are just updating RFC7854: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> in section 4.4 of RFC7854 the optional TLV that can follow an >>>>>>> Initiation message is called "Information TLV". We are just >>>>>> changing >>>>>>> that definition to "Initiation Information TLV" to limit the >>>>>> scope to >>>>>>> the Initialization message only. Nothing to do for IANA here as >>>>>> in >>>>>>> section 10.5 of RFC7854 the registry is correctly already named >>>>>> "BMP >>>>>>> Initiation Message TLVs". (see more in my comment to your point >>>>>> "d") >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> c) The section title feels overloaded. May we change it as >>>>>> follows? >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> 3.1. Revision to Information TLV, Renamed as Initiation >>>>>> Information >>>>>>> TLV >>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>> 3.1. Revision to the Information TLV >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Agree! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> d) Somewhat related, Section 3.3 says: >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> The Peer Up Information TLV is used by the Peer Up message. >>>>>>> Is the Peer Up Information TLV an IANA-registered value? We >>>>>> don't see >>>>>>> "Peer Up Information" in the BMP registry. >>>>>>> --> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Similarly to before, we are just updating RFC7854. In section >>>>>> 4.10 of RFC7854 we find "Information: Information about the peer, >>>>>> using the Information TLV (Section 4.4) format. [ .. ]"; so we >>>>>> are overloading the term Information TLV for two different >>>>>> message types, Initialization and Peer Up; in this document we >>>>>> say they are called differently and each will ultimately point to >>>>>> a different IANA registry: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> * Initialization Information TLV field to the existing "BMP >>>>>> Initiation >>>>>>> Information TLVs" IANA registry; >>>>>>> >>>>>>> * Peer Up Information TLV field to the newly created (as part >>>>>> of this >>>>>>> document) "BMP Peer Up Information TLVs" IANA registry; >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hope this makes things more clear. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] The text mentions Type 0 being revised, but the >>>>>> text >>>>>>> that follows also includes definitions for Types 1 and 2. May >>>>>> we >>>>>>> update the text as follows for clarity? >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> The definition of Type = 0 is revised to be: >>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>> The definition of Type = 0 is revised as shown below. >>>>>>> Type = 1 and Type = 2 are unchanged; they are provided >>>>>>> for here for completeness. >>>>>>> --> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Agree! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Because this text is supposed to replace text >>>>>> in RFC >>>>>>> 9736, we have updated "defined below (Section 3.3)" to read >>>>>> "defined >>>>>>> in Section >>>>>>> 3.3 of RFC 9736." Rationale: if this text were incorporated >>>>>> into RFC >>>>>>> 7854, "below (Section 3.3)" would be incorrect. >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> * Information: Information about the peer, using the Peer >>>>>> Up >>>>>>> Information TLV format defined below (Section 3.3). >>>>>>> --> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Agree! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please confirm that the bit ruler appears as >>>>>> expected. >>>>>>> Typically the numbers appear over the hyphens. Compare the >>>>>> alignment >>>>>>> with the figure in Section 4.4 of RFC 7854 >>>>>> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*__;JSUl!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8OzvnivOZqZM$ >>>>>> >>>>>> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*__;JSUl!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8OzvnivOZqZM$> >>>>>> 2Fwww.rfc-editor.org >>>>>> <http://2fwww.rfc-editor.org/>%2Frfc%2Frfc7854.html%23section- >>>>>> 4.4&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com >>>>>> <http://40orange.com/>%7Caf7fe6848cf14 >>>>>> d2f7c6808dd5139ff39%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C >>>>>> 638756032026740296%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydW >>>>>> UsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ% >>>>>> 3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=tq6jvCUBRj%2F2Q9dibsvlj5TfZXbkrrTRNjMvP% >>>>>> 2BIroqs%3D&reserved=0>. >>>>>>> Original (this doc): >>>>>>> 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 >>>>>> 8 >>>>>>> +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+- >>>>>> +-+ >>>>>>> --> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I confirm it looks good, it was pretty much copy-pasted :-) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Some author comments are present in the XML. >>>>>> Please >>>>>>> confirm that no updates related to these comments are >>>>>> outstanding. >>>>>>> Note that the comments will be deleted prior to publication. >>>>>>> --> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I confirm there are no updates and they can be deleted. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion >>>>>> of the >>>>>>> online Style Guide >>>>>>> >>>>>> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*__;JSUl!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8OzvnivOZqZM$ >>>>>> >>>>>> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*__;JSUl!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8OzvnivOZqZM$> >>>>>> 2Fwww >>>>>>> .rfc- >>>>>> editor.org%2Fstyleguide%2Fpart2%2F%23inclusive_language&data=05%7 >>>>>>> >>>>>> C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Caf7fe6848cf14d2f7c6808dd51 >>>>>> 39ff3 >>>>>>> >>>>>> 9%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638756032026747965 >>>>>> %7CUn >>>>>>> >>>>>> known%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsI >>>>>> lAiOi >>>>>>> >>>>>> JXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=2dY >>>>>> tGB%2 >>>>>>> FxWrWSE3C19Mx7swQwoGjvjbYMf848gEkj2bE%3D&reserved=0> >>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed. Updates of this >>>>>> nature >>>>>>> typically result in more precise language, which is helpful for >>>>>> readers. >>>>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but >>>>>> this >>>>>>> should still be reviewed as a best practice. >>>>>>> --> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> It seems all fine to me, thanks for bringing this up. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Paolo >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>> _________________________________________________________________ >>>>>> _____ >>>>>>> _____________________________________ >>>>>>> _ >>>>>>> Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des >>>>>> informations >>>>>>> confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre >>>>>> diffuses, >>>>>>> exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce >>>>>> message >>>>>>> par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire >>>>>> ainsi que les pieces jointes. 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