Hi,

Yes the suggestion is clearer please go ahead and use it.

/Magnus

From: Alice Russo <aru...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
Date: Wednesday, 19 March 2025 at 11:33
To: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerl...@ericsson.com>
Cc: avtcore-...@ietf.org <avtcore-...@ietf.org>, avtcore-cha...@ietf.org 
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Subject: question - Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9751 
<draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-payload-registry-05> for your review
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Hi Magnus,
As we prepare this document for publication 
(https://eur02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9751.html&data=05%7C02%7Cmagnus.westerlund%40ericsson.com%7Cfc5e6d5321f948958fa308dd669f3c20%7C92e84cebfbfd47abbe52080c6b87953f%7C0%7C0%7C638779556279599076%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=%2Bt1zZbuxGNpYf%2FXXvgReLx2Xufh%2FFAeRNaaVqJJ4Vvc%3D&reserved=0
 and additional formats), a question about the opening sentence of the 
abstract: Is the following change acceptable? We find it more clear (i.e., to 
prevent misreading it as authors of (a) formats and (b) WG process).

Current:
   A number of authors defining RTP payload formats and the Working
   Group process have failed to ensure that the media types are
   registered in the IANA "RTP Payload Format Media Types" registry as
   recommended by RFC 8088.  To simplify the process and rely only on
   the "Media Types" registry, this document closes the RTP payload-
   specific registry.  In addition, it updates the instruction in RFC
   8088 to reflect this change.

Perhaps:
   The working group process and authors of RTP payload formats have
   sometimes failed to ensure that the media types are registered in the
   IANA "RTP Payload Format Media Types" registry as recommended by RFC
   8088.  To simplify the process and rely only on the "Media Types"
   registry, this document closes the RTP payload- specific registry.
   In addition, it updates the instruction in RFC 8088 to reflect this
   change.


Thank you.
RFC Editor/ar
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