Hi Alan, Paul (as AD),

Paul, this is a friendly reminder to please review and let us know if you 
approve the new text (as shown in the diff files) in:

- Section 1 (updated text in paragraph 3 per the reply to #4),
- Section 3.3.2 (added text per the reply to #10), and
- Section 5.2 (added text per the reply to #13).

Alan, thanks for your suggestion. Please see the updated files below and let us 
know if all of these changes are approved. Additionally, please note that we 
await your response to question #3:

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The revised files are here (please refresh):
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765.html  
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765.txt  
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765.pdf  
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765.xml 

This diff file shows all changes from the approved I-D:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765-diff.html 
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765-rfcdiff.html (side by side) 

This diff file shows the changes made during AUTH48 thus far:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765-auth48diff.html  
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)

Thank you.
RFC Editor/kf

> On Apr 9, 2025, at 3:28 PM, Alan DeKok 
> <aland=40freeradius....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> On Apr 4, 2025, at 6:02 PM, Alice Russo <aru...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>> Alan, thank you for your reply. Please see the follow-up below. The revised 
>> files are here (please refresh):
> 
>  Those look fine, thanks.
> 
>> Re: #13, re:
>>> Perhaps also add a note:
>>> Further issues related to Message-Authenticator are discussed in 
>>> [draft-ietf-radext-deprecating-radius].
>> 
>> Is it correct that we should add this sentence to the end of Section 5.2 as 
>> its own paragraph, and add draft-ietf-radext-deprecating-radius as an 
>> informative reference, with anchor "DEPRECATE-RADIUS"?
> 
>  Yes.
> 
>  Alan DeKok.
> 

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