Thank you Emad - we will continue with publication shortly. > On Apr 22, 2025, at 11:24 AM, Emad Omara <emad.om...@gmail.com> wrote: > > I acknowedge > > On Tue, Apr 22, 2025 at 11:23 AM Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > wrote: > Hi All, > > We want to make you aware of the updates noted below prior to publication. > We do not believe we have received an acknowledgement from any of the > authors. Once we hear from at least one of you, we will continue with the > publication process. > > Thank you, > RFC Editor/sg > > > On Apr 18, 2025, at 12:48 PM, Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > > wrote: > > > > Authors, > > > > While preparing this document for publication, please note that we made the > > following updates. We would appreciate an acknowledgement from at least > > one author before we continue with the publication process. > > > > a) Figure 2: The following lines were one character beyond the 72-character > > margin. To shorten the lines, we trimmed one space before the vertical > > bars (for the entire figure). > > > > Create account -----------------------> | Step 1 > > Initial Keying Material -------------------------> | Step 2 > > Add Bob to group ------------------------------------------> | Step 3 > > Welcome(Charlie) ------------------------------------------> | Step 4 > > > > > > b) We removed “n.d.” from the reference entry. > > > > [Tor] "The Tor Project", n.d., <https://torproject.org/>. > > > > > > You can view these updates in the following files: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html > > > > Diffs highlighting only the changes noted above: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastdiff.html > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side) > > > > AUTH48 diffs: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48diff.html > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by > > side) > > > > Comprehensive diffs: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > > > > > Thanks, > > RFC Editor/sg > > > > > >> On Apr 17, 2025, at 1:14 PM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote: > >> > >> Can you please provide updated XML so I can backport the change to the md? > >> > >> On Thu, Apr 17, 2025 at 1:13 PM Lynne Bartholomew > >> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >> Hi, Eric. > >> > >> We've just moved this document forward for publication. FYI that we > >> changed "suported" to "supported" in our latest copy. > >> > >> RFC Editor/lb > >> > >>> On Apr 15, 2025, at 1:34 PM, Lynne Bartholomew > >>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>> > >>> Great! So noted (https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750). We will > >>> prepare this document for publication shortly. > >>> > >>> Thank you! > >>> > >>> RFC Editor/lb > >>> > >>>> On Apr 15, 2025, at 10:53 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote: > >>>> > >>>> Approved. > >>>> > >>>> On Tue, Apr 15, 2025 at 10:01 AM Lynne Bartholomew > >>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>> Hi, Srinivas and Eric. > >>>> > >>>> Srinivas, we have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page: > >>>> > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750 > >>>> > >>>> Eric, here are the latest files. No new iteration. Please refresh your > >>>> browser: > >>>> > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html (side by side) > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48diff.html > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by > >>>> side) > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastdiff.html > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastrfcdiff.html (side by > >>>> side) > >>>> > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html > >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff2.html > >>>> > >>>> Eric, we will wait for your confirmed approval before noting it on the > >>>> AUTH48 status page and preparing this document for publication. > >>>> > >>>> Thank you! > >>>> > >>>> RFC Editor/lb > >>>> > >>>> > >>>>> On Apr 15, 2025, at 9:27 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote: > >>>>> > >>>>> RPC, > >>>>> > >>>>> Can you please supply the updated version with the correct month for > >>>>> final review? > >>>>> > >>>>> -Ekr > >>>> > >>>>> On Apr 14, 2025, at 1:01 PM, Srinivas Inguva <sing...@yahoo.com> wrote: > >>>>> > >>>>> Thanks! > >>>>> > >>>>> Approved 👍 > >>>>> > >>>>>> On Apr 14, 2025, at 11:29 AM, Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> wrote: > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Srinivas, > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Ping ;) > >>>>>> > >>>>>> spt > >>>>>> > >>>>>>> On Apr 14, 2025, at 1:44 PM, Lynne Bartholomew > >>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Hi, Benjamin, Sean, Emad, and Alan. > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Sean, thanks for confirming with Benjamin that we need approvals from > >>>>>>> each author. Thanks also for forwarding Alan's email. > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Benjamin, Emad, and Alan, we have noted your approvals on the AUTH48 > >>>>>>> status page: > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750 > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Thank you! > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>> On Apr 11, 2025, at 9:53 AM, Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> wrote: > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>> From Alan, > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>> ----- > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>> Begin forwarded message: > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>> From: Alan Duric <a...@duric.net> > >>>>>>>> Subject: Re: *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9750 > >>>>>>>> <draft-ietf-mls-architecture-15> for your review > >>>>>>>> Date: April 11, 2025 at 12:52:24 PM EDT > >>>>>>>> To: Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> > >>>>>>>> Cc: i...@beurdouche.com, emad.om...@gmail.com, sing...@yahoo.com, > >>>>>>>> Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>> Hey Sean, > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>> also approved from my side. > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>> Have a good weekend all! > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>> /alan > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>> ---- > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>> spt > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>> On Apr 11, 2025, at 9:48 AM, Emad Omara <emad.om...@gmail.com> > >>>>>>>>> wrote: > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>> I approve > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>> On Apr 11, 2025, at 9:47 AM, Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> wrote: > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>> You do - and thanks! > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>> spt > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>> On Apr 11, 2025, at 12:41 PM, Benjamin Beurdouche > >>>>>>>>> <i...@beurdouche.com> wrote: > >>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>> Not sure if all authors need to approve it or not... Just in case, > >>>>>>>>> I do approve… : ) > >>>>>>>>> Best, > >>>>>>>>> Benjamin > >>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> On 10 Apr 2025, at 19:45, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> I approve publication once the data is adjusted. > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> On Thu, Apr 10, 2025 at 9:36 AM Lynne Bartholomew > >>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric and coauthors. Eric, thanks for the pointer to the > >>>>>>>>>> latest XML file. > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> Please note that in order to avoid any mismatches between your > >>>>>>>>>> GitHub repository and our copies of the files, we will wait until > >>>>>>>>>> we prepare this document for publication before updating the > >>>>>>>>>> publication-month entry. > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> The latest files are posted here. Please refresh your browser: > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt > >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf > >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html > >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml > >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html > >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html (side by > >>>>>>>>>> side) > >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48diff.html > >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48rfcdiff.html > >>>>>>>>>> (side by side) > >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastdiff.html > >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastrfcdiff.html (side > >>>>>>>>>> by side) > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html > >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff2.html > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> Authors, please let us know whether you approve this document in > >>>>>>>>>> its current form or additional changes are needed. > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> Thanks again! > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>> On Apr 9, 2025, at 10:38 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>> It's in the GitHub repository in the same place as before: > >>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/blob/main/rfc9750-draft.xml > >>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Apr 9, 2025 at 9:54 AM Lynne Bartholomew > >>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric. > >>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>> Sorry -- does this mean that a new XML file is available > >>>>>>>>>>> somewhere? If yes, please provide a pointer to it. > >>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>> Thank you! > >>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb > >>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> On Apr 9, 2025, at 9:21 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> The PR was merged last week. > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Apr 9, 2025 at 9:18 AM Lynne Bartholomew > >>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Sean and Eric. > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> On March 26, Eric let us know that an updated XML was available > >>>>>>>>>>>> at > >>>>>>>>>>>> <https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/blob/main/rfc9750-draft.xml>. > >>>>>>>>>>>> We fetched the March 26 XML, created the output files, and > >>>>>>>>>>>> posted them on March 31 (10:32 AM PST). We had some follow-up > >>>>>>>>>>>> questions, and Eric replied (also March 31) with "I have created > >>>>>>>>>>>> a PR to address your comments and detailed how they were > >>>>>>>>>>>> addressed." We also asked for and received AD approval re. some > >>>>>>>>>>>> of the changes. > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> It looks like we now need the following: > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> * The latest XML file from Eric (incorporating the March 31 > >>>>>>>>>>>> updates), so that we can create and post the latest output files > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> * Approvals from authors (see > >>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750) if no further updates > >>>>>>>>>>>> are needed > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you! > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> On Apr 9, 2025, at 8:46 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> Lynne, > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> Can you advise on the status? When should we expect "final" > >>>>>>>>>>>>> versions of the document to be up for review/approval? > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Apr 3, 2025, at 1:11 PM, Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>> Are we waiting on a new version that incorporates ekr’s > >>>>>>>>>>>>>> updates? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>> spt > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Apr 2, 2025 at 8:32 AM Lynne Bartholomew > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Paul. So noted: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750 > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you! > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Apr 2, 2025, at 5:23 AM, Paul Wouters > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <paul.wout...@aiven.io> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Approved as AD - these were brought to attention of the WG. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Paul > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Mar 31, 2025 at 2:13 PM Lynne Bartholomew > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric. Thanks for the quick updates! > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mar 31, 2025, at 10:53 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have created a PR to address your comments and detailed > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> how they were addressed. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/pull/332 > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1. Should 'rotation of "last resort" KeyPackage.' be > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 'rotation of the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "last resort" KeyPackage.'? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Yes, I have changed it. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2. Apologies for missing this earlier: Should > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "ciphersuite" be "cipher > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> suite" in running text, per usage in RFC 9420, or OK to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> leave as > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> is? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Yes, I have changed it. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 3. Regarding "A Delivery Service (DS), which can receive > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> distribute messages between group members. In the case of > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> group > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> messaging, the delivery service ...": Would you like > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "delivery > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> service" to be "Delivery Service" (which we still see used > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> several times elsewhere) or "DS"? (We also see > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "Authentication > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Service" spelled out in Sections 8.4.3 and 8.4.3.1.) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have changed "delivery service" to "DS". I changed to AS > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 8.4.3.1 but I think it makes the most sense as-is in the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> first > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> use in 8.4.3. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 4. Should "prevents selective attack on" be "prevents > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> selective > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> attacks on"? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> It is correct as is. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 5. Should "Handshake or application message" be "handshake > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> or > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> application message", per "handshake" as used elsewhere? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Fixed. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 6. As we are now following CMOS guidance to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> initial-capitalize > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> prepositions of five or more letters in titles, would you > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> consider > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> changing "against" to "Against" in "No Protection against > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Replay by > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Insiders"? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Changed. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Mar 31, 2025 at 10:32 AM Lynne Bartholomew > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric and *AD (Paul or Deb). > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Eric, thank you for making the additional updates and for > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the latest XML file! We have follow-up items for you and > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> for the AD, as flagged below. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> * AD: It is difficult for us to determine whether or not > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> some of the new updates to this document might be > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> considered "beyond editorial". Please review the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> following, and let us know any concerns. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1. update to Section 2.1, Paragraph 3 (re. LeafNode) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2. updated "... used only once, and init_key ..." sentence > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in Section 5.1 > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 3. new Recommendation near the end of Section 5.1 > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 4. update to the "A policy for when two credentials" bullet > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in Section 7 > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 5. removal of the last paragraph of Section 8.1.4 > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 6. change from "to attack forward security" to "to attack > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> post-compromise security" in Section 8.4.2 > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 7. new Section 8.6 ("No Protection against Replay by > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Insiders") > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Eric: A few follow-up items for you: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1. Should 'rotation of "last resort" KeyPackage.' be > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 'rotation of the "last resort" KeyPackage.'? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2. Apologies for missing this earlier: Should > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "ciphersuite" be "cipher suite" in running text, per usage > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in RFC 9420, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> or OK to leave as is? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 3. Regarding "A Delivery Service (DS), which can receive > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and distribute messages > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> between group members. In the case of group messaging, the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> delivery service ...": > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Would you like "delivery service" to be "Delivery Service" > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (which we still see used several times elsewhere) or "DS"? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (We also see "Authentication Service" spelled out in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Sections 8.4.3 and 8.4.3.1.) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 4. Should "prevents selective attack on" be "prevents > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> selective attacks on"? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 5. Should "Handshake or application message" be "handshake > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> or application message", per "handshake" as used elsewhere? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 6. As we are now following CMOS guidance to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> initial-capitalize prepositions of five or more letters in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> titles, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> would you consider changing "against" to "Against" in "No > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Protection against Replay by Insiders"? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> We have posted the latest files here. Please refresh your > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> browser: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (side by side) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48diff.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48rfcdiff.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (side by side) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff2.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks again! > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mar 26, 2025, at 1:04 PM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have now completed my review and made final edits. All > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> open issues for this version are closed. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The updated XML can be found at: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/blob/main/rfc9750-draft.xml > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Tue, Mar 25, 2025 at 8:42 AM Lynne Bartholomew > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Many thanks for addressing our questions and making the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> file updates! We'll look forward to hearing from you > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> after you've done your final review. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mar 24, 2025, at 2:10 PM, Eric Rescorla > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <e...@rtfm.com> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Update: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have now gone through and addressed all the RPC > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> comments and updated the relevant XML and md accordingly. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> My next step will be to actually read the document top to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> bottom for final review. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Mar 3, 2025 at 8:59 AM Lynne Bartholomew > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric. So noted. Thank you! > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mar 3, 2025, at 6:03 AM, Eric Rescorla > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <e...@rtfm.com> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have created issues corresponding to the inline RPC > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> comments/questions and have tagged Lynn in them so she > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> can see progress. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Feb 26, 2025 at 9:51 AM Jean Mahoney > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Eric, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On 2/25/25 3:14 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Update: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have backported the copy-edit changes I approve of > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and reverted the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rest in the XML, which can be found here: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/pull/273 > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://github.com/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> mlswg/mls-architecture/pull/273> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/ekr/mls-architecture/blob/merge_rpc_comments/rfc9750- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> draft.xml <https://github.com/ekr/mls-architecture/blob/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> merge_rpc_comments/rfc9750-draft.xml> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I will next go through the RPC's substantive questions > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and file GitHub > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> issues for each of them so we can work through them. Is > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> there someone > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> you would like tagged on these issues? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Lynne Bartholomew will be the RFC Editor handling this > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> document's > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> AUTH48. Her GitHub username is lbartholomew-rpc. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Best regards, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Jean > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Tue, Feb 25, 2025 at 9:46 AM Eric Rescorla > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <e...@rtfm.com > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:e...@rtfm.com>> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Per private communication with Alan: a...@duric.net > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:a...@duric.net> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Tue, Feb 25, 2025 at 7:50 AM Paul Wouters > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <paul.wout...@aiven.io > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:paul.wout...@aiven.io>> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> datatracker says alan.du...@globalipsound.com > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:alan.du...@globalipsound.com>, added to CC: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Paul > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Tue, Feb 25, 2025 at 10:47 AM Jean Mahoney > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:jmaho...@staff.rfc- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org>> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Ekr, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On 2/24/25 8:32 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Feb 24, 2025 at 4:12 PM Jean Mahoney > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <jmaho...@staff.rfc- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org <http://editor.org> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org>>> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Ekr, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On 2/24/25 5:30 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi folks, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> This document was prepared in markdown, so it > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> would be much more > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> convenient to do > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the editorial phase of auth48 in markdown rather > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> than in XML, as I > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> understand has been > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> done for a number of recent documents. I > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> understand that a fair > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> amount > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> of work has > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> already happened here, but is there a possibility > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> of getting a > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> copy of > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the markdown > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> with just the copy edit changes? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [JM] As draft-ietf-mls-architecture is a long > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> document (41 pages PDF), > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> it would be time consuming to port the edits into > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> markdown at this time. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Indeed. I've made a repo for the XML [0]. It will take > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> me > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> some time to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> backport the changes to the .md file and provide > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> updated XML. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [JM] Understood, and the RPC is aiming to accept > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> md as a > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> submission > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> format in the future. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Is there another address for Alan Duric? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> a...@wire.com > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:a...@wire.com> bounced. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Best regards, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Jean > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [0] https://github.com/ekr/rfc9750 <https://github.com/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ekr/rfc9750> <https://github.com/ekr/rfc9750 > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> github.com/ekr/rfc9750>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> It would be much easier to start edits in markdown in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> a future > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> document. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> If you have another markdown file that will be > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> entering the queue soon, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> please let us know, and we can provide an updated > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> markdown file at the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> beginning of AUTH48 as part of one of our process > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> experiments. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks and best regards, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/jm > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Feb 24, 2025 at 3:16 PM <rfc-editor@rfc- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org <mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> edi...@rfc-editor.org>> <mailto:rfc- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:rfc-> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:rfc- <mailto:rfc->> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> edi...@rfc-editor.org <mailto:editor@rfc- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org> <mailto:edi...@rfc-editor.org > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:edi...@rfc-editor.org>>>> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> *****IMPORTANT***** > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Updated 2025/02/24 > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Author(s): > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -------------- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Instructions for Completing AUTH48 > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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Editorial changes do not require > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> approval from a stream > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> manager. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Approving for publication > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -------------------------- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> To approve your RFC for publication, please > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> reply to this > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> email stating > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> that you approve this RFC for publication. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please use ‘REPLY > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ALL’, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> as all the parties CCed on this message need > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> to see your > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> approval. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Files > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ----- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The files are available here: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc- <https://www.rfc-> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml <http://editor.org/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> authors/rfc9750.xml>> <https://www.rfc- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml <http://editor.org/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> authors/rfc9750.xml> <http://editor.org/authors/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfc9750.xml>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc- <https://www.rfc-> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html <http://editor.org/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> authors/rfc9750.html>> <https://www.rfc- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html <http:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://editor.org/authors/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://editor.org/authors/> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfc9750.html>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc- <https://www.rfc-> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf <http://editor.org/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> authors/rfc9750.pdf>> <https://www.rfc- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf <http://editor.org/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> authors/rfc9750.pdf> <http://editor.org/authors/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfc9750.pdf>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc- <https://www.rfc-> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt <http://editor.org/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> authors/rfc9750.txt>> <https://www.rfc- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt <http://editor.org/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> authors/rfc9750.txt> <http://editor.org/authors/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfc9750.txt>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Diff file of the text: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> diff.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> diff.html> <https:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html <http:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.rfc- <http://www.rfc-> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://editor.org/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> authors/rfc9750-diff.html>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfcdiff.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfcdiff.html> <https:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.rfc- <http://www.rfc-> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html <http:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html>>> (side > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> by side) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Diff of the XML: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> xmldiff1.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> xmldiff1.html> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> xmldiff1.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> xmldiff1.html>> <https:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.rfc- <http://www.rfc-> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html <http:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Tracking progress > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ----------------- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The details of the AUTH48 status of your > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> document are here: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750 > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc- <https://www.rfc-> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/auth48/rfc9750 <http://editor.org/auth48/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfc9750>> <https://www.rfc- <https://www.rfc-> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/auth48/rfc9750 <http://editor.org/ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> auth48/rfc9750> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://editor.org/auth48/rfc9750 <http:// > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/auth48/rfc9750>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please let us know if you have any questions. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your cooperation, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -------------------------------------- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC 9750 (draft-ietf-mls-architecture-15) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Title : The Messaging Layer > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Security (MLS) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Architecture > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Author(s) : B. Beurdouche, E. Rescorla, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> E. Omara, S. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Inguva, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> A. Duric > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> WG Chair(s) : Nick Sullivan, Sean Turner > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Area Director(s) : Deb Cooley, Paul Wouters > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>> > >>>> > >>> > >> > > >
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