Thank you Emad - we will continue with publication shortly.

> On Apr 22, 2025, at 11:24 AM, Emad Omara <emad.om...@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> I acknowedge 
> 
> On Tue, Apr 22, 2025 at 11:23 AM Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> 
> wrote:
> Hi All,
> 
> We want to make you aware of the updates noted below prior to publication.  
> We do not believe we have received an acknowledgement from any of the 
> authors.  Once we hear from at least one of you, we will continue with the 
> publication process.
> 
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/sg
> 
> > On Apr 18, 2025, at 12:48 PM, Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> 
> > wrote:
> > 
> > Authors,
> > 
> > While preparing this document for publication, please note that we made the 
> > following updates.  We would appreciate an acknowledgement from at least 
> > one author before we continue with the publication process. 
> > 
> > a) Figure 2: The following lines were one character beyond the 72-character 
> > margin.  To shorten the lines, we trimmed one space before the vertical 
> > bars (for the entire figure).  
> > 
> >          Create account ----------------------->                | Step 1
> >          Initial Keying Material ------------------------->     | Step 2
> > Add Bob to group ------------------------------------------>     | Step 3
> > Welcome(Charlie) ------------------------------------------>     | Step 4
> > 
> > 
> > b) We removed “n.d.” from the reference entry.
> > 
> > [Tor]      "The Tor Project", n.d., <https://torproject.org/>.
> > 
> > 
> > You can view these updates in the following files: 
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html
> > 
> > Diffs highlighting only the changes noted above: 
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastdiff.html
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side)
> > 
> > AUTH48 diffs: 
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48diff.html
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
> > side)
> > 
> > Comprehensive diffs: 
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> > 
> > 
> > Thanks,
> > RFC Editor/sg
> > 
> > 
> >> On Apr 17, 2025, at 1:14 PM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
> >> 
> >> Can you please provide updated XML so I can backport the change to the md?
> >> 
> >> On Thu, Apr 17, 2025 at 1:13 PM Lynne Bartholomew 
> >> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >> Hi, Eric.
> >> 
> >> We've just moved this document forward for publication.  FYI that we 
> >> changed "suported" to "supported" in our latest copy.
> >> 
> >> RFC Editor/lb
> >> 
> >>> On Apr 15, 2025, at 1:34 PM, Lynne Bartholomew 
> >>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>> 
> >>> Great!  So noted (https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750).  We will 
> >>> prepare this document for publication shortly.
> >>> 
> >>> Thank you!
> >>> 
> >>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>> 
> >>>> On Apr 15, 2025, at 10:53 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
> >>>> 
> >>>> Approved.
> >>>> 
> >>>> On Tue, Apr 15, 2025 at 10:01 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
> >>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>>> Hi, Srinivas and Eric.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Srinivas, we have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:
> >>>> 
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750
> >>>> 
> >>>> Eric, here are the latest files.  No new iteration.  Please refresh your 
> >>>> browser:
> >>>> 
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48diff.html
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
> >>>> side)
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastdiff.html
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastrfcdiff.html (side by 
> >>>> side)
> >>>> 
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff2.html
> >>>> 
> >>>> Eric, we will wait for your confirmed approval before noting it on the 
> >>>> AUTH48 status page and preparing this document for publication.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Thank you!
> >>>> 
> >>>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>>> On Apr 15, 2025, at 9:27 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> RPC, 
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Can you please supply the updated version with the correct month for 
> >>>>> final review?
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> -Ekr
> >>>> 
> >>>>> On Apr 14, 2025, at 1:01 PM, Srinivas Inguva <sing...@yahoo.com> wrote:
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Thanks!
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Approved 👍
> >>>>> 
> >>>>>> On Apr 14, 2025, at 11:29 AM, Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> wrote:
> >>>>>> 
> >>>>>> Srinivas,
> >>>>>> 
> >>>>>> Ping ;)
> >>>>>> 
> >>>>>> spt
> >>>>>> 
> >>>>>>> On Apr 14, 2025, at 1:44 PM, Lynne Bartholomew 
> >>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>> Hi, Benjamin, Sean, Emad, and Alan.
> >>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>> Sean, thanks for confirming with Benjamin that we need approvals from 
> >>>>>>> each author.  Thanks also for forwarding Alan's email.
> >>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>> Benjamin, Emad, and Alan, we have noted your approvals on the AUTH48 
> >>>>>>> status page:
> >>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750
> >>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>> On Apr 11, 2025, at 9:53 AM, Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> wrote:
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>> From Alan,
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>> -----
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>> Begin forwarded message:
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>> From: Alan Duric <a...@duric.net>
> >>>>>>>> Subject: Re: *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9750 
> >>>>>>>> <draft-ietf-mls-architecture-15> for your review
> >>>>>>>> Date: April 11, 2025 at 12:52:24 PM EDT
> >>>>>>>> To: Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com>
> >>>>>>>> Cc: i...@beurdouche.com, emad.om...@gmail.com, sing...@yahoo.com, 
> >>>>>>>> Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com>
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>> Hey Sean,
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>> also approved from my side.
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>> Have a good weekend all!
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>> /alan
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>> ----
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>> spt
> >>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>> On Apr 11, 2025, at 9:48 AM, Emad Omara <emad.om...@gmail.com> 
> >>>>>>>>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>> I approve
> >>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>> On Apr 11, 2025, at 9:47 AM, Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> wrote:
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>> You do - and thanks!
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>> spt
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>> On Apr 11, 2025, at 12:41 PM, Benjamin Beurdouche 
> >>>>>>>>> <i...@beurdouche.com> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>> Not sure if all authors need to approve it or not... Just in case, 
> >>>>>>>>> I do approve… : )
> >>>>>>>>> Best,
> >>>>>>>>> Benjamin
> >>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>> On 10 Apr 2025, at 19:45, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>> I approve publication once the data is adjusted.
> >>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>> On Thu, Apr 10, 2025 at 9:36 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
> >>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric and coauthors.  Eric, thanks for the pointer to the 
> >>>>>>>>>> latest XML file.
> >>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>> Please note that in order to avoid any mismatches between your 
> >>>>>>>>>> GitHub repository and our copies of the files, we will wait until 
> >>>>>>>>>> we prepare this document for publication before updating the 
> >>>>>>>>>> publication-month entry.
> >>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>> The latest files are posted here.  Please refresh your browser:
> >>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html (side by 
> >>>>>>>>>> side)
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48rfcdiff.html 
> >>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastrfcdiff.html (side 
> >>>>>>>>>> by side)
> >>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff2.html
> >>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>> Authors, please let us know whether you approve this document in 
> >>>>>>>>>> its current form or additional changes are needed.
> >>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>> Thanks again!
> >>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>> On Apr 9, 2025, at 10:38 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>> It's in the GitHub repository in the same place as before:
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/blob/main/rfc9750-draft.xml
> >>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Apr 9, 2025 at 9:54 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
> >>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric.
> >>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>> Sorry -- does this mean that a new XML file is available 
> >>>>>>>>>>> somewhere?  If yes, please provide a pointer to it.
> >>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> On Apr 9, 2025, at 9:21 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> The PR was merged last week.
> >>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Apr 9, 2025 at 9:18 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Sean and Eric.
> >>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> On March 26, Eric let us know that an updated XML was available 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> at 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> <https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/blob/main/rfc9750-draft.xml>.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>   We fetched the March 26 XML, created the output files, and 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> posted them on March 31 (10:32 AM PST).  We had some follow-up 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> questions, and Eric replied (also March 31) with "I have created 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> a PR to address your comments and detailed how they were 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> addressed."  We also asked for and received AD approval re. some 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> of the changes.
> >>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> It looks like we now need the following:
> >>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> * The latest XML file from Eric (incorporating the March 31 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> updates), so that we can create and post the latest output files
> >>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> * Approvals from authors (see 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750) if no further updates 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> are needed
> >>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> On Apr 9, 2025, at 8:46 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Lynne,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Can you advise on the status? When should we expect "final" 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> versions of the document to be up for review/approval?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Apr 3, 2025, at 1:11 PM, Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> Are we waiting on a new version that incorporates ekr’s 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> updates?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> spt
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Apr 2, 2025 at 8:32 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Paul.  So noted:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Apr 2, 2025, at 5:23 AM, Paul Wouters 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <paul.wout...@aiven.io> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Approved as AD - these were brought to attention of the WG.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Paul
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Mar 31, 2025 at 2:13 PM Lynne Bartholomew 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric.  Thanks for the quick updates!
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mar 31, 2025, at 10:53 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have created a PR to address your comments and detailed 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> how they were addressed.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/pull/332
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1. Should 'rotation of "last resort" KeyPackage.' be 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 'rotation of the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "last resort" KeyPackage.'?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Yes, I have changed it.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2. Apologies for missing this earlier: Should 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "ciphersuite" be "cipher
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> suite" in running text, per usage in RFC 9420, or OK to 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> leave as
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> is?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Yes, I have changed it.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 3. Regarding "A Delivery Service (DS), which can receive 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> distribute messages between group members.  In the case of 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> group
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> messaging, the delivery service ...": Would you like 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "delivery
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> service" to be "Delivery Service" (which we still see used
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> several times elsewhere) or "DS"?  (We also see 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "Authentication
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Service" spelled out in Sections 8.4.3 and 8.4.3.1.)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have changed "delivery service" to "DS". I changed to AS 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 8.4.3.1 but I think it makes the most sense as-is in the 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> first
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> use in 8.4.3.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 4. Should "prevents selective attack on" be "prevents 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> selective
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> attacks on"?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> It is correct as is.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 5. Should "Handshake or application message" be "handshake 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> or
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> application message", per "handshake" as used elsewhere?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Fixed.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 6. As we are now following CMOS guidance to 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> initial-capitalize
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> prepositions of five or more letters in titles, would you 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> consider
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> changing "against" to "Against" in "No Protection against 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Replay by
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Insiders"?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Changed.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Mar 31, 2025 at 10:32 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric and *AD (Paul or Deb).
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Eric, thank you for making the additional updates and for 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the latest XML file!  We have follow-up items for you and 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> for the AD, as flagged below.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> * AD:  It is difficult for us to determine whether or not 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> some of the new updates to this document might be 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> considered "beyond editorial".  Please review the 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> following, and let us know any concerns.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1. update to Section 2.1, Paragraph 3 (re. LeafNode)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2. updated "... used only once, and init_key ..." sentence 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in Section 5.1
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 3. new Recommendation near the end of Section 5.1
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 4. update to the "A policy for when two credentials" bullet 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in Section 7
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 5. removal of the last paragraph of Section 8.1.4
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 6. change from "to attack forward security" to "to attack 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> post-compromise security" in Section 8.4.2
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 7. new Section 8.6 ("No Protection against Replay by 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Insiders")
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Eric:  A few follow-up items for you:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1. Should 'rotation of "last resort" KeyPackage.' be 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 'rotation of the "last resort" KeyPackage.'?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2. Apologies for missing this earlier:  Should 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "ciphersuite" be "cipher suite" in running text, per usage 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in RFC 9420,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> or OK to leave as is?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 3. Regarding "A Delivery Service (DS), which can receive 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and distribute messages
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> between group members.  In the case of group messaging, the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> delivery service ...":
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Would you like "delivery service" to be "Delivery Service" 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (which we still see used several times elsewhere) or "DS"?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (We also see "Authentication Service" spelled out in 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Sections 8.4.3 and 8.4.3.1.)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 4. Should "prevents selective attack on" be "prevents 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> selective attacks on"?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 5. Should "Handshake or application message" be "handshake 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> or application message", per "handshake" as used elsewhere?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 6. As we are now following CMOS guidance to 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> initial-capitalize prepositions of five or more letters in 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> titles,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> would you consider changing "against" to "Against" in "No 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Protection against Replay by Insiders"?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> We have posted the latest files here.  Please refresh your 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> browser:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  (side by side)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff2.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks again!
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mar 26, 2025, at 1:04 PM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have now completed my review and made final edits. All 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> open issues for this version are closed.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The updated XML can be found at:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/blob/main/rfc9750-draft.xml
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Tue, Mar 25, 2025 at 8:42 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Many thanks for addressing our questions and making the 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> file updates!  We'll look forward to hearing from you 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> after you've done your final review.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mar 24, 2025, at 2:10 PM, Eric Rescorla 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Update:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have now gone through and addressed all the RPC 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> comments and updated the relevant XML and md accordingly.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> My next step will be to actually read the document top to 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> bottom for final review.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Mar 3, 2025 at 8:59 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric.  So noted.  Thank you!
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mar 3, 2025, at 6:03 AM, Eric Rescorla 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have created issues corresponding to the inline RPC 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> comments/questions and have tagged Lynn in them so she 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> can see progress.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Feb 26, 2025 at 9:51 AM Jean Mahoney 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Eric,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On 2/25/25 3:14 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Update:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have backported the copy-edit changes I approve of 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and reverted the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rest in the XML, which can be found here:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/pull/273 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://github.com/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> mlswg/mls-architecture/pull/273>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/ekr/mls-architecture/blob/merge_rpc_comments/rfc9750-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> draft.xml <https://github.com/ekr/mls-architecture/blob/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> merge_rpc_comments/rfc9750-draft.xml>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I will next go through the RPC's substantive questions 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and file GitHub
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> issues for each of them so we can work through them. Is 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> there someone
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> you would like tagged on these issues?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Lynne Bartholomew will be the RFC Editor handling this 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> document's
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> AUTH48. Her GitHub username is lbartholomew-rpc.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Best regards,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Jean
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Tue, Feb 25, 2025 at 9:46 AM Eric Rescorla 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <e...@rtfm.com
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:e...@rtfm.com>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Per private communication with Alan: a...@duric.net
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:a...@duric.net>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Tue, Feb 25, 2025 at 7:50 AM Paul Wouters 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <paul.wout...@aiven.io
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:paul.wout...@aiven.io>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>    datatracker says alan.du...@globalipsound.com
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>    <mailto:alan.du...@globalipsound.com>, added to CC:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>    Paul
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>    On Tue, Feb 25, 2025 at 10:47 AM Jean Mahoney
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>    <jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:jmaho...@staff.rfc-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>    editor.org>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        Hi Ekr,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        On 2/24/25 8:32 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Feb 24, 2025 at 4:12 PM Jean Mahoney
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <jmaho...@staff.rfc-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org <http://editor.org>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <mailto:jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <mailto:jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org>>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Ekr,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On 2/24/25 5:30 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi folks,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> This document was prepared in markdown, so it
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        would be much more
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> convenient to do
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the editorial phase of auth48 in markdown rather
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        than in XML, as I
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> understand has been
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> done for a number of recent documents. I
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        understand that a fair
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> amount
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> of work has
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> already happened here, but is there a possibility
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        of getting a
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> copy of
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the markdown
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> with just the copy edit changes?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [JM] As draft-ietf-mls-architecture is a long
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        document (41 pages PDF),
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> it would be time consuming to port the edits into
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        markdown at this time.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Indeed. I've made a repo for the XML [0]. It will take 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> me
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        some time to
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> backport the changes to the .md file and provide 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> updated XML.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        [JM] Understood, and the RPC is aiming to accept 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> md as a
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        submission
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        format in the future.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        Is there another address for Alan Duric? 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> a...@wire.com
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <mailto:a...@wire.com> bounced.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        Best regards,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        Jean
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [0] https://github.com/ekr/rfc9750 <https://github.com/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        ekr/rfc9750> <https://github.com/ekr/rfc9750 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        github.com/ekr/rfc9750>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> It would be much easier to start edits in markdown in
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        a future
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> document.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> If you have another markdown file that will be
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        entering the queue soon,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> please let us know, and we can provide an updated
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        markdown file at the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> beginning of AUTH48 as part of one of our process
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        experiments.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks and best regards,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/jm
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Feb 24, 2025 at 3:16 PM <rfc-editor@rfc-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        editor.org <mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        edi...@rfc-editor.org>> <mailto:rfc- 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:rfc->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <mailto:rfc- <mailto:rfc->>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> edi...@rfc-editor.org <mailto:editor@rfc-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        editor.org> <mailto:edi...@rfc-editor.org
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <mailto:edi...@rfc-editor.org>>>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Updated 2025/02/24
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Author(s):
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> --------------
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Instructions for Completing AUTH48
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
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> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
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> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Files
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> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The files are available here:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml
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> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml <http://editor.org/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        authors/rfc9750.xml>> <https://www.rfc- 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <https://www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml <http://editor.org/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        authors/rfc9750.xml> <http://editor.org/authors/ 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        editor.org/authors/>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfc9750.xml>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html <http://editor.org/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        authors/rfc9750.html>> <https://www.rfc- 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <https://www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html <http://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://editor.org/authors/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <http://editor.org/authors/>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfc9750.html>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf <http://editor.org/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        authors/rfc9750.pdf>> <https://www.rfc- 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <https://www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf <http://editor.org/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        authors/rfc9750.pdf> <http://editor.org/authors/ 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        editor.org/authors/>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfc9750.pdf>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt <http://editor.org/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        authors/rfc9750.txt>> <https://www.rfc- 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <https://www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt <http://editor.org/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        authors/rfc9750.txt> <http://editor.org/authors/ 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        editor.org/authors/>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfc9750.txt>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Diff file of the text:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        diff.html 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        diff.html> <https://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html <http://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <http://www.rfc- <http://www.rfc->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://editor.org/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        authors/rfc9750-diff.html>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        rfcdiff.html 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        rfcdiff.html> <https://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <http://www.rfc- <http://www.rfc->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html <http://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html>>> (side 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> by side)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Diff of the XML:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        xmldiff1.html 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        xmldiff1.html>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        xmldiff1.html 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        xmldiff1.html>> <https://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <http://www.rfc- <http://www.rfc->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html <http://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Tracking progress
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -----------------
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The details of the AUTH48 status of your
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        document are here:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        <https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/auth48/rfc9750 <http://editor.org/auth48/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        rfc9750>> <https://www.rfc- <https://www.rfc-> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/auth48/rfc9750 <http://editor.org/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        auth48/rfc9750> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://editor.org/auth48/rfc9750 <http://
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        editor.org/auth48/rfc9750>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please let us know if you have any questions.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your cooperation,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> --------------------------------------
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC 9750 (draft-ietf-mls-architecture-15)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Title            : The Messaging Layer
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        Security (MLS)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Architecture
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Author(s)        : B. Beurdouche, E. Rescorla,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>        E. Omara, S.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Inguva,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> A. Duric
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Nick Sullivan, Sean Turner
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Area Director(s) : Deb Cooley, Paul Wouters
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>>> 
> >>>>>>> 
> >>>>>> 
> >>>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>> 
> >> 
> > 
> 

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