I approve. Deb
On Wed, May 7, 2025 at 10:40 AM Madison Church <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > Hi Authors, *Debbie, > > *Debbie - As responsible AD for this document, please review the removal > of RFC 7519 from the Normative References section and let us know if you > approve. > > Authors - Thank you for your reply! We have updated the files as requested > and all of our questions have been addressed. > > Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not > make changes once it has been published as an RFC. Contact us with any > further updates or with your approval of the document in its current form. > We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in the > publication process. > > The files have been posted here (please refresh): > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9782.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9782.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9782.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9782.xml > > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9782-diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9782-rfcdiff.html (side by side) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9782-auth48diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9782-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by > side) > > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9782 > > Thank you, > RFC Editor/mc > > > On May 3, 2025, at 3:07 PM, Thomas Fossati <thomas.foss...@linaro.org> > wrote: > > > > Hi Madison, > > > > On Tue, 29 Apr 2025 at 20:21, Madison Church > > <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >> 1) Thank you for your explanation. We have updated the following usage > of <tt> for consistency: > >> <tt>eat_profile</tt> claim to "eat_profile" claim (per use in > RFC-to-be-9711) > >> <tt>eat_profile</tt> parameter to "eat_profile" parameter > >> +cwt to <tt>+cwt</tt> > >> > >> Note that the following terms use <tt> tags in running text but do not > contain <tt> tags in Tables 1 and 2. We have left each instance as is. > >> application/eat+cwt > >> application/eat-ucs+json > >> application/eat-ucs+cbor > >> > >> Please review the updates regarding <tt> tagging closely and let us > know if any further updates are needed. > > > > Works for us, thanks. > > > >>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] We note that RFC 7519 is not cited anywhere in this > >>>> document. Please let us know if there is an appropriate place in the > >>>> text to reference this RFC. Otherwise, we will remove it from the > >>>> Normative References section. --> > >>> > >>> OK with removing. JWT is brought in "transitively" through EAT. > >> > >> 2) Upon further review, we found a place to cite this reference in the > text instead of removing it from the normative references entirely. Please > review the updated text below and let us know if you approve (or if you > would prefer to remove the reference as originally suggested). > >> > >> Original: > >> Figure 2 illustrates the six EAT wire formats and how they relate to > >> each other. [EAT] defines four of them (CWT, JWT and Detached EAT > >> Bundle in its JSON and CBOR flavours), whilst [UCCS] defines UCCS and > >> UJCS. > >> > >> Current: > >> Figure 2 illustrates the six EAT wire formats and how they relate to > >> each other. [EAT] defines four of them (CBOR Web Token (CWT), JSON > >> Web Token (JWT) [JWT], and the detached EAT bundle in its JSON and > >> CBOR flavours), while [UCCS] defines the Unprotected CWT Claims Set > >> (UCCS) and Unprotected JWT Claims Sets (UJCS). > > > > We prefer it without the JWT reference. > > The media types are for EAT, UCCS and UJCS, not JWT. > > A clickable reference in that opening sentence leads away from that. > > > > We think the document is OK without a JWT reference. > > The CWT reference is just there for the “+cwt” registration, not > > because it is needed for any of the EAT media type registrations. > > > > cheers, thanks! > > Thomas, Henk & Laurence >
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