Hi Sandy, Thanks for your work on this document. I also approve its publication as RFC.
Best regards, Tao -----邮件原件----- 发件人: Dongjie (Jimmy) <jie.dong=40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org> 发送时间: 2025年5月22日 15:14 收件人: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> 抄送: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; Wanghaibo (Rainsword) <rainsword.w...@huawei.com>; ketant.i...@gmail.com; Hantao(hantao,Datacom) <han...@huawei.com>; chen....@zte.com.cn; idr-...@ietf.org; idr-cha...@ietf.org; sha...@ndzh.com; John Scudder <j...@juniper.net>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org 主题: RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9723 <draft-ietf-idr-cpr-08> for your review Hi Sandy, All the changes look good to me, thanks. I approve its publication as RFC. Best regards, Jie > -----Original Message----- > From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > Sent: Thursday, May 22, 2025 1:49 AM > To: Dongjie (Jimmy) <jie.dong=40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org> > Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; Wanghaibo (Rainsword) > <rainsword.w...@huawei.com>; ketant.i...@gmail.com; > Hantao(hantao,Datacom) <han...@huawei.com>; chen....@zte.com.cn; > idr-...@ietf.org; idr-cha...@ietf.org; sha...@ndzh.com; John Scudder > <j...@juniper.net>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9723 <draft-ietf-idr-cpr-08> for your > review > > Hi Dongjie, > > Thank you for your reply. We have updated the document as described > below and posted the files here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9723.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9723.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9723.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9723.xml > > AUTH48 diffs: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9723-auth48diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9723-auth48rfcdiff.html (side > by > side) > > Comprehensive diffs: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9723-diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9723-rfcdiff.html (side by > side) > > Please review and let us know if any additional updates are needed or > if you approve the RFC for publication. > > Thank you, > RFC Editor/sg > > > > On May 14, 2025, at 7:54 AM, Dongjie (Jimmy) > <jie.dong=40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: > > > > Hi RFC Editor, > > > > Thanks for this mail. Please find my replies inline. > > > > > >> -----Original Message----- > >> From: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> > >> Sent: Tuesday, May 13, 2025 4:41 AM > >> To: Wanghaibo (Rainsword) <rainsword.w...@huawei.com>; Dongjie > >> (Jimmy) <jie.d...@huawei.com>; ketant.i...@gmail.com; > >> Hantao(hantao,Datacom) <han...@huawei.com>; chen....@zte.com.cn > >> Cc: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; idr-...@ietf.org; > >> idr-cha...@ietf.org; sha...@ndzh.com; j...@juniper.net; > >> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > >> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9723 <draft-ietf-idr-cpr-08> for > >> your review > >> > >> Authors, > >> > >> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > >> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > >> > >> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that > >> appear in the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. > >> --> > > > > Please add: intent-aware routing as keyword. > > > > > >> > >> 2) <!-- [rfced] RFC 8277 doesn't appear to use the term "BGP > >> Labeled > Unicast" > >> or "BGP-LU." For clarity, may we add text to draw a more clear > >> connection, for example, "the mechanism described in RFC 8277 is > >> referred to BGP-LU although that term does not actually appear in > >> the > document." > >> > >> Original: > >> The inter-domain path can be established using either Multi-Protocol > >> Label Switching (MPLS) or IP data plane. In MPLS-based networks, the > >> usual inter-domain approach is to establish an end-to-end Label- > >> Switched Path (LSP) based on the BGP Labeled Unicast (BGP-LU) > >> mechanism as defined in [RFC8277]. > >> --> > >> > > > > Thanks for catching this. Maybe the second sentence could be rephrased as: > > > > New: > > In MPLS-based networks, the usual inter-domain approach is to > > establish > an end-to-end Label-Switched Path (LSP) based on the mechanism as > defined in [RFC8277] (which is usually referred to as BGP-LU). > > > >> > >> 3) <!-- [rfced] Would it be correct to change "and" to "whereby"? > >> > >> Original: > >> One way to achieve this is by splitting the base SRv6 locator of the > >> node into N sub-locators, and these sub-locators are Colored Prefixes > >> associated with different intents. > >> --> > > > > Yes, that change looks good. > > > >> > >> > >> 4) <!-- [rfced] RFC 2545 does not contain the term "IPv6 unicast > >> Address Family/Subsequent Address Family (AFI/SAFI = 2/1)", "AFI", > >> or "SAFI". We see one instance of "Address Family" and a couple > >> instances of > "unicast address". > >> Please consider how the text and citation can be clarified. > >> > >> In a multi-AS IPv6 network, the IPv6 unicast Address Family/ > >> Subsequent Address Family (AFI/SAFI = 2/1) [RFC2545] is used for the > >> advertisement of the Colored Prefix routes. > >> --> > > > > The IPv6 unicast AFI/SAFI is the combination of AFI =2 for IPv6 and > > SAFI = 1 > (allocated by IANA) for unicast forwarding, and the mechanism for IPv6 > unicast routing is specified in RFC 2545. It is an relatively old RFC > and there is no IANA considerations section. > > > > How about rephrasing the text as: > > > > New: > > > > In a multi-AS IPv6 network, the mechanism for IPv6 unicast routing > > as > defined in [RFC2545] is used for the advertisement of the Colored > Prefix routes, in which the Address Family/Subsequent Address Family > (AFI/SAFI = 2/1) is used. > > > > > >> > >> 5) <!-- [rfced] In the bulleted list, is it correct for SRv6 to be > >> listed twice? Also, adding conjunctions may improve clarity > >> regarding how the mechanisms are related. Is the path built with a > >> combination of the bulleted items or only one of the individual items? > >> > >> Original: > >> The intra-domain color-aware path could > >> be built with any of the following mechanisms: > >> > >> * SRv6 or SR-MPLS Policy > >> > >> * SRv6 or SR-MPLS Flex-Algo > >> > >> * RSVP-TE > >> > >> Perhaps (a combination): > >> The intra-domain color-aware path could > >> be built with any of the following mechanisms: > >> > >> * SRv6 or SR-MPLS Policy, and > >> * SRv6 or SR-MPLS Flex-Algo, and > >> * RSVP-TE. > > > > The first bullet means "SRv6 Policy or SR-MPLS policy", and the > > second bullet > means "SRv6 Flex-algo or SR-MPLS Flex-Algo". Maybe a better approach > is to list each of them separately. > > > > New: > > The intra-domain color-aware path could be built with any of the > following mechanisms: > > * SRv6 Policy > > * SR-MPLS Policy > > * SRv6 Flex-Algo > > * SR-MPLS Flex-Algo > > * RSVP-TE > > > > > >> > >> Perhaps (a single item): > >> The intra-domain color-aware path could > >> be built with any of the following mechanisms: > >> > >> * SRv6, > >> * SR-MPLS Policy, > >> * SR-MPLS Flex-Algo, or > >> * RSVP-TE. > >> --> > >> > >> > >> 6) <!-- [rfced] "which makes them belonging" is unclear. We have > >> updated the text as shown below. > >> > >> Original: > >> The CPR mechanism can be used in network scenarios where multiple > >> inter-connected ASes belong to the same operator, or there is an > >> operational trust model between the ASes of different operators which > >> makes them belonging to the same trusted domain (in the sense used by > >> Section 8 of [RFC8402]). > >> > >> Current: > >> The CPR mechanism can be used in network scenarios where multiple > >> inter-connected ASes belong to the same operator, or where there is > >> an operational trust model between the ASes of different operators > >> which means they belong to the same trusted domain (in the sense used > >> by Section 8 of [RFC8402]). > >> --> > > > > The updated text looks good, thanks. > > > > > >> > >> 7) <!-- [rfced] What spans across multiple ASes? Is it the SR > >> Policy or the tunnel? > >> > >> Original: > >> As described in section 5 of > >> [I-D.hr-spring-intentaware-routing-using-color], the inter-domain > >> intent-aware routing may be achieved with a logical tunnel created by > >> an SR Policy across multiple ASes, and service traffic with specific > >> intent can be steered to the inter-domain SR Policy based on the > >> intent signaled by Color Extended Community. > >> > >> Perhaps: > >> As described in Section 5 of > >> [INTENTAWARE], the inter-domain > >> intent-aware routing may be achieved with a logical tunnel created by > >> an SR Policy that applies to multiple ASes. In addition, service > >> traffic with a specific intent can be steered to the inter-domain > >> SR Policy based on the intent signaled by Color Extended Community. > >> --> > > > > It should be the tunnel which spans across multiple ASes. The > > updated text > looks good. > > > > > >> > >> 8) <!-- [rfced] Is seems as though there may be words missing in > >> the > following. > >> What can "fall back"? > >> > >> Original: > >> This allows the CPR routes to be resolved to > >> intent-aware intra-domain paths in any autonomous systems that > >> support the CPR mechanism, while can fall back to resolve over best- > >> effort intra-domain path in the legacy autonomous systems. > > > > It is the CPR route which can fall back to resolve over best-effort > intra-domain path. > > > > New: > > > > ...while the CPR routes can fall back to resolve over best-effort > > intra-domain > paths in the legacy autonomous systems. > > > > > > > >> --> > >> > >> > >> 9) <!-- [rfced] Throughout the text, the following terminology > >> appears to be used inconsistently. Please review. > >> > >> a) Colored Prefix vs Colored prefixes vs colored prefix > >> > >> We updated to use the form on the left. Please let us know if any > >> updates are needed. > >> > >> In addition, please consider whether the capitalization of "Colored > >> locator prefixes" is correct. > > > > Please use "Colored Prefix", or "Colored Prefixes" for plural. > > > > > >> > >> > >> b) Please review the use of the following and let us know how/if > >> they may be updated for consistency. > >> > >> color extended community vs Color Extended Community > > > > Please use the latter one, thanks. > > > > > >> > >> --> > >> > >> > >> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of > >> the online Style Guide > >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> > >> and let us know if any changes are needed. 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