Hi Karen, Thanks again for your help and your patience on this. Please check inline below.
On Thu, May 29, 2025 at 4:20 AM Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > Hi Acee, Ketan, Peter, and Ran, > > Thank you for the discussion/comments regarding “Attribute Flags” vs. > “Extended Flags”. We have updated the document to reflect the following > forms: > > 1) OSPFv2/v3 Prefix Extended Flags (sub-TLV name) > 2) Prefix Extended Flags (field name) > 3) OSPFv2/v3 Prefix Extended Flags (IANA registry name) > > We have also updated Table 2 in Section 4.2.1 per your response. Note that > we have an additional question: > KT> All the changes done in this iteration are as requested. > > 1) Please review two instances of “prefix attribute flags”. Are these > correct as is, or should these instances be updated as “prefix extended > flags”? > > Current: > The rest of this document refers to these 8-bit fields in both OSPFv2 > and > OSPFv3 as the "existing fixed-size prefix attribute flags”. > > The advertisement and processing of the existing > fixed-size prefix attribute flags remain unchanged. > KT> Please change "prefix attribute flags" to "prefix flags" in this context where we are referring to existing flags and not the "extended' flags being introduced by this document. Thanks, Ketan > > Next Steps: > Once the authors have responded to our question and confirmed that the > changes throughout the document are as desired, we will ask the AD to > approve the term updates. We will then ask IANA to update the registries > accordingly. > > > —FILES (please refresh)— > > The updated XML file is here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792.xml > > The updated output files are here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792.html > > These diff files show all changes made during AUTH48: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792-auth48diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by > side) > > These diff files show only changes made during the last edit round: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792-lastdiff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side) > > These diff files show all changes made to date: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792-diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792-rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9792 > > Best regards, > RFC Editor/kc > > > > On May 28, 2025, at 7:24 AM, <chen....@zte.com.cn> <chen....@zte.com.cn> > wrote: > > > > Hi Acee，Ketan， > > Many thanks！I agree，this change is good for me. > > > > Best Regards， > > Ran > > > > > > > > > > 发自我的zMail > > > > > > Original > > From:KetanTalaulikar<ketant.i...@gmail.com> > > To:Acee Lindem<acee.i...@gmail.com>; > > Cc:陈然00080434;赵德涛10132546;kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org; > gongli...@chinamobile.com;Peter Psenak;rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; > lsr-...@ietf.org;lsr-cha...@ietf.org;gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com; > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org; > > Date:2025-05-28 20:51:19 > > Subject:Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9792 > <draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-extended-flags-07> for your review > > Hi Acee, > > > > Thanks. > > > > That gets us to: > > 1) Sub-TLV name: OSPFv2/v3 Prefix Extended Flags Sub-TLV > > 2) The field name: Prefix Extended Flags > > 3) The IANA Registry name: OSPFv2/v3 Prefix Extended Flags Registry > > > > It sounds good to me. Do any of my co-authors have concerns or > objections? > > > > Thanks, > > Ketan > > > > > > On Wed, May 28, 2025 at 6:14 PM Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi Ketan, > > > > I would simply change "attribute flags" to "extended flags" throughout > to reflect the title of the draft and the fact that these are prefix flags > beyond the current flags. > > > > Thanks, > > Acee > > > > > On May 28, 2025, at 8:26 AM, Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.i...@gmail.com> > wrote: > > > > > > Hi Acee, > > > > > > I would really appreciate it if you could suggest better names. It > would be most welcome. > > > > > > Like I said, this aspect escaped the attention of most of us but it is > still not too late to change/fix considering it is just a name change and > we don't have any implementations as yet (that I know of). > > > > > > Thanks, > > > Ketan > > > > > > > > > On Wed, May 28, 2025 at 5:52 PM Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com> > wrote: > > > I'll relent since I'm not an co-author but I wouldn't have named the > Sub-TLVs as such. Agree the registry should match the Sub-TLVs. > > > > > > Thanks, > > > Acee > > > > > > > On May 28, 2025, at 8:02 AM, Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.i...@gmail.com> > wrote: > > > > > > > > Hi Acee, > > > > > > > > We have the following in the document (as it stands currently in the > auth48 stage): > > > > > > > > 1) Sub-TLV name: OSPFv2/v3 Prefix Attribute Flags Sub-TLV > > > > 2) The field name: Prefix Attribute Flags > > > > 3) The IANA Registry name: OSPFv2/v3 Prefix Attribute Flags Registry > > > > > > > > Could you please recommend your preferred names for each of the > above? It would help us converge faster. > > > > > > > > Thanks, > > > > Ketan > > > > > > > > > > > > On Wed, May 28, 2025 at 3:52 PM Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com> > wrote: > > > > We have already have: > > > > > > > > > https://www.iana.org/assignments/ospfv2-parameters/ospfv2-parameters.xhtml#extended-prefix-tlv-flags > > > > > > > > > https://www.iana.org/assignments/ospfv3-parameters/ospfv3-parameters.xhtml#ospfv3-parameters-4 > which is merely the prefix options from RFC 5340. > > > > > > > > I'm not sure why we are now start calling these "attributes"??? > > > > > > > > > > > > > On May 28, 2025, at 5:55 AM, Ketan Talaulikar < > ketant.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > > > > > > > Hi Ran, > > > > > > > > > > That is an ISIS RFC that you are referring to. Perhaps you missed > Acee's remarks to me about ISIS focus? ;-) > > > > > > > > > > Personally, I would prefer consistency within OSPF first, and then > perhaps across IGPs (is also good to have). > > > > > > > > Not when the IS-IS terminology isn't applicable. Note the encodings > and granularity of advertisement it a key difference between the IGPs. > > > > > > > > Acee > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Thanks, > > > > > Ketan > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > On Wed, May 28, 2025 at 3:17 PM <chen....@zte.com.cn> wrote: > > > > > Hi Acee,Ketan, > > > > > > > > > > I'd like to add a quick note on top of Ketan's point — RFC 7794 > uses the same term, "Prefix Attribute Flags sub-TLV". From a consistency > perspective, that's why I initially suggested that "Prefix Attribute Flags" > would be appropriate. > > > > > However, if the goal is to match better with the existing field > naming in OSPF, I agree that "Prefix Extended Flags" makes more sense. > > > > > > > > > > Thanks! > > > > > Ran > > > > > > > > > > Original > > > > > From: KetanTalaulikar <ketant.i...@gmail.com> > > > > > To: Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com>; > > > > > Cc: 赵德涛10132546;kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org < > kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org>;陈然00080434;gongli...@chinamobile.com < > gongli...@chinamobile.com>;Peter Psenak <ppse...@cisco.com>; > rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>;lsr-...@ietf.org < > lsr-...@ietf.org>;lsr-cha...@ietf.org <lsr-cha...@ietf.org>; > gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com <gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com>; > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; > > > > > Date: 2025年05月28日 17:11 > > > > > Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9792 > <draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-extended-flags-07> for your review > > > > > Hi Acee, > > > > > This "attribute" has been there in this draft for quite some time > and through the WG and later phases. What the RFC editor has caught and > fixed are inconsistencies in the use of that term within the document - by > introducing "attributes" everywhere for consistency. Please check > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792-diff.html > > > > > > > > > > RFC7684 is all about "attributes" but the equivalent flags field > in that LSA is not called "attribute". Same/similar is the case for OSPFv3. > > > > > > > > > > So I think it is perfectly OK to s/Prefix Attribute Flags/Prefix > Extended Flags so as to match better with the existing field in OSPF. > > > > > > > > > > I will readily admit that I didn't pay much attention to this > naming, but neither did the entire WG and our experienced WG chairs ;-) > > > > > > > > > > Thanks, > > > > > Ketan > > > > > > > > > > On Wed, May 28, 2025 at 1:47 PM Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com> > wrote: > > > > > All, > > > > > > > > > > Where is this "attribute" coming from? Refer to RFC 7684 and RFC > 83652. These are "Extended Flags'". The registries should be: > > > > > > > > > > OSPFv2 Extended Prefix TLV Extended Flags > > > > > OSPFv3 Prefix TLV Extended Flags > > > > > > > > > > Ketan - why aren't you watching this thread? Are you now only > paying attention to IS-IS as well? > > > > > > > > > > Acee > > > > > > > > > > > On May 27, 2025, at 10:12 PM, zhao.de...@zte.com.cn wrote: > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Hi, Karen > > > > > > > > > > > > Option B is more intuitive and clear， we prefer Option B. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Many thanks > > > > > > > > > > > > Detao > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > <5ac0d332cfbe42149bb7e3c16b036327.jpg>赵德涛 > > > > > > 软件平台系统部/有线研究院/有线产品经营部 > > > > > > 中兴通讯股份有限公司 > > > > > > 南京市紫荆花路68号南研一期, 邮编: 210012 > > > > > > T: +86 15951883174 M: +86 15951883174 > > > > > > E: zhao.de...@zte.com.cn > > > > > > Original > > > > > > From: KarenMoore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > > > > > > To: 陈然00080434;ketant.i...@gmail.com <ketant.i...@gmail.com>; > gongli...@chinamobile.com <gongli...@chinamobile.com>;ppse...@cisco.com < > ppse...@cisco.com>;赵德涛10132546; > > > > > > Cc: RFC Errata System <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; > lsr-...@ietf.org <lsr-...@ietf.org>;lsr-cha...@ietf.org < > lsr-cha...@ietf.org>;Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com>;Gunter van de > Velde (Nokia) <gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com>;RFC Editor via > auth48archive <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; > > > > > > Date: 2025年05月28日 06:12 > > > > > > Subject: 答复: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9792 > <draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-extended-flags-07> for your review > > > > > > Authors, > > > > > > > > > > > > While we await the updates to the IANA registries, we have an > additional question. > > > > > > > > > > > > 1) In Section 4.2.1, the following sentence was added: The entry > in the "L2BM" field is “X”. Would you like to add more context here > (option A)? Or would you like to remove this sentence and add the "L2BM” > column to Table 2 to match the "OSPFv3 Extended-LSA Sub-TLVs” registry > (option B)? See <https://www.iana.org/assignments/ospfv3-parameters/>. > Please let us know your preference. > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > The entry in the "L2BM" field is “X". > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps A: > > > > > > The entry in the "L2BM" field is “X” (i.e., this is not a > sub-TLV of the Router-Link TLV; > > > > > > it MUST NOT appear in the L2 Bundle Member Attributes > sub-TLV). > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps B: > > > > > > | Value | Description | > L2BM | Reference | > > > > > > +======+===============================+===========+ > > > > > > | 37 | OSPFv3 Prefix Attribute Flags | X > | RFC 9792 | > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Best regards, > > > > > > RFC Editor/kc > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > On May 27, 2025, at 11:44 AM, Karen Moore < > kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Dear Ran, Detao, Ketan, Liyan, and Peter, > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Thank you for your replies. We have noted your approvals on > the AUTH48 status page for this document ( > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9792). > > > > > > > > > > > > > > We will now ask IANA to update their registries to match the > edited document. We will inform you once the updates are complete. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Best regards, > > > > > > > RFC Editor/kc > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > >> On May 25, 2025, at 4:03 AM, <chen....@zte.com.cn> < > chen....@zte.com.cn> wrote: > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> Dear Karen, > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> Appreciate the work put into this document. I have reviewed > all the changes, and they look good to me. I approve its publication as > RFC. > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> Many thanks, > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> Ran > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> Original > > > > > > >> From: KarenMoore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > > > > > > >> To: 陈然00080434;赵德涛10132546;ppse...@cisco.com < > ppse...@cisco.com>;gongli...@chinamobile.com <gongli...@chinamobile.com>; > ketant.i...@gmail.com <ketant.i...@gmail.com>; > > > > > > >> Cc: RFC Errata System <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; > lsr-...@ietf.org <lsr-...@ietf.org>;lsr-cha...@ietf.org < > lsr-cha...@ietf.org>;Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com>;Gunter van de > Velde (Nokia) <gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com>;RFC Editor via > auth48archive <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; > > > > > > >> Date: 2025年05月24日 03:55 > > > > > > >> Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9792 > <draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-extended-flags-07> for your review > > > > > > >> Dear Ran, > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> Thank you for your quick reply! We have updated our files > accordingly. Please review the changes and let us know if any further > updates are needed or if you approve the document in its current form. Note > that we will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward with > the publication process. > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> —FILES— > > > > > > >> The updated XML file is here: > > > > > > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792.xml > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> The updated output files are here: > > > > > > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792.txt > > > > > > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792.pdf > > > > > > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792.html > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> These diff files show all changes made during AUTH48: > > > > > > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792-auth48diff.html > > > > > > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792-auth48rfcdiff.html > (side by side) > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> These diff files show all changes made to date: > > > > > > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792-diff.html > > > > > > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9792-rfcdiff.html > (side by side) > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser > to view the most recent version. Please review the document carefully to > ensure satisfaction as we do not make changes once it has been published as > an RFC. > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: > > > > > > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9792 > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> Best regards, > > > > > > >> RFC Editor/kc > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >> > > > > > > >>> On May 23, 2025, at 2:30 AM, ranchen via auth48archive < > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Hi RFC Editor, > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Sorry, a typo correction,please see point 5) (b) > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Many thanks! > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Ran > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Original > > > > > > >>> From: 陈然00080434 > > > > > > >>> To: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; > > > > > > >>> Cc: 赵德涛10132546;ppse...@cisco.com <ppse...@cisco.com>; > ketant.i...@gmail.com <ketant.i...@gmail.com>;gongli...@chinamobile.com < > gongli...@chinamobile.com>;rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org < > rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>;lsr-...@ietf.org <lsr-...@ietf.org>; > lsr-cha...@ietf.org <lsr-cha...@ietf.org>;acee.i...@gmail.com < > acee.i...@gmail.com>;gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com < > gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com>;auth48archive@rfc-editor.org < > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; > > > > > > >>> Date: 2025年05月23日 17:13 > > > > > > >>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9792 > <draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-extended-flags-07> for your review > > > > > > >>> Hi RFC Editor, > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Thanks for this mail. Please find my replies inline. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> From: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> > > > > > > > >>> To: 陈然00080434;赵德涛10132546;ppse...@cisco.com < > ppse...@cisco.com>;ketant.i...@gmail.com <ketant.i...@gmail.com>; > gongli...@chinamobile.com <gongli...@chinamobile.com>; > > > > > > >>> Cc: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; > lsr-...@ietf.org <lsr-...@ietf.org>;lsr-cha...@ietf.org < > lsr-cha...@ietf.org>;acee.i...@gmail.com <acee.i...@gmail.com>; > gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com <gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com>; > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; > > > > > > >>> Date: 2025年05月23日 07:00 > > > > > > >>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9792 > <draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-extended-flags-07> for your review > > > > > > >>> Authors, > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve > (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those > that appear in > > > > > > >>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. > --> > > > > > > >>> I suggest：Prefix attributes；IGP > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> 2) <!-- [rfced] We note one instance of "variable-flag > fields"; should > > > > > > >>> this perhaps be updated as "variable-length Prefix Attribute > > > > > > >>> Flags field" for clarity and consistency as shown below? > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Original: > > > > > > >>> Such sub-TLV specifies the variable-flag > > > > > > >>> fields to advertise additional attributes associated with > OSPF > > > > > > >>> prefixes. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Perhaps: > > > > > > >>> The sub-TLV specifies the variable-length Prefix Attribute > Flags > > > > > > >>> field to advertise additional attributes associated with > OSPF > > > > > > >>> prefixes. > > > > > > >>> -->Yes, that change looks good. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> 3) <!-- [rfced] The following text points to non-existent > > > > > > >>> sections. [RFC3630] does not contain Section 6.3, and > [RFC8362] > > > > > > >>> does not contain Section 2.3.2. Was "Section 2.3.2 of > [RFC3630] > > > > > > >>> and Section 6.3 of [RFC8362]" perhaps intended as shown > below? > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Current: > > > > > > >>> An implementation that does not recognize the > OSPFv2/OSPFv3 Prefix > > > > > > >>> Attribute Flags sub-TLV would ignore the sub-TLV as per > normal TLV > > > > > > >>> processing operations (refer to Section 6.3 of [RFC3630] > and Section > > > > > > >>> 2.3.2 of [RFC8362]). > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Perhaps: > > > > > > >>> An implementation that does not recognize the > OSPFv2/OSPFv3 Prefix > > > > > > >>> Attribute Flags sub-TLV would ignore the sub-TLV as per > normal TLV > > > > > > >>> processing operations (refer to Section 2.3.2 of [RFC3630] > and Section > > > > > > >>> 6.3 of [RFC8362]). > > > > > > >>> -->You are correct. The intended references were mistakenly > reversed. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> 4) <!-- [rfced] We have included some specific questions > about the IANA > > > > > > >>> text below. In addition to responding to those questions, > please > > > > > > >>> review all of the IANA-related updates carefully and let us > know > > > > > > >>> if any further updates are needed. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> a) We see the following note from IANA. Please confirm if > the additional > > > > > > >>> sentence has been added or if it still needs to be added. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> NOTE: The authors plan to upload an -08 that will include > > > > > > > >>> an additional sentence in the IANA Considerations section. > > > > > > >>> -->Yes, it still need to be added. Please add: The entry in > the "L2BM" field is "X" at the > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> bottom of section 5.2.1. Please see blow: > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> 5.2.1. OSPFv3 Prefix Attribute Flags Sub-TLV Registry > This document requests IANA to make permanent the early allocation of > the following codepoint for the "OSPFv3 Prefix Attribute Flags" in the > "OSPFv3 Extended-LSA sub-TLVs" registry: Value > Description Reference -------- > ---------------------------------- -------------- 37 > OSPFv3 Prefix Attribute Flags RFC to be > > > > > > >>> The entry in the "L2BM" field is "X". > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> b) Should the titles of the new registries created by this > document > > > > > > >>> be updated to use "Flags" rather than "Flag Field"? We ask > because that > > > > > > >>> seems to be the pattern with other registry titles within > both of the > > > > > > >>> registry groups (see links below). > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Also, the name of the field in Figure 1 of this document is > "Prefix Attribute > > > > > > >>> Flags". Should the titles of the registries be updated > further to use > > > > > > >>> "Prefix Attribute" rather than "Prefix Extended"? Or is this > okay? > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> If the titles are updated, we will ask IANA to update the > registries > > > > > > >>> accordingly. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/ospfv2-parameters/ > > > > > > >>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/ospfv3-parameters/ > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Current: > > > > > > >>> OSPFv2 Prefix Extended Flag Field > > > > > > >>> OSPFv3 Prefix Extended Flag Field > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Perhaps A: > > > > > > >>> OSPFv2 Prefix Extended Flags > > > > > > >>> OSPFv3 Prefix Extended Flags > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> or > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Perhaps B: > > > > > > >>> OSPFv2 Prefix Attribute Flags > > > > > > >>> OSPFv3 Prefix Attribute Flags > > > > > > >>> --> We agree with the suggestion and prefer to rename the > registries as follows for > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> clarity and consistency with the field name used in the > document: > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> • OSPFv2 Prefix Attribute Flags > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> • OSPFv3 Prefix Attribute Flags > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Please proceed to ask IANA to update the registry titles > accordingly. Many thanks! > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Terminology > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> a) FYI - We see both of the following forms. We updated the > document > > > > > > >>> to reflect the second form (i.e., with capitalized "Flags") > for > > > > > > >>> consistency. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> flags field of the OSPFv2 Extended Prefix TLV > > > > > > >>> Flags field of the OSPFv2 Extended Prefix TLV > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> --> Yes, that change looks good. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> b) Please review the capitalization of "prefix attribute > flags" and "Prefix > > > > > > >>> Attribute Flags" in the text below. We believe this should > be capitalized in > > > > > > >>> the name of the TLV and the name of the field but lowercased > in general > > > > > > >>> text. However, we are not sure if the capitalized form in > the following > > > > > > >>> sentences is referring to the field. Are any updates needed? > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Original: > > > > > > >>> Length (2 octets): Variable, dependent on the included > Prefix > > > > > > >>> Attribute Flags. This indicates the length of the prefix > attributes > > > > > > >>> flags in octets. > > > > > > >>> ... > > > > > > >>> For example, the most > > > > > > >>> significant bit in the fifth octet of an 8-octet Prefix > Attribute > > > > > > >>> Flags is referred to as bit 32. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Perhaps (leave capitalized form and add "field" for clarity): > > > > > > >>> Length (2 octets): Variable, dependent on the included > Prefix > > > > > > >>> Attribute Flags field. This indicates the length of > the prefix > > > > > > >>> attributes flags in octets. > > > > > > >>> ... > > > > > > >>> For example, the most > > > > > > >>> significant bit in the fifth octet of an 8-octet Prefix > Attribute > > > > > > >>> Flags field is referred to as bit 32. > > > > > > >>> --> Yes, I agree. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> There is one more place that needs to be updated. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Original: > > > > > > >>> Length (2 octets): Variable, dependent on the included > Prefix > > > > > > >>> Attribute Flags. This indicates the length of the prefix > attributes > > > > > > >>> flags in octets. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> New: > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Length (2 octets): Variable, dependent on the included > Prefix > > > > > > >>> Attribute Flags field. This indicates the length of > the Prefix > > > > > > >>> Attributes Flags field in octets. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Change to: > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> Length (2 octets): Variable, dependent on the included Prefix > > > > > > >>> Attribute Flags field. This indicates the length of > the Prefix > > > > > > >>> Attribute Flags field in octets. > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> > > > > > > >>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" > portion of the online > > > > > > >>> Style Guide < > https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> > > > > > > >>> and let us know if any changes are needed. 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