Hi Greg,

We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 status page for this document: 
https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9791.

Thank you!
RFC Editor/rv



> On Jun 2, 2025, at 3:23 PM, Greg Mirsky <gregimir...@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Rebecca,
> thank you for your help in improving this document. I have reviewed all the 
> updates and approve the document in its current form.
> 
> Regards,
> Greg
> 
> On Tue, Jun 3, 2025 at 2:54 AM Rebecca VanRheenen 
> <rvanrhee...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> Hello authors,
> 
> Thank you for the input on the question about the document title. We have 
> updated the title accordingly. All questions have now been addressed.
> 
> Please contact us with any further updates or with your approval of the 
> document in its current form. We will await approvals from each author prior 
> to moving forward in the publication process.
> 
> 
> — FILES (please refresh) —
> 
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> 
> Updated output files:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791.txt
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791.pdf
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791.html
> 
> Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791-auth48diff.html
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> 
> Diff files showing all changes:
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>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791-alt-diff.html (diff showing 
> changes where text is moved or deleted)
> 
> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9791
> 
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/rv
> 
> 
> 
> > On Jun 2, 2025, at 7:15 AM, Tarek Saad <tsaad....@gmail.com> wrote:
> > 
> > Hi Alanna,
> >  Thanks, and sorry for the delay.
> >  >> Perhaps:
> > >> Use Cases for MPLS Network Action Indicators and Ancillary Data
> > I have no objections to changing the title as suggested.
> >  Regards,
> > Tarek
> >  From: Alanna Paloma <apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
> > Date: Tuesday, May 27, 2025 at 5:36 PM
> > To: tsaad....@gmail.com <tsaad....@gmail.com>, 
> > kiran.i...@gmail.com<kiran.i...@gmail.com>
> > Cc: Haoyu Song <haoyu.s...@futurewei.com>, Greg Mirsky 
> > <gregimir...@gmail.com>, Rebecca VanRheenen 
> > <rvanrhee...@staff.rfc-editor.org>, James Guichard 
> > <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com>, RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, 
> > mpls-...@ietf.org <mpls-...@ietf.org>, 
> > mpls-cha...@ietf.org<mpls-cha...@ietf.org>, tony...@tony.li 
> > <tony...@tony.li>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org 
> > <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
> > Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9791 <draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-15> 
> > for your review
> > Hi Tarek and Kiran,
> > 
> > As Greg and Haoyu have indicated that they both have no preference, please 
> > let us know if/how the title of this document should be updated.
> > 
> > > 2) <!-- [rfced] The document title includes two instances of "MPLS". Are 
> > > both needed?
> > > 
> > > Original:
> > > Use Cases for MPLS Network Action Indicators and MPLS Ancillary Data
> > > 
> > > Perhaps:
> > > Use Cases for MPLS Network Action Indicators and Ancillary Data
> > > -->
> > 
> > Thank you,
> > RFC Editor/ap
> > 
> > 
> > > On May 19, 2025, at 2:27 PM, Haoyu Song <haoyu.s...@futurewei.com> wrote:
> > > 
> > > Hi Alanna,
> > > 
> > > For the remaining question, I'm okay with either way. Thanks!
> > > 
> > > Best regards,
> > > Haoyu
> > > 
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Alanna Paloma <apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
> > > Sent: Monday, May 19, 2025 1:30 PM
> > > To: Greg Mirsky <gregimir...@gmail.com>; tsaad....@gmail.com; 
> > > kiran.i...@gmail.com; Haoyu Song <haoyu.s...@futurewei.com>
> > > Cc: Rebecca VanRheenen <rvanrhee...@staff.rfc-editor.org>; James Guichard 
> > > <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com>; RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; 
> > > mpls-...@ietf.org; mpls-cha...@ietf.org; tony...@tony.li; 
> > > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> > > Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9791 
> > > <draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-15> for your review
> > > 
> > > Hi Greg and other authors,
> > > 
> > > Thank you for responding to our questions. We have updated the document 
> > > accordingly (see files listed below).
> > > 
> > > Regarding the question below, we have not updated the title and will 
> > > await input from Tarek, Kiran, and/or Haoyu.
> > > 
> > >> 2) <!-- [rfced] The document title includes two instances of "MPLS". Are 
> > >> both needed?
> > >> 
> > >> Original:
> > >> Use Cases for MPLS Network Action Indicators and MPLS Ancillary Data
> > >> 
> > >> Perhaps:
> > >> Use Cases for MPLS Network Action Indicators and Ancillary Data
> > >> GIM>> I don't strongly prefer either version, and I can live with any 
> > >> decision other authors will support.
> > >> -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 
> > > — FILES (please refresh) —
> > > 
> > > Updated XML file:
> > >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791.xml
> > > 
> > > Updated output files:
> > >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791.txt
> > >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791.pdf
> > >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791.html
> > > 
> > > Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48:
> > >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791-auth48diff.html
> > >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
> > > side)
> > > 
> > > Diff files showing all changes:
> > >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791-diff.html
> > >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> > >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9791-alt-diff.html (diff showing 
> > > changes where text is moved or deleted)
> > > 
> > > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> > >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9791
> > > 
> > > Thank you,
> > > RFC Editor/ap
> > > 
> > >> On May 17, 2025, at 2:32 PM, Greg Mirsky <gregimir...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > >> 
> > >> Hi Rebecca,
> > >> thank you for your help in improving this document. Please find my notes 
> > >> below tagged GIM>>.
> > >> 
> > >> Regards,
> > >> Greg
> > >> 
> > >> On Wed, May 14, 2025 at 10:09 AM Rebecca VanRheenen 
> > >> <rvanrhee...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> > >> Hi Greg,
> > >> 
> > >> The AUTH48 announcement and questions were sent yesterday. I’ve pasted 
> > >> the questions below.
> > >> 
> > >> You can also see the messages in the AUTH48 mail archive: 
> > >> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/auth48archive/?q=9791.
> > >> 
> > >> Thank you for checking in!
> > >> 
> > >> Best regards,
> > >> RFC Editor/rv
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 1) <!-- [rfced] *AD: We see that consensus is set to "Unknown"
> > >> for this document in the datatracker. See
> > >> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases/>.
> > >> 
> > >> This document was sent to Last Call, so we have used the consensus
> > >> Status of This Memo. Please confirm that this is correct.
> > >> -->
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 2) <!-- [rfced] The document title includes two instances of "MPLS". Are 
> > >> both needed?
> > >> 
> > >> Original:
> > >> Use Cases for MPLS Network Action Indicators and MPLS Ancillary Data
> > >> 
> > >> Perhaps:
> > >> Use Cases for MPLS Network Action Indicators and Ancillary Data
> > >> GIM>> I don't strongly prefer either version, and I can live with any 
> > >> decision other authors will support.
> > >> -->
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 3) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear
> > >> in the title) for use on
> > >> https://www/.
> > >> rfc-editor.org%2Fsearch&data=05%7C02%7Chaoyu.song%40futurewei.com%7Cb9
> > >> 7a07e4fd744af430aa08dd9713edc5%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%
> > >> 7C1%7C638832834079747630%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRyd
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> > >> D&reserved=0. -->
> > >> GIM>> Perhaps
> > >> Special Purpose Label
> > >> MPLS data plane
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 4) <!-- [rfced] We see that "MPLS Ancillary Data" appears in Section
> > >> 1.1 ("Terminology").  We see instances of "ancillary data" (no "MPLS")
> > >> in the document, but we only see "MPLS Ancillary Data" used in the
> > >> document title. Are any updates needed?
> > >> GIM>> Perhaps we can note the equivalence between "MPLS Ancillary Data" 
> > >> and "ancillary data" as is done for terms related to a network slice. 
> > >> Might the following update be acceptable (using the proposed text below):
> > >> OLD TEXT:
> > >>   MPLS Ancillary Data:
> > >> NEW TEXT:
> > >>  MPLS Ancillary Data (also referred to in this document as "ancillary 
> > >> data"):
> > >> 
> > >> Also, note that we slightly updated the definition list as follows.
> > >> 
> > >> Original:
> > >>  RFC 9543 Network Slice
> > >>     is interpreted as defined in [RFC9543].  Furthermore, this
> > >>     document uses "network slice" interchangeably as a shorter version
> > >>     of the RFC 9543 Network Slice term.
> > >> 
> > >>  The MPLS Ancillary Data is classified as:
> > >>     *  residing within the MPLS label stack and referred to as In-
> > >>        Stack Data, and
> > >> 
> > >>     *  residing after the Bottom of Stack (BoS) and referred to as
> > >>        Post-Stack Data.
> > >> 
> > >> Updated:
> > >>  RFC 9543 Network Slice:
> > >>     Interpreted as defined in [RFC9543].  This document
> > >>     uses "network slice" interchangeably as a shorter version of the
> > >>     term "RFC 9543 Network Slice".
> > >> 
> > >>  MPLS Ancillary Data:
> > >>     Data that can be classified as:
> > >> 
> > >>     *  residing within the MPLS label stack (referred to as "in-stack
> > >>        data"), and
> > >> 
> > >>     *  residing after the Bottom of Stack (BoS) (referred to as "post-
> > >>        stack data").
> > >> GIM>> I agree with the proposed update.
> > >> -->
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 5) <!-- [rfced] Would you like for the abbreviations listed in Section
> > >> 1.2
> > >> ("Abbreviations") to be alphabetized? Or do you prefer the current order?
> > >> GIM>> Yes, please alphabetize it; thank you.
> > >> -->
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please review "Policy as a policy construct". May we
> > >> update as follows (i.e., remove "policy")?
> > >> 
> > >> Original:
> > >>  Section 5 of
> > >>  [I-D.ietf-teas-ns-ip-mpls] defines a Network Resource Partition (NRP)
> > >>  Policy as a policy construct that enables the instantiation of
> > >>  mechanisms to support one or more network slice services.
> > >> 
> > >> Perhaps:
> > >>  Section 5 of [NS-IP-MPLS]
> > >>  defines a Network Resource Partition (NRP) Policy as a
> > >>  construct that enables the instantiation of mechanisms to support one
> > >>  or more network slice services.
> > >> GIM>> I prefer the current form because "NRP Policy" is a term, and 
> > >> "policy construct" emphasizes that it is a rule that governs the 
> > >> instantiation of a network slice.
> > >> 
> > >> -->
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 7) <!-- [rfced] We believe that "label stack elements" here should be
> > >> updated to "label stack entries", which is used earlier in this document 
> > >> and in RFC 8595.
> > >> Please confirm. Also note that "label stack element" has not been used
> > >> in the RFC Series.
> > >> 
> > >> Original:
> > >>  [RFC8595] describes how Service Function Chaining can be realized in
> > >>  an MPLS network by emulating the Network Service Header (NSH)
> > >>  [RFC8300] using only MPLS label stack elements.
> > >> GIM>> You are correct. Please update as s/elements/entries/
> > >> -->
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 8) <!-- [rfced] Please confirm that "FUNC::ARG" is correct here. We
> > >> ask because we see "LOC:FUNCT:ARG" in RFC 8986.
> > >> 
> > >> Original:
> > >>  MNA can be used to encode
> > >>  the FUNC::ARGs to support the functional equivalent of FUNC::ARG in
> > >>  SRv6 as described in [RFC8986].
> > >> GIM>> I believe that FUNC::ARG is correct for SR-MPLS, as it does not 
> > >> require the locator part of SRv6.
> > >> -->
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 9) <!-- [rfced] Would you like to update "bottom of the label stack"
> > >> here to "BoS" or leave as is?
> > >> 
> > >> Original:
> > >>  In this case, BIER has defined 0b0101 as the
> > >>  value for the first nibble in the data that immediately appears after
> > >>  the bottom of the label stack for any BIER-encapsulated packet over
> > >>  MPLS.
> > >> 
> > >> Perhaps:
> > >>  In this case, BIER has defined 0b0101 as the
> > >>  value for the first nibble in the data that immediately appears after
> > >>  the BoS for any BIER-encapsulated packet over
> > >>  MPLS.
> > >> GIM>> I agree to the proposed update, thank you.
> > >> -->
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please confirm that the citation is correct here. We
> > >> ask because we do not see the specific wording "non-protocol
> > >> specifying document" in RFC-to-be 9789 (ietf-mpls-mna-fwk).
> > >> 
> > >> Also, to improve readability, we upddated "non-protocol specifying 
> > >> documents"
> > >> as follows. Let us know any concerns.
> > >> 
> > >> Original:
> > >>  Section 7 of "MPLS Network Action (MNA) Framework",
> > >>  [I-D.ietf-mpls-mna-fwk] outlines security considerations for non-
> > >>  protocol specifying documents.
> > >> 
> > >> Updated:
> > >>  Section 7 of the MNA framework [RFC9789] outlines security
> > >>  considerations for documents that do not specify protocols.
> > >> GIM>> AFAICS, the full title of RFC 9789-to-be is MPLS Network Action 
> > >> (MNA) Framework. Perhaps we can omit the full title altogether, making 
> > >> this sentence as follows:
> > >> NEW TEXT:
> > >>  Section 7 of [RFC9789] outlines security
> > >>  considerations for documents that do not specify protocols.
> > >>  -->
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 11) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We lowercased "post-stack data" and "in-stack
> > >> data" per usage in RFC-to-be 9789 (ietf-mpls-mna-fwk).
> > >> GIM>> Thank you for your thorough review of both drafts, ensuring 
> > >> consistency of terminology.
> > >> -->
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 12) <!-- [rfced] Abbreviations
> > >> 
> > >> a) This document uses "Ingress to Edge" as the expansion for I2E, but
> > >> RFC-to-be 9789 (ietf-mpls-mna-fwk) and other documents in the RFC
> > >> Series use "Ingress to Egress". If no objections, we will update this
> > >> document accordingly.
> > >> 
> > >> Current:
> > >> Ingress to Edge
> > >> 
> > >> Perhaps:
> > >> Ingress to Egress
> > >> GIM>> Thank you for catching this. Agreed
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> b) FYI - We have added expansions for the following abbreviations per
> > >> Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each
> > >> expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
> > >> 
> > >> Deterministic Networking (DetNet)
> > >> Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6)
> > >> Segment Routing over MPLS (SR-MPLS)
> > >> Service Level Objectives (SLOs)
> > >> GIM>> All are correct; thank you
> > >> -->
> > >> 
> > >> 
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> > >> 
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> > >> 
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> > >> RFC9791 (draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases-15)
> > >> 
> > >> Title            : Use Cases for MPLS Network Action Indicators and MPLS 
> > >> Ancillary Data
> > >> Author(s)        : T. Saad, K. Makhijani, H. Song, G. Mirsky
> > >> WG Chair(s)      : Tarek Saad, Tony Li, Adrian Farrel
> > >> 
> > >> Area Director(s) : Jim Guichard, Ketan Talaulikar, Gunter Van de Velde
> > >> 
> > >>> On May 14, 2025, at 9:25 AM, Greg Mirsky <gregimir...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > >>> 
> > >>> Dear RFC Editor,
> > >>> for some reason I didn't receive the note from the RFC Editor. If there 
> > >>> are any questions to the authors, please let me know and I will work on 
> > >>> addressing them.
> > >>> 
> > >>> Regards,
> > >>> Greg
> > >>> 
> > >>> On Wed, May 14, 2025 at 4:03 AM James Guichard 
> > >>> <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com> wrote:
> > >>> 
> > >>> 
> > >>> 1) <!-- [rfced] *AD: We see that consensus is set to "Unknown"
> > >>> for this document in the datatracker. See
> > >>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases/>.
> > >>> 
> > >>> This document was sent to Last Call, so we have used the consensus
> > >>> Status of This Memo. Please confirm that this is correct.
> > >>> -->
> > >>> 
> > >>> Jim> Confirmed.
> 
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