Hi IANA,

Please make the following capitalization changes in the "Extensions for the 
Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)" registry 
<https://www.iana.org/assignments/epp-extensions/epp-extensions.xhtml>:

OLD:

Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Mapping for DNS Time-To-Live (TTL) values

NEW (lowercase “t” and uppercase “V”):

Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Mapping for DNS Time-to-Live (TTL) Values

Thanks,
RFC Editor/kf

> On Jun 3, 2025, at 10:33 AM, Gavin Brown <gavin.br...@icann.org> wrote:
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> FYI I got a bounce from Orie's old email address so I'm adding his new 
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> > On 3 Jun 2025, at 15:28, Gavin Brown <gavin.br...@icann.org> wrote:
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> > Greetings,
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> > Please find attached a revised XML file.
> > 
> > * all your edits are fine, with the exception of the word "also" in the 
> > descriptions of the attributes in 1.2.1, which imply that the attributes 
> > have multiple uses when they don't. I have removed that word in each 
> > paragraph.
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> > * I have added comments responding to RFC Editor questions. Where changes 
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> > * I also realised that putting normative text at the end of sections, 
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> > You can see the changes I made here:
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> > https://github.com/gbxyz/epp-ttl-extension/compare/a845acb2e34768d122f857633fd96e3f96af09a4..HEAD
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> > I am happy for this version to be published as an RFC.
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> > Many thanks!
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> > Gavin.
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> >> RFC9803 (draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-18)
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> >> Title            : Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Mapping for DNS 
> >> Time-to-Live (TTL) Values
> >> Author(s)        : G. Brown
> >> WG Chair(s)      : James Galvin, Antoin Verschuren
> >> Area Director(s) : Andy Newton, Orie Steele
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