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RFC Editor/mf > On Jun 6, 2025, at 5:55 PM, Aaron Gable <aa...@letsencrypt.org> wrote: > > Hi Megan, > > Apologies for the delay. After extensive review with all of my coworkers, we > have found one last typo: > > Section 6 > > OLD: > (or do no implement ARI at all) > > NEW: > (or do not implement ARI at all) > > Thanks, > Aaron > > On Thu, Jun 5, 2025 at 10:47 AM Megan Ferguson > <mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > Hi Aaron, > > Just a friendly reminder that we await your confirmation of our changes and > approval prior to moving this document forward in the publication process. > > Thank you. > > RFC Editor/mf > > > > > > Begin forwarded message: > > > > From: Megan Ferguson <mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9773 <draft-ietf-acme-ari-08> for your review > > Date: May 13, 2025 at 9:31:58 PM MDT > > To: Aaron Gable <aa...@letsencrypt.org> > > Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, acme-...@ietf.org, > > acme-cha...@ietf.org, ynir.i...@gmail.com, Deb Cooley > > <debcool...@gmail.com>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > > > > Hi Aaron, > > > > Thank you for sending along these changes in the XML file. We have adopted > > the changes and reposted. > > > > Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after > > publication. > > > > The files have been posted here (please refresh): > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.txt > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.pdf > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.html > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.xml > > > > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-diff.html (comprehensive diff) > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 > > changes only) > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-lastdiff.html (last to current > > version only) > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-lastrfcdiff.html (last to > > current version side by side) > > > > Please contact us with any further updates/questions/comments you may have > > or with your approval of the document in its current form. Once we have > > your approval, we will send along any necessary updates to IANA prior to > > publication. > > > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: > > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9773 > > > > Thank you. > > > > RFC Editor/mf > > > On May 13, 2025, at 5:29 PM, Aaron Gable <aa...@letsencrypt.org> wrote: > > > > I have two final minor edits that I would like to incorporate: > > > > - In Section 4.2, replace "set of names on the order" with "set of > > identifiers on the order". > > - In Section 5, replace "GET requests described above" with "GET requests > > described in Section 4.1", with an internal cross-link to that section. > > > > I have attached an XML file that I believe implements these two edits and > > no other changes; please make sure I haven't accidentally broken anything! > > > > Thanks again, > > Aaron > > > > On Wed, May 7, 2025 at 6:18 PM Megan Ferguson > > <mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > Hi Aaron, > > > > Just a friendly reminder that the updates to this document await your > > review. > > > > Please contact us at your earliest convenience with any further changes you > > may have or your approval of the document in its current form. > > > > Thank you. > > > > RFC Editor/mf > > > > > > > On Apr 29, 2025, at 1:53 PM, Megan Ferguson > > > <mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > > > > > Hi Aaron, > > > > > > Thank you for your reply and the updated XML file. > > > We have adopted your version (see below) and added the keywords suggested > > > to our database. > > > > > > Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after > > > publication. > > > > > > The files have been posted here (please refresh): > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.txt > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.pdf > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.html > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773.xml > > > > > > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-diff.html (comprehensive > > > diff) > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 > > > changes only) > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9773-lastdiff.html (last to > > > current version only) > > > > > > Please contact us with any further updates/questions/comments you may > > > have. > > > > > > We will await approvals from each of the parties listed on the AUTH48 > > > status page prior to moving forward to publication. > > > > > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: > > > > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9773 > > > > > > Thank you. > > > > > > RFC Editor/mf > > > > > >> On Apr 25, 2025, at 4:17 PM, Aaron Gable > > >> <aaron=40letsencrypt....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: > > >> > > >> Hello editors, > > >> > > >> Thank you for the edits and improvements to this document! My responses > > >> to your specific questions are inline below, and the updated XML file is > > >> attached. > > >> > > >> Thanks again, > > >> Aaron > > >> > > >> On Wed, Apr 23, 2025 at 1:51 PM <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > >> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has been > > >> updated as follows: > > >> > > >> We have moved the expansion of ACME from the document title to its first > > >> use in the Abstract as generally we do not expand abbreviations within > > >> abbreviations. > > >> > > >> Original: > > >> Automated Certificate Management Environment (ACME) Renewal > > >> Information (ARI) Extension > > >> > > >> Current: > > >> ACME Renewal Information (ARI) Extension > > >> > > >> --> > > >> > > >> Thank you, the improved title is great. > > >> > > >> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in > > >> the title) for use on > > >> https://www.rfc-editancestorDomainancestorDomainor.org/search. --> > > >> > > >> I have added the following keywords: > > >> - certificate > > >> - CA > > >> - x509 > > >> - pki > > >> - webpki > > >> - renew > > >> - replace > > >> > > >> I'm not sure how best to see the keywords attached to other ACME > > >> documents all in one place; please feel free to add or remove keywords > > >> to bring this list in line with best practices. > > >> > > >> 3) <!--[rfced] Please review our update to "a literal period" to make it > > >> match similar handling of the "=" character later in the paragraph and > > >> uses in the RFC Series and let us know any objections. > > >> > > >> Original: > > >> > > >> The unique identifier is constructed by concatenating the > > >> base64url-encoding [RFC4648] of the keyIdentifier field of the > > >> certificate's Authority Key Identifier (AKI) [RFC5280] extension, a > > >> literal period, and the base64url-encoding of the DER-encoded Serial > > >> Number field (without the tag and length bytes). > > >> > > >> Current: > > >> > > >> The unique identifier is constructed by concatenating the > > >> base64url-encoding [RFC4648] of the keyIdentifier field of the > > >> certificate's Authority Key Identifier (AKI) [RFC5280] extension, the > > >> period character ".", and the base64url-encoding of the DER-encoded > > >> Serial > > >> Number field (without the tag and length bytes). > > >> > > >> --> > > >> > > >> This update looks great to me. > > >> > > >> 4) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions related to the IANA > > >> Considerations section: > > >> > > >> a) Section 7.1: In the Resource Type column of Table 2, please review if > > >> "Renewal info", "Renewal Information", or "renewalInfo" or something > > >> else should be used instead of "Renewal Info" as this is the only > > >> occurrence in the document of this form (other than Table 1, which also > > >> uses "Renewal info"). > > >> > > >> Original: > > >> Renewal Info object > > >> > > >> Thank you for catching this. I have settled on the following convention: > > >> - `renewalInfo` (always in <tt>, always starting lowercase) refers to > > >> the new entry added to the Directory object. > > >> - RenewalInfo (always in plaintext, always starting uppercase) refers to > > >> the newly-introduced resource/object. > > >> > > >> I've also eliminated all use of the shortened form "info", except as > > >> part of those two compound words. I have attempted to update the whole > > >> document to abide by this convention, but may have missed a spot. Please > > >> let me know if I have! > > >> > > >> b) Section 7.2: FYI - we have added a citation to RFC 8126 in the > > >> description of the Registration Procedure and a corresponding entry in > > >> the Informative References section. Please let us know any concerns. > > >> > > >> c) FYI- we will communicate any nits/edits to IANA upon the completion > > >> of AUTH48. > > >> > > >> > > >> --> > > >> > > >> Thanks for the heads-up! > > >> > > >> 5) <!--[rfced] Please review the following questions related to > > >> terminology use throughout the document. > > >> > > >> a) We see mixed marking of the following terms throughout the document. > > >> Please let us know if/how these may be made uniform: > > >> > > >> "renewalInfo" resource vs. renewalInfo resource > > >> > > >> See above, I believe I have standardized this now. > > >> > > >> New Order request vs. new-order request > > >> > > >> Interestingly, neither of these is correct! I have updated all instances > > >> to "newOrder request", to match RFC 8555 and other ACME documents. > > >> > > >> Server vs. server > > >> > > >> Standardized on the lowercase form, to match RFC 8555 > > >> > > >> base64url-encoding vs. base64url encoding > > >> > > >> Standardized on the form without a hyphen, to match RFC 8555. > > >> > > >> b) There are instances of simply RenewalInfo. Should a label follow > > >> (e.g., object, resource, etc.) for the ease of the reader? > > >> > > >> I have added either "object" or "resource" after all instances of > > >> RenewalInfo except those of the form "the certificate's RenewalInfo", > > >> which I think are already sufficiently clear. > > >> > > >> > > >> --> > > >> > > >> > > >> 6) <!--[rfced] We note the use of the <tt> element to mark text in this > > >> document. See the list of marked terms below. > > >> > > >> a) We recommend authors review the output of this element in all > > >> output formats (text, pdf, html, etc.) to ensure it appears as > > >> expected across formats. > > >> > > >> b) Please review for consistent use throughout the document (as we see > > >> some occurrences that are not marked with <tt>) and either update the > > >> edited XML file directly or let the RPC know if/how we may update > > >> . > > >> > > >> 00:87:65:43:21 > > >> 0x87 > > >> 69:88:5B:6B:87:46:40:41:E1:B3:7B:84:7B:A0:AE:2C:DE:01:C8:D4 > > >> AIdlQyE= > > >> aYhba4dGQEHhs3uEe6CuLN4ByNQ.AIdlQyE > > >> aYhba4dGQEHhs3uEe6CuLN4ByNQ= > > >> cron > > >> end > > >> explanationURL > > >> keyIdentifier > > >> renewalInfo > > >> replaces > > >> Retry-After > > >> start > > >> suggestedWindow > > >> = > > >> || > > >> > > >> I believe I have standardized the use of <tt> so that now it is used in > > >> only the following circumstances: > > >> - around JSON object field names, such as renewalInfo, suggestedWindow, > > >> explanationURL, start, end, and replaces > > >> - around literal byte sequences, such as the period, equals, pipes, and > > >> various hex and base64 values > > >> > > >> I have removed it from Retry-After, keyIdentifier, and cron. > > >> > > >> --> > > >> > > >> > > >> 7) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the > > >> online Style Guide > > >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> and > > >> let us know if any changes are needed. 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