Hi Alanna, 

This update is complete: 

https://www.iana.org/assignments/icmpv6-parameters

Thanks,
Sabrina

On Tue Jun 10 22:50:54 2025, apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org wrote:
> IANA,
> 
> Please update the "IPv6 Neighbor Discovery Prefix Information Option
> Flags” registry to capitalize ”preferred flag” in the Description of
> PIO Option Bit 3.
> 
> Old:
> PIO Option Bit          Description
> 3                               P - DHCPv6-PD preferred flag
> 
> New:
> PIO Option Bit          Description
> 3                               P - DHCPv6-PD Preferred Flag
> 
> Diff file is here:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9762-diff.html
> 
> Best regards,
> RFC Editor/ap
> 
> 
> > On Jun 10, 2025, at 3:48 PM, Alanna Paloma <apal...@staff.rfc-
> > editor.org> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Authors,
> >
> > David - Thank you for your reply. We have updated the files per the
> > nits you pointed out.
> >
> > The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9762.txt
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9762.pdf
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9762.html
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9762.xml
> >
> > The relevant diff files are posted here:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9762-diff.html (comprehensive
> > diff)
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9762-auth48diff.html (all
> > AUTH48 changes)
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9762-lastdiff.html (htmlwdiff
> > diff between last version and this)
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9762-lastrfcdiff.html (rfcdiff
> > between last version and this)
> >
> > And we have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9762
> >
> > All - As we have received all author approvals, we will now ask IANA
> > to update their registry accordingly. After the IANA updates are
> > complete, we will move forward with the publication process.
> >
> > Thank you,
> > RFC Editor/ap
> >
> >> On Jun 10, 2025, at 10:13 AM, David 'equinox' Lamparter
> >> <equi...@diac24.net> wrote:
> >>
> >> Hi Alanna & all,
> >>
> >>
> >> On Thu, Jun 05, 2025 at 08:50:55AM -0700, Alanna Paloma wrote:
> >>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9762.txt
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9762.pdf
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9762.html
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9762.xml
> >>
> >> I've reread it and I only noticed one language nit that I'd like to
> >> raise:
> >>
> >> Under "7.2. Using Delegated Prefix(es)"
> >>
> >> "The client MAY use the prefix to allow devices directly connected
> >> to it
> >> to obtain IPv6 addresses. For example, the client MAY route traffic
> >> for
> >> that prefix to **the=>an** interface and send a RA containing a PIO
> >> for
> >> the prefix on **the=>that** interface. That interface MUST NOT be
> >> the
> >> interface the prefix is obtained from. If the client advertises the
> >> prefix on an interface and it has formed addresses from the prefix,
> >> then
> >> it MUST act as though the addresses were assigned to that interface
> >> for
> >> the purposes of Neighbor Discovery and Duplicate Address Detection."
> >>
> >> (Note inline marking with **text**)
> >>
> >> This is - boiled down - "the interface, the interface, that
> >> interface
> >> MUST NOT be the interface obtained from, an interface, that
> >> interface."
> >>
> >> The first 2 "the" are confusing and should be "an" and "that", as is
> >> done later.  The only "the" interface here should be "the interface
> >> the
> >> prefix is obtained from".  The first 2 references to interfaces are
> >> the
> >> same in referring to some other interface as in the 2nd half, where
> >> (IMHO correctly) "an" and "that" are used.
> >>
> >>
> >> I don't believe it's absolutely necessary to fix this, I don't see
> >> it as
> >> a content/correctness problem, just language that raised a "weird"
> >> flag
> >> for me.
> >>
> >> Either way: Approved (with or without this edit).
> >>
> >> Cheers,
> >>
> >>
> >> -David
> >>
> >>
> >> P.S.: I really wasn't sure whether to say something about such a
> >> tiny
> >> issue, I hope this doesn't trigger an avalanche...  also apologies
> >> for
> >> not getting to this earlier :(.
> >

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