IANA,

Please make the following updates to 
https://www.iana.org/assignments/acme/acme.xhtml#acme-error-types to match the 
document.

Original:
The CA only supports checking CAA for hidden services in-band, but the client 
has not provided an in-band CAA

New (add “the” and cap Hidden Services):
The CA only supports checking the CAA for Hidden Services in-band, but the 
client has not provided an in-band CAA

Once these updates have been confirmed, this document will be ready to move 
forward to publication.

Thank you.

RFC Editor/mf



> On Jun 6, 2025, at 4:51 PM, Q Misell <q...@as207960.net> wrote:
> 
> That looks good to me. Happy for this to move to TI.
> Any statements contained in this email are personal to the author and are not 
> necessarily the statements of the company unless specifically stated. 
> AS207960 Cyfyngedig, having a registered office at 13 Pen-y-lan Terrace, 
> Caerdydd, Cymru, CF23 9EU, trading as Glauca Digital, is a company registered 
> in Wales under № 12417574, LEI 875500FXNCJPAPF3PD10. ICO register №: 
> ZA782876. UK VAT №: GB378323867. EU VAT №: EU372013983. Turkish VAT №: 
> 0861333524. South Korean VAT №: 522-80-03080. AS207960 Ewrop OÜ, having a 
> registered office at Lääne-Viru maakond, Tapa vald, Porkuni küla, Lossi tn 1, 
> 46001, trading as Glauca Digital, is a company registered in Estonia under № 
> 16755226. Estonian VAT №: EE102625532. Glauca Digital and the Glauca logo are 
> registered trademarks in the UK, under № UK00003718474 and № UK00003718468, 
> respectively.
> 
> 
> 
> Ar Gwen, 6 Meh 2025 am 18:26 Megan Ferguson <mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> 
> ysgrifennodd:
> Hi Q,
> 
> Thank you for the prompt reply.  We have updated the redundant text (with a 
> few punctuation tweaks pulled back in from our previous edits).  Please 
> review and approve.
> 
> We have also noted your request to wait for tooling to handle the name issue 
> at the AUTH48 status page for this document.  Once we receive your approval 
> of the last update, we will move this document to TI state (Tooling Issue) to 
> await resolution.
> 
> Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after 
> publication.  
> 
> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
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>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9799.pdf
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9799.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9799.xml
> 
> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
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>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9799-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes 
> only)
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9799-lastdiff.html (last version to 
> this)
> 
> Please contact us with any further updates/questions/comments you may have.  
> 
> The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here:
> 
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9799
> 
> Thank you.
> 
> RFC Editor/mf
> 
> > On Jun 6, 2025, at 4:54 AM, Q Misell <q...@as207960.net> wrote:
> > 
> > Hi Megan,
> > 
> > I'd rather wait a bit longer for the discussion on pull #1246 to conclude. 
> > I don't mind if this RFC takes a little longer to publish, but with my name 
> > shown correctly.
> > 
> > In re the redundant text, indeed I did get confused with other questions. 
> > You are right, it is redundant. I propose the following text instead:
> > 
> > Tor directory servers are inherently untrusted entities, and as such there 
> > is no difference in the security model for accepting CAA records directly 
> > from the ACME client or fetching them over Tor; the CAA records are 
> > verified using the same hidden service key in either case.
> > 
> > Q
> > Any statements contained in this email are personal to the author and are 
> > not necessarily the statements of the company unless specifically stated. 
> > AS207960 Cyfyngedig, having a registered office at 13 Pen-y-lan Terrace, 
> > Caerdydd, Cymru, CF23 9EU, trading as Glauca Digital, is a company 
> > registered in Wales under № 12417574, LEI 875500FXNCJPAPF3PD10. ICO 
> > register №: ZA782876. UK VAT №: GB378323867. EU VAT №: EU372013983. Turkish 
> > VAT №: 0861333524. South Korean VAT №: 522-80-03080. AS207960 Ewrop OÜ, 
> > having a registered office at Lääne-Viru maakond, Tapa vald, Porkuni küla, 
> > Lossi tn 1, 46001, trading as Glauca Digital, is a company registered in 
> > Estonia under № 16755226. Estonian VAT №: EE102625532. Glauca Digital and 
> > the Glauca logo are registered trademarks in the UK, under № UK00003718474 
> > and № UK00003718468, respectively.
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > Ar Iau, 5 Meh 2025 am 21:39 Megan Ferguson <mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> 
> > ysgrifennodd:
> > Hi Q,
> > 
> > Thanks for the prompt reply and the updated XML file.  
> > We have adopted this version and posted to the links below.
> > 
> > A few follow-up comments/questions:
> > 
> > 1) Looks like the issue about your initial is still being discussed (see 
> > https://github.com/ietf-tools/xml2rfc/pull/1246).
> > 
> > 2) We may have confused you with Question 14 with side edits (sorry!). 
> > Please review the following for redundancy and let us know if you’d like to 
> > make any changes:
> > 
> > Original:
> > 
> >   Tor directory servers are inherently untrusted entities, and as such
> >   there is no difference in the security model for accepting CAA
> >   records directly from the ACME client or fetching them over Tor.
> >   There is no difference in the security model between accepting CAA
> >   records directly from the ACME client and fetching them over Tor; the
> >   CAA records are verified using the same hidden service key in either
> >   case.
> > 
> > Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after 
> > publication.  
> > 
> > The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9799.txt
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9799.pdf
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9799.html
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9799.xml
> > 
> > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9799-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9799-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 
> > changes only)
> > 
> > Please contact us with any further updates/questions/comments you may have. 
> >  
> > 
> > We will await approvals from each of the parties listed on the AUTH48 
> > status page prior to moving forward to publication.  
> > 
> > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here:
> > 
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9799
> > 
> > Thank you.
> > 
> > RFC Editor/mf
> > 
> > > On Jun 4, 2025, at 7:26 AM, Q Misell <q=40as207960....@dmarc.ietf.org> 
> > > wrote:
> > > 
> > > 
> > > Thank you for your copy editing; as always, much appreciated!
> > > 
> > > Attached is my edited XML source, incorporating changes relating to your 
> > > comments. Below are my responses to all comments.
> > > 
> > > > The short title that appears in the running header of the pdf output 
> > > > has been updated to use double quotes around ".onion" to match the use 
> > > > in the full title.
> > > 
> > > LGTM.
> > > 
> > > > Q - currently our tooling does not support the request to remove the 
> > > > period from following your first name.
> > > 
> > > I have made a PR to xml2rfc 
> > > (https://github.com/ietf-tools/xml2rfc/pull/1246) to fix this to my 
> > > liking. 
> > > I would appreciate that merged before publication.
> > > 
> > > > Please insert any keywords
> > > 
> > > Done.
> > > 
> > > > Please review our edits to the following text to ensure we have 
> > > > maintained your intent.
> > > > The ACME server SHOULD follow redirects.  Note that these MAY be 
> > > > redirects to services that are not ".onion" and that the server SHOULD 
> > > > honor these.
> > > 
> > > LGTM.
> > > 
> > > > Please review our updates to this text carefully and let us know any 
> > > > objections. 
> > > > An "onion-csr-01" challenge MUST NOT be used to issue certificates for 
> > > > Special-Use Domain Names that are not ".onion".
> > > 
> > > LGTM.
> > > 
> > > > Please note that sourcecode elements in this document exceed our 
> > > > character limit
> > > 
> > > XML edited accordingly.
> > > 
> > > > Please note that we have updated to use "flags" (plural) to match the 
> > > > use in Section 4.1.1 of RFC 8659.
> > > 
> > > No objection.
> > > 
> > > > In the following instances, please review the use of the BCP 14 keyword 
> > > > with the surrounding text
> > > 
> > > Fixed in HTML.
> > > 
> > > > We have deleted the "it" before the comma in this sentence.
> > > 
> > > LGTM.
> > > 
> > > > Please note that we believe Section 9.7.8 should actually read 9.7.4 in 
> > > > the following.
> > > 
> > > That is correct.
> > > 
> > > > We believe "ACME Directory Metadata Fields" registry is defined in 
> > > > Section 9.7.6 of [RFC8555], not Section 9.7.8. 
> > > 
> > > That is correct.
> > > 
> > > > Please review our update to this text to expand MAC and avoid using an 
> > > > abbreviation as a verb.
> > > 
> > > LGTM
> > > 
> > > > These sentences seem redundant. Please review.
> > > 
> > > Edits LGTM
> > > 
> > > > Please note that we have changed the URL of the [spoiled-onions] 
> > > > reference to point use the DOI rather than the original URL, which took 
> > > > the reader to a preview page that they couldn't back out of.
> > > 
> > > LGTM
> > > 
> > > > Please review. We found an open-access version of [spoiled-onions] on 
> > > > arXiv. The information appears to match the current reference; however, 
> > > > some author names are missing. Would you prefer to use this open-access 
> > > > version of this reference?
> > > 
> > > The version I worked from whilst writing this RFC was the one published 
> > > by Springer. The version on the arXiv appears to be a draft before the 
> > > paper underwent peer-review, and as such I would rather not use it.
> > > 
> > > > We assume ".onion" is pronounced as "dot onion" and have thus left 
> > > > instances of "a ".onion" as they were. 
> > > 
> > > That is correct.
> > > 
> > > >  We see the following similar terms used. Please let us know if these 
> > > > should be made uniform or if they should remain distinct terms.
> > > 
> > > They are all equivalent, I have edited the XML accordingly.
> > > 
> > > > We note that <tt> tags were used to enclose the following terms in this 
> > > > document. 
> > > 
> > > XML edited accordingly.
> > > 
> > > > Please note we have expanded these abbreviations as follows
> > > 
> > > LGTM
> > > 
> > > > We note that the original xml file submitted used <eref> to point to 
> > > > specific sections in the [tor-spec].  Please review if these links 
> > > > should remain with the following in mind. Please let us know how you 
> > > > would like to proceed.
> > > 
> > > As, even during the course of drafting this RFC, the links became 
> > > outdated, I have opted to remove any <eref>s to Tor spec documents.
> > > 
> > > >  Please consider whether the “type" attribute of any sourcecode element 
> > > > should be set and/or has been set correctly.
> > > 
> > > I'm happy with the type attributes as they are.
> > > 
> > > > Please note that CSR (the abbreviation at least) is not used in either 
> > > > Appendix B.2.b of [cabf-br] or [RFC2986].  Please review the citations 
> > > > in this document and let us know if any updates are necessary/desirable.
> > > 
> > > I've expanded the abbreviation to Certificate Request where appropriate 
> > > in the XML.
> > > Any statements contained in this email are personal to the author and are 
> > > not necessarily the statements of the company unless specifically stated. 
> > > AS207960 Cyfyngedig, having a registered office at 13 Pen-y-lan Terrace, 
> > > Caerdydd, Cymru, CF23 9EU, trading as Glauca Digital, is a company 
> > > registered in Wales under № 12417574, LEI 875500FXNCJPAPF3PD10. ICO 
> > > register №: ZA782876. UK VAT №: GB378323867. EU VAT №: EU372013983. 
> > > Turkish VAT №: 0861333524. South Korean VAT №: 522-80-03080. AS207960 
> > > Ewrop OÜ, having a registered office at Lääne-Viru maakond, Tapa vald, 
> > > Porkuni küla, Lossi tn 1, 46001, trading as Glauca Digital, is a company 
> > > registered in Estonia under № 16755226. Estonian VAT №: EE102625532. 
> > > Glauca Digital and the Glauca logo are registered trademarks in the UK, 
> > > under № UK00003718474 and № UK00003718468, respectively.
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 
> > > Ar Llun, 2 Meh 2025 am 22:53 <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> ysgrifennodd:
> > > Q, 
> > > 
> > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as 
> > > necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
> > > 
> > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has been
> > >      updated as follows:
> > > 
> > > The short title that appears in the running header of the pdf output has 
> > > been updated to use double quotes around ".onion" to match the use in the 
> > > full title.
> > > 
> > > Original:
> > > 
> > > ACME for .onion
> > > Current:
> > > ACME for ".onion"
> > > -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 2) <!--[rfced] Q - currently our tooling does not support the request to
> > >      remove the period from following your first name.  Please see
> > >      https://github.com/ietf-tools/xml2rfc/issues/1204.  We have
> > >      commented on this issue to raise awareness that you document is
> > >      now in AUTH48 and publication is nearing.
> > > 
> > > 
> > > -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 3) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
> > > the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 4) <!--[rfced] Please review our edits to the following text to ensure we
> > >      have maintained your intent.
> > > 
> > > Original:
> > >    The ACME server SHOULD follow redirects; note that these MAY be
> > >    redirects to non-".onion" services, and the server SHOULD honour
> > >    these.
> > > 
> > > Current:
> > >    The ACME server SHOULD follow redirects.  Note that these MAY be
> > >    redirects to services that are not ".onion" and that the server
> > >    SHOULD honor these.
> > > 
> > > -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 5) <!--[rfced] Please review our updates to this text carefully and let
> > >      us know any objections.
> > > 
> > > Original:
> > > 
> > >    An "onion-csr-01" MUST NOT be used to issue certificates for non
> > >    ".onion" Special-Use Domain Names.
> > > 
> > > Current:
> > >    An "onion-csr-01" challenge MUST NOT be used to issue certificates for 
> > >    Special-Use Domain Names that are not ".onion".
> > > -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 6) <!--[rfced] Please note that sourcecode elements in this document
> > >      exceed our character limit (see
> > >      https://authors.ietf.org/en/drafting-in-plaintext for the 69
> > >      character limit on sourcecode elements).  Please review
> > >      throughout the document and let us know how these may be changed
> > >      (or feel free to update/replace in the edited XML file yourself
> > >      if this is more convenient).-->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 7) <!--[rfced] Please note that we have updated to use "flags" (plural)
> > >      to match the use in Section 4.1.1 of RFC 8659.  Please let us
> > >      know any objections.
> > > 
> > > 
> > > Original:
> > >    The contents of "flag", "tag", and "value" are as per Section 4.1.1
> > >    of [RFC8659].
> > > 
> > > Current:
> > >    The contents of "flags", "tag", and "value" are as per Section 4.1.1
> > >    of [RFC8659]. 
> > > 
> > > -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 8) <!--[rfced] In the following instances, please review the use of the
> > >      BCP 14 keyword with the surrounding text (i.e., also and always
> > >      specifically).
> > > 
> > > 
> > > Original:
> > > 
> > > A hidden service operator MAY also not wish to publish a CAA record
> > > set in its service descriptor to avoid revealing information about the
> > > service operator.
> > > 
> > > Perhaps:
> > > Also, a hidden service operator MAY not wish to publish a CAA record
> > > set in its service descriptor to avoid revealing information about the
> > > service operator.
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 
> > > Original:
> > > In any case, the server always MAY fetch the record set from the
> > > service descriptor.
> > > 
> > > Perhaps:
> > > In any case, the server MAY fetch the record set from the
> > > service descriptor.
> > > 
> > > -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 9) <!--[rfced] We have deleted the "it" before the comma in this
> > >      sentence.  Please let us know if some other rephrase was
> > >      intended.
> > > 
> > > Original:
> > >    If an ACME server does not support fetching a service's CAA record
> > >    set from its service descriptor it, and the ACME client does not
> > >    provide an "onionCAA" object in its finalize request the ACME server
> > >    MUST respond with an "onionCAARequired" error to indicate this.
> > > 
> > > Current:
> > >    If an ACME server does not support fetching a service's CAA record
> > >    set from its service descriptor, and the ACME client does not
> > >    provide an "onionCAA" object in its finalize request, the ACME server
> > >    MUST respond with an "onionCAARequired" error to indicate this.
> > > 
> > > -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 10) <!--[rfced] Please note that any changes affecting IANA registries
> > >      will be communicated to IANA by the RPC once AUTH48 completes.-->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 11) <!-- [rfced] Please note that we believe Section 9.7.8 should actually
> > >      read 9.8.4 in the following.  Please review and confirm our
> > >      update.
> > > 
> > > Original:
> > >    Per this document, one new entry has been added to the "ACME
> > >    Validation Methods" registry defined in Section 9.7.8 of [RFC8555]...
> > > 
> > > Current:
> > >    Per this document, one new entry has been added to the "ACME
> > >    Validation Methods" registry defined in Section 9.7.4 of [RFC8555]...
> > > 
> > >         -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 12) <!-- [rfced] We believe "ACME Directory Metadata Fields" registry is
> > >      defined in Section 9.7.6 of [RFC8555], not Section 9.7.8. Please
> > >      confirm our update.
> > >         -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 13) <!--[rfced] Please review our update to this text to expand MAC and
> > >      avoid using an abbreviation as a verb (see
> > >      https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#abbrev_as_verb).  If
> > >      this does not correctly capture your intent, please let us know
> > >      how we may rephrase.
> > > 
> > > Original:
> > >    The second layer descriptor is signed, encrypted and MACed in a way
> > >    that only a party with access to the secret key of the hidden service
> > >    could manipulate what is published there.
> > > 
> > > Current:
> > >    The second layer descriptor is signed, encrypted, and encoded using
> > >    Message Authentication Code (MAC) in a way that only a party with
> > >    access to the secret key of the hidden service could manipulate
> > >    what is published there.
> > > 
> > > 
> > > -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 14) <!--[rfced] These sentences seem redundant.  Please review.
> > > 
> > > Original:
> > > 
> > >    Tor directory servers are inherently untrusted entities, and as such
> > >    there is no difference in the security model for accepting CAA
> > >    records directly from the ACME client or fetching them over Tor.
> > >    There is no difference in the security model between accepting CAA
> > >    records directly from the ACME client and fetching them over Tor; the
> > >    CAA records are verified using the same hidden service key in either
> > >    case.
> > > -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 15) <!-- [rfced] Please note that we have changed the URL of the
> > >      [spoiled-onions] reference to point use the DOI rather than the
> > >      original URL, which took the reader to a preview page that they
> > >      couldn't back out of.  Please review.
> > > 
> > > Original:
> > > https://rdcu.be/d1ZRp
> > > 
> > > Current:
> > > https://doi.org/10.1007/978-3-319-08506-7_16
> > > 
> > > -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 16) <!-- [rfced] Please review. We found an open-access version of
> > > [spoiled-onions] on arXiv. The information appears to match the
> > > current reference; however, some author names are missing. Would you
> > > prefer to use this open-access version of this reference? -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 17)   <!--[rfced] We have the following questions related to terminology
> > >        used throughout the document:
> > > 
> > > a) We assume ".onion" is pronounced as "dot onion" and have thus left
> > > instances of "a ".onion" as they were.  If this is incorrect, please
> > > let us know and we can update to "an ".onion"" as necessary.
> > > 
> > > b) We see the following similar terms used.  Please let us know if these 
> > > should be made uniform or if they s
> > > hould remain distinct terms:
> > > 
> > > first layer hidden service descriptor vs. first layer descriptor
> > > second layer hidden service descriptor vs. second layer descriptor
> > > Hidden Service vs. hidden service
> > > ".onion" service vs. "Onion Services"
> > > http-01 vs. "http-01"
> > > tls-alpn-01 vs. "tls-alpn-01"
> > > 
> > > c) We note that <tt> tags were used to enclose the following terms in
> > > this document.  Please review use for consistency as we note they were
> > > not used on every occurrence.  Please also review the output of the
> > > <tt> tags in all formats (html, pdf, text) to ensure satisfaction.
> > > 
> > > <tt>applicantSigningNonce</tt>
> > > <tt>auth-client</tt>
> > > <tt>caSigningNonce</tt>
> > > <tt>"onion-csr-01".</tt>
> > > -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 18) <!--[rfced] Please review the following questions/comments regarding
> > >      abbreviation use in this document:
> > > 
> > > a) Please note we have expanded these abbreviations as follows (per
> > > the reference in parentheses when applicable).  Please review and let
> > > us know any objections/corrections:
> > > 
> > > 
> > > CSR - Certificate Signing Request (RFC 8555)
> > > PEM - Privacy Enhanced Mail (RFC 4648)
> > > TLD - Top-Level Domain
> > > ECH - Encrypted ClientHello (draft-ietf-tls-esni-24)
> > > 
> > > b) Please note that CSR (the abbreviation at least) is not used in
> > > either Appendix B.2.b of [cabf-br] or [RFC2986].  Please review the
> > > citations in this document and let us know if any updates are
> > > necessary/desirable.
> > > 
> > > -->
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 19) <!--[rfced] We note that the original xml file submitted used <eref>
> > >      to point to specific sections in the [tor-spec].  Please review
> > >      if these links should remain with the following in mind:
> > > 
> > > a) These links make a difference in the output formats as follows:
> > > 
> > > html (where the section names are linked):
> > > To this end, an additional field in the challenge object is defined to 
> > > allow the ACME server to advertise th
> > > e Ed25519 public key it will use (as per the "Authentication during the 
> > > introduction phase" section of [tor-
> > > spec]) to authenticate itself when retrieving the hidden service 
> > > descriptor.
> > > 
> > > txt (where the link appears in-line):
> > > To this end, a new field is added to the second layer hidden service
> > > descriptor, as defined in the "Second layer plaintext format"
> > > (https://spec.torproject.org/rend-spec/hsdesc-encrypt.html#second-
> > > layer-plaintext) section of [tor-spec] with the following format
> > > (defined using the notation from the "netdoc document meta-format"
> > > (https://spec.torproject.org/dir-spec/netdoc.html) section of
> > > [tor-spec]):
> > > 
> > > b) These links may become stale quickly as [tor-spec] mentions an
> > > upcoming reorganization and that it is a living document.
> > > 
> > > An alternative would be to remove the links but include the section
> > > names in the text itself (i.e., not use <eref>) and allow the reader
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> > > --------------------------------------
> > > RFC9799 (draft-ietf-acme-onion-07)
> > > 
> > > Title            : Automated Certificate Management Environment (ACME) 
> > > Extensions for ".onion" Special-Use Domain Names
> > > Author(s)        : Q. Misell
> > > WG Chair(s)      : Yoav Nir, Tomofumi Okubo
> > > 
> > > Area Director(s) : Deb Cooley, Paul Wouters
> > > 
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> > > <rfc9799.xml>
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