Hi Sandy, all,

Thanks for the review and guidance.

On 07/11, Sandy Ginoza wrote:
> Hi Job,
> 
> [...]
> >>>> Manifest vs manifest (6487 and 9286 seem to use "manifest" except where 
> >>>> it's part of a specific name.)  
> > 
> > Personally I think "Manifest" would be clearer for the reader, because
> > lower-case manifest can also be a verb. But, I also understand a
> > desire for some consistency with 6487/9286.
> > 
> > If 9286 wouldn't exist, what would've been the recommended approach from
> > your professional editing perspective?
> > 
> > There also is another RFC publication coming down the pipeline
> > (draft-ietf-sidrops-manifest-numbers), this provides an opportunity to
> > establish a new 'norm' (should we opt to go for Manifest in this
> > document).
> 
> In general, we recommend against overcapitalization because it can
> detract from readability.  Regarding “manifest”, when read in context,
> we do not think readers will be confused.  If you disagree and think
> some instances may be confusing, please let us know.  

I agree that the lower-case form is preferable here. I believe confusion
with other possible uses of the term "manifest" is minimal in this and
similar future documents.

I have re-read the latest version, and have nothing further to add.
Please take this as approval to proceed to publication from me.

Cheers,

Ben

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