Hi Sabrina,

Looks great! 

Thank you,
RFC Editor/st

> On Jul 30, 2025, at 6:24 PM, Sabrina Tanamal via RT <iana-mat...@iana.org> 
> wrote:
> 
> Hi Sarah, 
> 
> Thanks for catching this. The file has been updated: 
> 
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry/ns/yang/ietf-ospf-admin-tags.txt
> 
> Thanks,
> Sabrina
> 
> On Wed Jul 30 21:07:49 2025, starr...@staff.rfc-editor.org wrote:
>> 
>> Hi IANA,
>> 
>> Please make the following update to the "IETF XML Registry" at
>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry/ns/yang/ietf-ospf-admin-
>> tags.txt.
>> 
>> Minor update: add period after "namespace"
>> 
>> Old:
>>  XML: N/A; the requested URI is an XML namespace
>> 
>> New:
>>  XML: N/A; the requested URI is an XML namespace.
>> 
>> Thank you,
>> RFC Editor/st
>> 
>>> On Jul 30, 2025, at 3:50 PM, Sarah Tarrant <starr...@staff.rfc-
>>> editor.org> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi Yingzhen,
>>> 
>>> Thank you for your reply. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48
>>> status page for this document (http://www.rfc-
>>> editor.org/auth48/rfc9825).
>>> 
>>> Thank you,
>>> RFC Editor/st
>>> 
>>>> On Jul 30, 2025, at 3:18 PM, Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.i...@gmail.com>
>>>> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Hi Sarah,
>>>> 
>>>> Thanks for making the changes.
>>>> 
>>>> I approve the publication of this version.
>>>> 
>>>> Thanks,
>>>> Yingzhen
>>>> 
>>>> On Wed, Jul 30, 2025 at 12:33 PM Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com>
>>>> wrote:
>>>> Hi Sarah,
>>>> Thanks for the quick turnaround. It looks good to me.
>>>> Acee
>>>> 
>>>>> On Jul 30, 2025, at 3:25 PM, Sarah Tarrant <starr...@staff.rfc-
>>>>> editor.org> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Hi Yingzhen and Acee,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thank you for providing the updated yang tree module. I've updated
>>>>> the files as you requested.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we
>>>>> do not make changes once it has been published as an RFC.
>>>>> 
>>>>> The updated files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.txt
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.pdf
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.html
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.xml
>>>>> 
>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825-diff.html (comprehensive
>>>>> diff)
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825-auth48diff.html (AUTH48
>>>>> changes only)
>>>>> 
>>>>> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to
>>>>> view the most recent version.
>>>>> 
>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9825
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>> RFC Editor/st
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On Jul 30, 2025, at 1:50 PM, Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com>
>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Hi Sarah,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I had made that change for some of the other lines in the tree but
>>>>>> I guess I missed some lines since I did it manually. Let's use the
>>>>>> non-wrapped version that Yingzhen generated.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Then I believe we can also get rid of this note and reference:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> This document uses the graphical representation of data models per
>>>>>> [RFC8340]. NOTE: '\' line wrapping is per [RFC8792].
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> [RFC8792] Watsen, K., Auerswald, E., Farrel, A., and Q. Wu,
>>>>>> "Handling Long Lines in Content of Internet-Drafts and
>>>>>> RFCs", RFC 8792, DOI 10.17487/RFC8792, June 2020,
>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8792>.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>> Acee
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Jul 30, 2025, at 2:41 PM, Yingzhen Qu
>>>>>>> <yingzhen.i...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Hi Sarah,
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Sorry for the late response.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> For the YANG tree in section 7.1, instead of using "\" for line
>>>>>>> wrapping, I regenerated the tree with line length equal to 69.
>>>>>>> Please see attached and let me know what you think.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>> Yingzhen
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Wed, Jul 30, 2025 at 7:34 AM Sarah Tarrant
>>>>>>> <starr...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>> Hi Yingzhen,
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> This is a friendly reminder that we await your approval prior to
>>>>>>> moving forward in the publication process.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> The updated files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.txt
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.pdf
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc0825.xml
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825-diff.html
>>>>>>> (comprehensive diff)
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>> (AUTH48 changes only)
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to
>>>>>>> view the most recent version.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9825
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>> RFC Editor/st
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Jul 23, 2025, at 11:33 AM, Sarah Tarrant <starr...@staff.rfc-
>>>>>>>> editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Hi Acee,
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply. We have updated the document
>>>>>>>> accordingly and marked your approval on the AUTH48 status page
>>>>>>>> for this document (see https://www.rfc-
>>>>>>>> editor.org/auth48/rfc9825).
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> We will await approval from Yingzhen prior to moving forward in
>>>>>>>> the publication process.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> The updated files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.txt
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.pdf
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.html
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc0825.xml
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825-diff.html
>>>>>>>> (comprehensive diff)
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>> (AUTH48 changes only)
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to
>>>>>>>> view the most recent version.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9825
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/st
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> On Jul 23, 2025, at 11:27 AM, Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com>
>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Hi Sarah,
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> I approve this version with the correction of one typo
>>>>>>>>> (attached).
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>>>> Acee
>>>>>>>>> <rfc9825-orig.diff.html>
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> On Jul 23, 2025, at 9:03 AM, Sarah Tarrant
>>>>>>>>>> <starr...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Hi Acee,
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thank you so much for taking a second, careful look at the
>>>>>>>>>> diff. I've made the "Sub-TLV" changes you requested and have
>>>>>>>>>> no further questions.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> We will await approvals from each you and Yingzhen prior to
>>>>>>>>>> moving forward in the publication process.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> The updated files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.txt
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.pdf
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.html
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc0825.xml
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please
>>>>>>>>>> refresh):
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>> (comprehensive diff)
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>> (AUTH48 changes only)
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser
>>>>>>>>>> to view the most recent version.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9825
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/st
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> On Jul 22, 2025, at 3:13 AM, Acee Lindem
>>>>>>>>>>> <acee.i...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Sarah,
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> You didn't apply my last changes correctly. "Sub-TLV" should
>>>>>>>>>>> be capitalized when used as a specific sub-TLV, i.e., a
>>>>>>>>>>> proper noun. See the attached diff.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>>>>>> Acee
>>>>>>>>>>> <rfc9825-orig.diff.html>
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> On Jul 21, 2025, at 12:36 PM, Sarah Tarrant
>>>>>>>>>>>> <starr...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Acee and AD*,
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> AD* - please see question #7 below.  We've included Acee's
>>>>>>>>>>>> response and updated accordingly, but we still need official
>>>>>>>>>>>> AD approval and/or edits.
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 7) <!--[rfced] *AD - We note that the first paragraph in
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the Security
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Considerations section does not match what appears at
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-security-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> guidelines>.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Acee: This is intended. There seems to be confusion here
>>>>>>>>>>>>> that this document
>>>>>>>>>>>>> is primarily to standardize the YANG module.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Additionally, we have made some updates in this section to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> closer
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> reflect the boilerplate. Please review this section and
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> let us know
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> if any further updates are necessary.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Acee: Ok. This is a moving target - I took the latest from
>>>>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Note that Med also commented that the security protocols
>>>>>>>>>>>>> referenced as examples
>>>>>>>>>>>>> should be informational references.
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> See Section 8 in https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825-
>>>>>>>>>>>> auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> ---
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Acee - Thank you for your reply. We have updated the
>>>>>>>>>>>> document accordingly.
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Please note that we did use the lowercase "sub-TLV" (instead
>>>>>>>>>>>> of "Sub-TLV") to match recent past RFCs.
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> While we await AD approval, please review the document
>>>>>>>>>>>> carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not make changes
>>>>>>>>>>>> once it has been published as an RFC.  Contact us with any
>>>>>>>>>>>> further updates or with your approval of the document in its
>>>>>>>>>>>> current form.  We will await approvals from each author
>>>>>>>>>>>> prior to moving forward in the publication process.
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> The updated files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.txt
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.pdf
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825.html
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc0825.xml
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please
>>>>>>>>>>>> refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>> (comprehensive diff)
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9825-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>> (AUTH48 changes only)
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your
>>>>>>>>>>>> browser to view the most recent version.
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9825
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/st
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Jul 20, 2025, at 5:48 AM, Acee Lindem
>>>>>>>>>>>>> <acee.i...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi RFC Editor,
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Refer to the attached RFC diff.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Jul 17, 2025, at 5:11 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Authors and AD*,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> also in the XML file.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> *AD, please see question #7 below.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] We note that most of the recently
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> published RFCs containing
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> YANG modules format their titles as "A YANG Data Model
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> for...", for example:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC 9094 - A YANG Data Model for Wavelength Switched
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Optical Networks (WSONs)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC 9093 - A YANG Data Model for Layer 0 Types
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC 9067 - A YANG Data Model for Routing Policy
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please consider whether the title of this document should
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> be updated.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Extensions to OSPF for Advertising Prefix Administrative
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Tags
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> A Yang Data Model for Extensions to OSPF for Advertising
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Prefix
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Administrative Tags
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> No. The YANG model augmentations are ancillary to the
>>>>>>>>>>>>> additional function provided by the OSPF administrative
>>>>>>>>>>>>> tags. As for you suggestion, note that it is "YANG" and
>>>>>>>>>>>>> never "Yang".
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> that appear in
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> None.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We updated "OSPFv2 Extended Prefix
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> LSA" to "OSPFv2 Extended
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Prefix Opaque LSA" to match RFC 7684. Please let us know
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> of any objections.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Ok.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have added line breaks to the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> YANG tree
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> diagram as well as a note and reference to RFC 8792 for
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the '\'
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> line wrapping. Please review.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> I don't like this - please format as specified in the
>>>>>>>>>>>>> attached diff.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] FYI - As the RFC 2119 and RFC 8174 keywords
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> are not used
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> within the YANG module, we have removed the keywords
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> boilerplate
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> paragraph from the module.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Ok.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 6) <!--[rfced] Note that the YANG module has been updated
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> per the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> formatting option of pyang.  Please let us know of any
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> concerns.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Ok
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 7) <!--[rfced] *AD - We note that the first paragraph in
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the Security
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Considerations section does not match what appears at
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-security-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> guidelines>.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> This is intended. There seems to be confusion here that
>>>>>>>>>>>>> this document
>>>>>>>>>>>>> is primarily to standardize the YANG module.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Additionally, we have made some updates in this section to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> closer
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> reflect the boilerplate. Please review this section and
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> let us know
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> if any further updates are necessary.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Ok. This is a moving target - I took the latest from draft-
>>>>>>>>>>>>> ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Note that Med also commented that the security protocols
>>>>>>>>>>>>> referenced as examples
>>>>>>>>>>>>> should be informational references.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Throughout the text, the following
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> terminology appears to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> be used interchangeably. Please review these occurrences
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and let us know
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> if/how they may be made consistent.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Administrative Tag vs. admin tag vs. administrative tag
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Administrative Tag sub-TLV vs. Administrative Tag TLV vs.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> administrative tag TLV
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> E-Inter-Area-Prefix-LSA vs. E-Inter-Area-Prefix LSA
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  E-Intra-Area-Prefix-LSA vs. E-Intra-Area-Prefix LSA
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Extended Prefix TLV vs. extended prefix TLV
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Prefix Administrative Tag sub-TLV vs. prefix admin tag
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> sub-TLV
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Ok - I've updated all these for consistency.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have added expansions for the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> following abbreviations
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> review each
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Border Gateway Protocol - Link State (BGP-LS)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Network Configuration Protocol (NETCONF)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Ok.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> portion of the online
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Style Guide <https://www.rfc-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> this nature typically
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> result in more precise language, which is helpful for
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> readers.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> but this should
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> still be reviewed as a best practice.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> I didn't find any violations either.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Acee
>>>>>>>>>>>>> <rfc9825-orig.diff.html>
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> <ietf-ospf-admin-tags.tree>
>>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>> 
>>> 
> 

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