Hi,
I have carefully reviewed this version and am happy with it. My answers to the
queries are in line below.
Regards/Ngā mihi
Brian Carpenter
On 12-Aug-25 15:46, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
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1) <!-- [rfced] This document updates RFC 7622, which has some errata.
Please review the errata reported for RFC 7622 and let us know if
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Agreed, these errata are irrelevant,
2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
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3) <!-- [rfced] The title for [ONE-NET] in the text and the reference entry are
different. Which is correct? We see both forms used in the URL in the
reference entry. Let us know which form to use consistently in this
document.
Original:
5. The National Marine Electronics Association (NMEA) has defined
the "OneNet Marine IPv6 Ethernet Networking Standard" [ONE-NET],
which uses IPv6 link-local addresses exclusively.
...
[ONE-NET] NMEA, "The OneNet Standard for IP Networking of Marine
Electronic Devices", 2023,
<https://www.nmea.org/nmea-onenet.html>.
-->
The heading of that web page is "OneNet® Marine IPv6 Ethernet Networking Standard" so I
think we should go with that everywhere. I leave it to your policy whether to include the
"®".
4) <!-- [rfced] How may we update "e.g., [LL-HACK]"?
Original:
Such requirements have already spawned hacks to work around current
limitations (e.g., [LL-HACK], which is no longer maintained and has
been archived).
Perhaps:
Such requirements have already spawned hacks to work around current
limitations (e.g., the Snippets:IPv6 link local connect hack [LL-HACK],
which is no longer maintained and has been archived).
Or:
Such requirements have already spawned hacks to work around current
limitations (e.g., the hack described in [LL-HACK], which is no longer
maintained and has been archived).
-->
The second variant seems fine to me.
5) <!-- [rfced] Please review "NULL characters" in the sentence below. Should
this instead be "NULs" (that is, referring to the specific ASCII control
code) or "null characters"?
Original:
For example, a UI implementation should not allow ASCII
NULL characters in a zone identifier string as this could cause
inconsistencies in subsequent string processing.
-->
Good catch. How about simply s/NULL/NUL/ ? That would be quite clear to the reader. I
think "NULs" would look a bit strange.
6) <!-- [rfced] We reordered one name in the Acknowledgments section as it
seems that the intent was to list the names in alphabetical order by last
name. Let us know any concerns.
-->
Good catch.
7) <!-- [rfced] FYI - Per earlier discussion, the RPC will update metadata for
RFC 3986 and create an erratum report on RFC 6874 as described below
after publication of this document.
From email from Sandy Ginoza (RPC) on 20 May 2025 with subject line "Re:
Datatracker State Update Notice: <draft-ietf-6man-zone-ui-10.txt>":
This is the current metadata for RFC 3986 (STD 66): Obsoletes RFC 2732, RFC
2396, RFC 1808, Updates RFC 1738, Updated by RFC 6874, RFC 7320, RFC 8820
I believe the goal is for it to be updated as follows (remove mention of
6874): Obsoletes RFC 2732, RFC 2396, RFC 1808, Updates RFC 1738, Updated by
RFC 7320, RFC 8820
For the reader that may land on RFC 6874, add an erratum on RFC 6874 with the
content (or similar) below when draft-ietf-6man-zone-ui is published as an
RFC.
This was found unimplementable and no longer updates RFC 3986. Please see
[RFC9844] for more info.
-->
Yes, good.
8) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online
Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
and let us know if any changes are needed. Updates of this nature typically
result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
For example, please consider whether "native" should be updated:
Original:
It will become critical as IPv6-only or IPv6-mostly
networks [RFC8925] [I-D.ietf-v6ops-6mops], with nodes lacking native
IPv4 support, appear.
-->
No change. This is a term of art.
Thanks.
Thank you.
RFC Editor/rv
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RFC9844 (draft-ietf-6man-zone-ui-10)
Title : Entering IPv6 Zone Identifiers in User Interfaces
Author(s) : B. Carpenter, B. Hinden
WG Chair(s) : Bob Hinden, Jen Linkova
Area Director(s) : Erik Kline, Éric Vyncke
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