Hi Alanna,

> On Aug 13, 2025, at 12:01 PM, Alanna Paloma <apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org> 
> wrote:
> 
> Hi Mahesh,
> 
> We have slightly updated your suggested text; see below. 
> 
> Additionally, we have a clarifying question. Should the section citation be 
> updated to match the template (Section 3.7 vs. Section 3.7.1)?
> 
> Current:
>   The remainder of this section is modeled after the template described
>   in Section 3.7 of [YANG-GUIDELINES].
> 
> Template (https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-security-guidelines):
>   This section is modeled after the template described in Section 3.7.1 
>   of [RFC-to-be draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis].

Reference should be to Section 3.7.1. Thanks for catching it.

I am not sure of the first line though that starts with “Template (https://…)”. 
That would be odd, as we have the reference to the template in rfc8407bis 
already. Giving another reference, this time to the wiki would be a duplicate 
reference. Please drop that line.

Cheers.

> 
> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9834.xml
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9834.txt
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9834.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9834.pdf
> 
> The relevant diff files have been posted here:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9834-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9834-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes)
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9834-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH48 changes 
> side by side)
> 
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/ap
> 
>> On Aug 13, 2025, at 10:35 AM, Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanand...@gmail.com> 
>> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Alanna,
>> 
>> Thanks for making the changes. Just one nit. Can we say?
>> 
>> OLD:
>> This section is modeled after the template described ...
>> 
>> NEW:
>> The remaining section is modeled after the template described …
>> 
>> Thanks.
>> 
>> 
>>> On Aug 13, 2025, at 9:27 AM, Alanna Paloma <apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org> 
>>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi Mahesh,
>>> 
>>> Thank you for your reply. We have updated the Security Considerations 
>>> section accordingly; see the files below.
>>> 
>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
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>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9834.txt
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9834.html
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9834.pdf
>>> 
>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here:
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9834-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9834-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes)
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9834-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH48 
>>> changes side by side)
>>> 
>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9834
>>> 
>>> Thank you,
>>> RFC Editor/ap
>>> 
>>>> On Aug 12, 2025, at 10:00 PM, Mahesh Jethanandani 
>>>> <mjethanand...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Hi Alice,
>>>> 
>>>>> On Aug 11, 2025, at 10:48 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Authors, AD,
>>>>> 
>>>>> * Mahesh (as AD), please reply to #13.
>>>>> 
>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as 
>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 1) <!--[rfced] In the RFC's title, we suggest removing the single quotes 
>>>>> and hyphens. Other expansions of "ACaaS" in the document and the related
>>>>> documents would be updated accordingly.  Is the suggested title
>>>>> acceptable?  (This is similar to how "Software as a Service (SaaS)"
>>>>> typically does not appear with hyphens when used as a noun.)
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> YANG Data Models for Bearers and 'Attachment Circuits'-as-a-Service 
>>>>> (ACaaS)
>>>>> 
>>>>> Suggested:
>>>>> YANG Data Models for Bearers and Attachment Circuits as a Service (ACaaS)
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 2) <!--[rfced] In the second sentence below, does the customer 
>>>>> retrieve "a reference" or "an indication" or something else?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> The customers can then retrieve a provider-assigned bearer reference that
>>>>> they will include in their AC service requests.  Likewise, a customer
>>>>> may retrieve whether their bearers support a synchronization
>>>>> mechanism such as Sync Ethernet (SyncE) [ITU-T-G.781].
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> The customers can then retrieve a provider-assigned bearer reference that
>>>>> they will include in their AC service requests.  Likewise, a customer
>>>>> may retrieve a reference if their bearers support a synchronization
>>>>> mechanism such as Sync Ethernet (SyncE) [ITU-T-G.781].  
>>>>> -->   
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] FYI, we have reformatted some of the definitions in the
>>>>> "Conventions and Definitions" section to reflect what appears in 
>>>>> RFCs-to-be 9833 and 9835. Please review and let us know any changes.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] We note that the definitions for "Network controller" and
>>>>> "Service orchestrator" in RFC-to-be 9835 each have an additional sentence
>>>>> that does not appear in the definition in this document. Should this
>>>>> sentence be added? (Specifically, "One or multiple..." and "A service
>>>>> orchestrator may interact..." are the additional sentences.)
>>>>> 
>>>>> This document (current):
>>>>> Network controller:  Denotes a functional entity responsible for the
>>>>>    management of the service provider network.
>>>>> ...
>>>>> Service orchestrator:  Refers to a functional entity that interacts
>>>>>    with the customer of a network service.
>>>>> 
>>>>>    A service orchestrator is typically responsible for the attachment
>>>>>    circuits, the PE selection, and requesting the activation of the
>>>>>    requested service to a network controller.
>>>>> 
>>>>> RFC-to-be 9835:
>>>>> Network controller:  Denotes a functional entity responsible for the
>>>>>    management of the service provider network.  One or multiple
>>>>>    network controllers can be deployed in a service provider network.
>>>>> ...
>>>>> Service orchestrator:  Refers to a functional entity that interacts
>>>>>    with the customer of a network service.
>>>>> 
>>>>>    A service orchestrator is typically responsible for the attachment
>>>>>    circuits, the Provider Edge (PE) selection, and requesting the
>>>>>    activation of the requested services to a network controller.
>>>>> 
>>>>>    A service orchestrator may interact with one or more network
>>>>>    controllers.
>>>>> -->      
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] Since "L2VPN" and "L3VPN" are defined prior to these terms 
>>>>> listed
>>>>> and to make the definitions more concise, may we update to "LxVPN"? Note 
>>>>> that
>>>>> this would also match the text in RFC-to-be 9835.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> Service provider network:  A network that is able to provide network
>>>>>    services (e.g., Layer 2 VPN, Layer 3 VPN, or Network Slice
>>>>>    Services).
>>>>> 
>>>>> Service provider:  An entity that offers network services (e.g.,
>>>>>    Layer 2 VPN, Layer 3 VPN, or Network Slice Services).
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> Service provider network:  A network that is able to provide network
>>>>>    services (e.g., LxVPN or Network Slice Services).
>>>>> 
>>>>> Service provider:  An entity that offers network services (e.g.,
>>>>>    LxVPN or Network Slice Services).
>>>>> -->   
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 6) <!--[rfced] Figure 5 uses "CE#1" and "CE#2", while other figures in the
>>>>> document use "CE1" and "CE2". May we update the CEs in Figure 5 to match
>>>>> the other figures in the document?
>>>>> 
>>>>> If so, both artworks (svg and ascii-art) will be updated accordingly.
>>>>> -->    
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 7) <!--[rfced] To avoid repetition of "future", may we remove "in the
>>>>> future" from this sentence?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> Future placement criteria
>>>>> ('constraint-type') may be defined in the future to accommodate
>>>>> specific deployment contexts.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> Future placement criteria
>>>>> ('constraint-type') may be defined to accommodate specific deployment
>>>>> contexts.
>>>>> -->   
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 8) <!--[rfced] To avoid redundancy, may we remove "when requesting a 
>>>>> bearer"?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> A bearer request can indicate a device, a site, a
>>>>> combination thereof, or a custom information when requesting a
>>>>> bearer.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> A bearer request can indicate a device, a site, a
>>>>> combination thereof, or custom information.
>>>>> -->      
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 9) <!--[rfced] To avoid redundancy, may we remove "actually"? Note that 
>>>>> there 
>>>>> are a number of other places throughout the document with similar 
>>>>> phrasing,
>>>>> which would also be updated.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> 'actual-start':  Reports the actual date and time when the bearer
>>>>>    actually was enabled.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> 
>>>>> 'actual-start':  Reports the actual date and time when the bearer
>>>>>    was enabled.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 10) <!--[rfced] For clarity, may we update "by an identifier" to "of an 
>>>>> identifier"?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> All the above mentioned profiles are uniquely identified by the
>>>>> provider server by an identifier.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> All the above mentioned profiles are uniquely identified by the
>>>>> provider server of an identifier.
>>>>> -->   
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 11) <!--[rfced] We note that RFC 4271 is only cited in the "ietf-ac-svc" 
>>>>> YANG
>>>>> module.  In order to have a 1:1 matchup between the references section
>>>>> and the text, may we add it to the RFCs listed prior to the YANG module
>>>>> and add a normative reference for it?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> This module uses types defined in [RFC6991], [RFC9181], [RFC8177],
>>>>> and [I-D.ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac].  
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps::
>>>>> This module uses types defined in [RFC4271], [RFC6991], [RFC9181], 
>>>>> [RFC8177],
>>>>> and [RFC9833].
>>>>> ...
>>>>> [RFC4271]  Rekhter, Y., Ed., Li, T., Ed., and S. Hares, Ed., "A
>>>>>            Border Gateway Protocol 4 (BGP-4)", RFC 4271,
>>>>>            DOI 10.17487/RFC4271, January 2006,
>>>>>            <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc4271>.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 12) <!--[rfced] FYI, the YANG module "ietf-ac-svc" has been updated per 
>>>>> the 
>>>>> formatting option of pyang.  Please let us know any concerns.
>>>>> (No changes were needed for "ietf-bearer-svc".)
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 13) <!--[rfced] *AD - We note that there is some text in the
>>>>> Security Considerations section that differs from the template on
>>>>> <https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-security-guidelines>. 
>>>>> Please review and let us know if the text is acceptable.
>>>>> 
>>>>> For example:
>>>>> - Paragraph 3, the first 2 sentences are not from the template:
>>>>> 
>>>>> "Servers MUST verify that requesting clients are entitled to access
>>>>> and manipulate a given bearer or AC.  For example, a given customer
>>>>> must not have access to bearers/ACs of other customers."
>>>> 
>>>> That is ok to add, while maintaining the rest of the statements from the 
>>>> template.
>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> - This sentence is not present:
>>>>> "There are no particularly sensitive RPC or action operations."
>>>>> If it should be added, should it be at the end of the section?
>>>> 
>>>> Yes, it should be added to the end of the section.
>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> From the guidelines page:
>>>>> If the data model contains any particularly sensitive RPC or action
>>>>> operations, then those operations must be listed here, along with an
>>>>> explanation of the associated specific sensitivity or vulnerability
>>>>> concerns. Otherwise, state: "There are no particularly sensitive RPC or
>>>>> action operations."
>>>>> 
>>>>> - The last two paragraphs (after the readable nodes section) do 
>>>>> not seem to be within a section of the template.
>>>>> -->  
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> These two paragraphs can be moved to the beginning of the Security 
>>>> Considerations section before the statement that says “This section is 
>>>> modeled after the template …”, just to be clear that it is not part of the 
>>>> template. Alternatively, they could be moved into a sub-section.
>>>> 
>>>> Thanks.
>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 14) <!--[rfced] "Step (3)" does not seem accurate here. Does it refer to 
>>>>> item 3 
>>>>> in the list of assumptions, i.e., "3. The customer provisions the 
>>>>> networking
>>>>> logic..."? If so, may it be updated as follows?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> *  The Cloud Provider for the configuration per Step (3) above.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> *  The Cloud Provider for the configuration per item 3 above.
>>>>> -->       
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 15) <!--[rfced] We note that this text was indented. As it is unclear to 
>>>>> us why 
>>>>> it was indented, we have removed the indentation. Was the intent for this
>>>>> to be a "Note"? If yes, would you like this text to be in an <aside> 
>>>>> element, 
>>>>> which is defined as "a container for content that is semantically less 
>>>>> important
>>>>> or tangential to the content that surrounds it"
>>>>> (https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside).
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>>    The module supports MD5 to basically accommodate the installed BGP
>>>>>    base (including by some Cloud Providers).  Note that MD5 suffers
>>>>>    from the security weaknesses discussed in Section 2 of [RFC6151]
>>>>>    and Section 2.1 of [RFC6952].
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> |  Note: The module supports MD5 to basically accommodate the installed 
>>>>> |  BGP base (including by some Cloud Providers).  Note that MD5 suffers
>>>>> |  from the security weaknesses discussed in Section 2 of [RFC6151]
>>>>> |  and Section 2.1 of [RFC6952].
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 16) <!--[rfced] To clarify the citation of 
>>>>> I-D.ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue 
>>>>> (RFC-to-be 9836), we have added "AC Glue" preceding it. Please review 
>>>>> and let us know if further updates are needed.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> In any case, the parent
>>>>> AC is a stable identifier, which can be consumed as a reference by
>>>>> end-to-end service models for VPN configuration such as
>>>>> [I-D.ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue], Slice Service
>>>>> [I-D.ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang], etc.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Current:
>>>>> In any case, the parent
>>>>> AC is a stable identifier, which can be consumed as a reference by
>>>>> end-to-end service models for VPN configuration such as
>>>>> AC Glue [RFC9836], Slice Service [NSSM], etc.
>>>>> -->   
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 17) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We updated artwork to sourcecode in Sections 5.1, 
>>>>> 5.2.1,
>>>>> 5.2.2.1, 5.2.4, 5.2.5, 5.2.5.1, 5.2.5.2, 5.2.5.3, 5.2.5.3.1, 5.2.5.3.2,
>>>>> 5.2.5.3.3, 5.2.5.3.4, 5.2.5.3.5, 5.2.5.3.6, 5.2.5.4, 5.2.5.5, and 5.2.5.6
>>>>> and Appendix B. Please review whether this is correct. We note that a 
>>>>> YANG tree diagram is typically held in a sourcecode element
>>>>> (https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#sourcecode).
>>>>> 
>>>>> In addition, please review the "type" attribute of each sourcecode element
>>>>> in the XML file to ensure correctness. 
>>>>> 
>>>>> The current list of preferred values for "type" is available at
>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types>.
>>>>> If the current list does not contain an applicable type, feel free to
>>>>> suggest additions for consideration. Note that it is also acceptable
>>>>> to leave the "type" attribute not set.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 18) <!--[rfced] Abbreviations
>>>>> 
>>>>> a) Both the expansion and the acronym for the following terms are used
>>>>> throughout the document. Would you like to update to using the expansion 
>>>>> upon
>>>>> first usage and the acronym for the rest of the document?
>>>>> 
>>>>> attachment circuit (AC)
>>>>> Customer Edge (CE)
>>>>> Layer 2 VPN (L2VPN)
>>>>> Layer 3 VPN (L3VPN)
>>>>> Service Function (SF)
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> b) FYI - We have added expansions for the following abbreviations
>>>>> per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each
>>>>> expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Customer VLAN (CVLAN)
>>>>> IP Address Management (IPAM)
>>>>> Layer 2 VPN (L2VPN)
>>>>> Layer 3 VPN (L3VPN)
>>>>> Network Configuration Protocol (NETCONF)
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 19) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
>>>>> 
>>>>> a) Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to be used 
>>>>> inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us know if/how 
>>>>> they
>>>>> may be made consistent.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Network Slice Service vs. Slice Service vs. IETF Network Slice Service
>>>>> 
>>>>> b) To reflect how "parent AC" is consistently lowercase, may we update
>>>>> instances of "Child AC" to "child AC"? Note that there is mixed usage
>>>>> throughout the document.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 20) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the 
>>>>> online
>>>>> Style Guide 
>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature 
>>>>> typically
>>>>> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
>>>>> 
>>>>> For example, please consider whether the following should be updated: 
>>>>> natively
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>> 
>>>>> RFC Editor/ap/ar
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> On Aug 11, 2025, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>>>> 
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>>>>> RFC Editor
>>>>> 
>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>> RFC9834 (draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-20)
>>>>> 
>>>>> Title            : YANG Data Models for Bearers and 'Attachment 
>>>>> Circuits'-as-a-Service (ACaaS)
>>>>> Author(s)        : M. Boucadair, R. Roberts, O. Gonzalez de Dios, S. 
>>>>> Barguil Giraldo, B. Wu
>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Joe Clarke, Benoît Claise
>>>>> Area Director(s) : Mohamed Boucadair, Mahesh Jethanandani
>>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Mahesh Jethanandani
>>>> mjethanand...@gmail.com
>>> 
>>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Mahesh Jethanandani
>> mjethanand...@gmail.com
>> 
>> 
>> 
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