I approve the changes to the ABNF, I recall the reason for these changes is related to XML typo.
I also have a note from Rob """ Section 3: "For example, the following is a conforming JSON text:" Section 5: "the example would remain a conforming JSON Text" I think "text" should be lowercase in both instances, but they should match. """ Has this comment been addressed? Regards, OS, ART AD On Wed, Aug 13, 2025 at 6:04 PM <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > Authors and *AD, > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) > the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > > *AD, please review question #4. > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in > the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> > > > 2) <!--[rfced] FYI: In Section 2, we updated the enlarged "⨉" to "*" > for multiplication as the enlarged "⨉" is not used in the RFC > Series. If "x" (lowercase) is preferred instead of "*", please > let us know. > > Original: > There are 1,114,112 (17 ⨉ 2^16) code points;... > > Current: > There are 1,114,112 (17 * 2^16) code points;... > --> > > > 3) <!--[rfced] Please clarify this sentence - does option A or B capture > the intended meaning, or do you prefer otherwise? > > Original: > Unicode describes a variety of encoding forms, ways to marshal code > points into byte sequences. > > Perhaps A: > Unicode describes a variety of encoding forms and ways to > marshal code points into byte sequences. > > Perhaps B: > Unicode describes a variety of encoding forms that can be used to > marshal code points into byte sequences. > --> > > > 4) <!--[rfced] AD: As requested by the authors, we made the following > update within the sourcecode in Section 2 (see the last > line). Please review and provide your approval of this change. > > Original: > xml-character = > %x9 / %xA / %xD / ; useful controls > %x20-D7FF / ; exclude surrogates > %xE000-FFFD / ; exclude FFFE and FFFF nonchars > %x100000-10FFFF > > Current: > xml-character = > %x9 / %xA / %xD / ; useful controls > %x20-D7FF / ; exclude surrogates > %xE000-FFFD / ; exclude FFFE and FFFF nonchars > %x10000-10FFFF > --> > > > 5) <!--[rfced] FYI: As requested by the authors, we made the following > update in Section 6: > > Original: > ...the example would remain a conforming JSON Text but... > > Current: > ...the example would remain a conforming JSON text but... > --> > > > 6) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "type" attribute of each sourcecode > element > in the XML file to ensure correctness. If the current list of preferred > values for "type" > (https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types) > does not contain an applicable type, then feel free to let us know. > Also, it is acceptable to leave the "type" attribute not set. > --> > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] Some author comments are present in the XML. Please > confirm that > no updates related to these comments are outstanding. Note that the > comments will be deleted prior to publication. > --> > > > 8) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have added expansions for the following > abbreviations > per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each > expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness. > > Concise Binary Object Representation (CBOR) > Internet JSON (I-JSON) > --> > > > 9) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the > online > Style Guide < > https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> > and let us know if any changes are needed. 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