I’m reviewing the html document as I have forgot how to read XML bloat,
Affiliation: do I really need one ? OLD: Retired/Unaffiliated NEW: Retired/formerly Cloudflare or NEW: Comment: I hate reading RFC’s where lower case of RFC2119 words appears in a section that has RFC2119 words, see the 3 used of should in section 3.5 that reads like a specification section not as guidance section Section 3.5 paragraph 1 OLD: that should not appear NEW: that SHOULD NOT appear Section 3.5 paragraph 1 OLD: response should be. NEW: response ought to be. Section 3.5 paragraph 2 OLD: resolver should not forward NEW: resolver SHOULD NOT forward Section 3.5 paragraph 3 OLD: type that should not appear NEW: type that ought not appear Section 4. paragraph 3 OLD: The NSEC3 parameters should be set to algorithm 1 NEW: The NSEC3 parameters SHOULD be set to algorithm 1 Section 7.1 OLD: insists that pseudo-types must be clear NEW: insists that pseudo-types are not set Section: 2 paragraph 3 OLD: in addition to the required RRSIG NEW: in addition to the mandated RRSIG Other points: Section 4: redundant word confuses message OLD: This protection is already better provided NEW: This protection is better provided Section 3.1 bad guidance on TTL value OLD: a.example.com. 3600 IN NSEC \000.a.example.com. RRSIG NSEC NXNAME NEW: a.example.com. 300 IN NSEC \000.a.example.com. RRSIG NSEC NXNAME Section 3.4 (bad TTL guidance) OLD: sub.example.com. 3600 IN NSEC sub\000.example.com. NS RRSIG NSEC NEW: sub.example.com. 300 IN NSEC sub\000.example.com. NS RRSIG NSEC I will wait for others to comment on those suggested changes before giving my approval Olafur > On Aug 13, 2025, at 15:19, Rebecca VanRheenen > <rvanrhee...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > Hi Christian, > > Thanks for the reply! We noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page for > this document (https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9824). Thank you also for > reviewing Med’s suggestions for the question about inclusive language; we > updated the document accordingly. > > We will now wait for Ólafur’s review and approval. He let us know that he > will be traveling until mid August and will review once he returns.
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