On 12/09/2025 21:10, Alanna Paloma wrote:
Hi Gorry and Tom,
Thank you for your replies. We have updated as requested.
Please note that we have some follow-up questions/comments.
Ah - I see I didn't understand, thanks for the clarification.
7) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether any of the notes in this document
should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container for
content that is semantically less important or tangential to the
content that surrounds it"
(https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside).
-
All extra notes/comments can all be discarded at this stage.
) To clarify, would you like these notes within the document to be discarded, moved
into the <aside> element, or left as is?
Section 3:
Note: UDP allows an Upper Layer protocol to send datagrams with or
without payload data (with or without UDP Options). These are
delivered across the network to the remote Upper Layer. When
DPLPMTUD is implemented within the UDP transport service, probe
packets that include a REQ or RES UDP Option can be sent with no UDP
payload. In this case, these probe packets were not generated by a
sending application; therefore, the corresponding received datagrams
are not delivered to the remote application.
Section 3.3:
Note: A receiver that only responds when there is a datagram queued
for transmission by the Upper Layer could potentially receive
multiple datagrams with a REQ Option before it can respond. When
sent, the RES Option will only acknowledge the latest received token
value. A sender would then conclude that any earlier REQ Options
were not successfully received. However, DPLPMTUD does not usually
result in sending more than one probe packet per timeout interval,
and a delay in responding will already have been treated as a failed
probe attempt. Therefore, this does not significantly impact
performance, although a more prompt response would have resulted in
DPLPMTUD recording reception of all probe packets.
I was refering to XML comments, and made the wrong call.
These notes NEED to appear in the published RFC as notes, yes please
format them as aside elements.
Gorry
8) <!-- [rfced] We note that this document uses "UDP Options", while RFC-to-be 9868
<draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options> uses "UDP options" (lowercase). Please review and let us know if these should be
made consistent. Perhaps lowercase for "UDP options" in general, but "Option" when referring to a specific
option (e.g., Response (RES) Option).
See <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9868.html>.
-->
This document should be updated to become consistent with the RFC that will
define UDP options, please ammend this document to match the final format used
in the options specification.
) FYI, we will hold off on making these updates until we’ve received a response
from RFC-to-be 9868 regarding this terminology.
OK
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https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9869.txt
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9869.html
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9869.pdf
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https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9869-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes)
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9869-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH48 changes
side by side)
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Thank you,
Alanna Paloma
RFC Production Center
On Sep 12, 2025, at 9:05 AM, Tom Jones <[email protected]> wrote:
Please ammend the draft RFC. I plan to check the rendered document in
detail after you complete this update.
I think Gorry and I concur on these edits, Gorry thanks for the quick reply.
- Tom
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