I'm not certain about #2, but #1 and #3 definitely appear to be breaking 
changes. I'd recommend strongly against making breaking changes to a format in 
AUTH48 — this is a time for editorial corrections to the document as approved, 
and catching instances where an editorial change accidentally created an 
unintended technical change.

________________________________
From: Evgenii Kliuchnikov <[email protected]>
Sent: Monday, September 22, 2025 10:58 AM
To: Madison Church <[email protected]>
Cc: Lode Vandevenne <[email protected]>; Jyrki Alakuijala <[email protected]>; 
Zoltan Szabadka <[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]>; 
Mike Bishop <[email protected]>; Gorry Fairhurst <[email protected]>; RFC 
Editor <[email protected]>; [email protected] 
<[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9841 <draft-vandevenne-shared-brotli-format-15> 
for your review

Hello.

   I propose the following amendments:
1)
  Current:
"Then distance values of pairs in range (max allowed distance + 1).. 
(LZ77_DICTIONARY_LENGTH + max allowed distance) are interpreted as references 
starting in the LZ77 dictionary at the byte at dictionary_address. If length is 
longer than (LZ77_DICTIONARY_LENGTH - dictionary_address), then the reference 
continues to copy (length - LZ77_DICTIONARY_LENGTH + dictionary_address) bytes 
from the regular LZ77 window starting at the beginning."
  Proposed:
"Then distance values of pairs in range (max allowed distance + 1).. 
(LZ77_DICTIONARY_LENGTH + max allowed distance) are interpreted as references 
starting in the LZ77 dictionary at the byte at dictionary_address. If length is 
greater than (LZ77_DICTIONARY_LENGTH - dictionary_address), then the reference 
is invalid."
  Rationale:
Simplifies both encoder and decoder. Reduces ambiguity of determining of what 
is "window starting" at the moment of continuation of copying. Most likely 
"continuation" feature brings nearly 0 effect on density.

2)
  Current:
"SIZE_BITS_BY_LENGTH. An array of 28 unsigned 8-bit integers, indexed by word 
lengths 4 to 31. The value represents log2(number of words of this length), 
with the exception of 0 meaning 0 words of this length. The max allowed length 
value is 15 bits. OFFSETS_BY_LENGTH is computed from this as 
OFFSETS_BY_LENGTH[i + 1] = OFFSETS_BY_LENGTH[i] + (SIZE_BITS_BY_LENGTH[i] ? (i 
<< SIZE_BITS_BY_LENGTH[i]) : 0)."
  Proposed:
"SIZE_BITS_BY_LENGTH. An array of 28 unsigned 8-bit integers, indexed by word 
lengths 4 to 31. The value 0 means 0 words of this length. Values in range 
1..15 represent power of two for number of words. OFFSETS_BY_LENGTH is computed 
from this as OFFSETS_BY_LENGTH[i + 1] = OFFSETS_BY_LENGTH[i] + 
(SIZE_BITS_BY_LENGTH[i] ? (i << SIZE_BITS_BY_LENGTH[i]) : 0)."
  Rationale:
Though formulae uses bit shift for offset it is unclear that number of words is 
exact power of two (or is zero). Moreover log2 is usually a floating-point 
function.

3)
  Current:
"STRING_LENGTH. The length of the entry contents. 0 for the last (terminating) 
entry of the transform list. For other entries, STRING_LENGTH must be in range 
1..255. The 0 entry must be present and must be the last byte of the 
PREFIX_SUFFIX_LENGTH bytes of prefix/suffix data, else the stream must be 
rejected as invalid."
  Proposed:
"STRING_LENGTH. The length of the entry contents. 0 for the last (terminating) 
entry of the transform list. For other entries, STRING_LENGTH must be in range 
1..16. The 0 entry must be present and must be the last byte of the 
PREFIX_SUFFIX_LENGTH bytes of prefix/suffix data, else the stream must be 
rejected as invalid."
  Rationale:
The maximum word size is 32. By adding 255 bytes of suffix and prefix it 
becomes 542. It is unlikely that long prefixes/suffixes will give considerable 
density improvements. But it will definitely make efficient encoder 
implementations much more complex. Decoder also have minor drawbacks from 
too-long transformed words. Altogether, if all the stringlets have maximal 
size, stringlet library becomes 64KiB long; with proposal - a bit over 4KiB is 
maximum.

Best regards,
  Eugene.

On Thu, Sep 18, 2025 at 5:05 PM Madison Church 
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
Jyrki, Thai, Evgenii,

This is a friendly reminder that we have yet to hear back from you regarding 
this document’s readiness for publication.

Please review the AUTH48 status page (http://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9841) 
for further information and the previous messages in this thread.

Thank you!

Madison Church
RFC Production Center

> On Sep 11, 2025, at 8:45 AM, Madison Church 
> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>
> Hi Lode,
>
> Thank you for your reply! We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 status 
> page (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9841).
>
> Once we receive approvals from Jyrki, Thai, and Evgenii, we will move this 
> document forward in the publication process.
>
> Thank you!
>
> Madison Church
> RFC Production Center
>
>> On Sep 11, 2025, at 3:38 AM, Lode Vandevenne 
>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>
>> Hello Madison,
>>
>> I also approve the RFC for publication
>>
>> Thank you and kind regards,
>> Lode Vandevenne
>>
>> Am Di., 9. Sept. 2025 um 23:52 Uhr schrieb Madison Church 
>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>:
>> Hi All,
>>
>> Mike - Thank you for your reply! We have marked your approval as AD on the 
>> AUTH48 status page (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9841).
>>
>> Authors - We now await approvals from Jyrki, Thai, Evgenii, and Lode. Once 
>> we receive all author approvals, we will move this document forward in the 
>> publication process.
>>
>> Thank you!
>>
>> Madison Church
>> RFC Production Center
>>
>>> On Sep 9, 2025, at 2:37 PM, Mike Bishop 
>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>>
>>> It's related to work in the HTTP WG, so I'll take it. I've reviewed the 
>>> Auth48 changes, including that sentence in the abstract, and I 
>>> approve.From: Madison Church 
>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>
>>> Sent: Monday, September 8, 2025 4:26 PM
>>> To: Gorry Fairhurst <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>; 
>>> Mike Bishop <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>
>>> Cc: RFC Editor 
>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>; 
>>> [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> 
>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>; 
>>> [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]><[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>;
>>>  Jyrki Alakuijala <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>; Zoltan 
>>> Szabadka <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>; 
>>> [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]><[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>;
>>>  [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> 
>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>; 
>>> [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> 
>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>
>>> Subject: Re: [ADs - Gorry and Mike] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9841 
>>> <draft-vandevenne-shared-brotli-format-15> for your review
>>> Hi Gorry and Mike,
>>>
>>> We are unsure who the responsible AD is for this document, so we are 
>>> requesting that one of you (as WIT ADs) review and approve an update that 
>>> was made to the last sentence of the Abstract (see 
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-auth48diff.html).
>>>
>>> Original:
>>> This document updates RFC 7932.
>>>
>>> Current:
>>> This document specifies an extension to the method defined in RFC 7932.
>>>
>>> Thank you!
>>>
>>> Madison Church
>>> RFC Production Center
>>>
>>>> On Sep 8, 2025, at 3:14 PM, Madison Church 
>>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Hi Zoltan,
>>>>
>>>> Thank you for your reply! We have noted your approval (see 
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9841).
>>>>
>>>> Once we receive all approvals listed on the AUTH48 status page, we will 
>>>> move this document forward in the publication process.
>>>>
>>>> Thank you!
>>>>
>>>> Madison Church
>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>
>>>>> On Sep 5, 2025, at 3:36 AM, Zoltan Szabadka 
>>>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> Hi Madison,
>>>>>
>>>>> I approve the RFC for publication.
>>>>>
>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>> Zoltan Szabadka
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> On Thu, Sep 4, 2025 at 8:31 PM Madison Church 
>>>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>>>> Hi Zoltan,
>>>>>
>>>>> Thank you for your reply! We have updated the files with your requested 
>>>>> changes and posted them below.
>>>>>
>>>>> Additionally, note that we have updated the text below from Section 9 to 
>>>>> match the text that appears in Section 9.2 of RFC-to-be-9842 
>>>>> (draft-ietf-httpbis-compression-dictionary-19), which is also in Cluster 
>>>>> 509 and normatively references this document (see 
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/cluster_info.php?cid=C509).
>>>>>
>>>>> Original:
>>>>>  Not only can the dictionary reveal information about the compressed
>>>>>  data, but vice versa, data compressed with the dictionary can reveal
>>>>>  the contents of the dictionary when an adversary can control parts of
>>>>>  data to compress and see the compressed size.
>>>>>
>>>>> Current:
>>>>>  The dictionary can reveal information about the compressed data and
>>>>>  vice versa. That is, data compressed with the dictionary can reveal
>>>>>  contents of the dictionary when an adversary can control parts of the
>>>>>  data to compress and see the compressed size.
>>>>>
>>>>> Updated files (please refresh):
>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.txt
>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.pdf
>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.html
>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.xml
>>>>>
>>>>> Updated diff files:
>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-diff.html
>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-auth48diff.html
>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>> side)
>>>>>
>>>>> Once we receive all approvals listed on the AUTH48 status page (see 
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9841), we will move this document 
>>>>> forward in the publication process.
>>>>>
>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>
>>>>>> On Sep 4, 2025, at 2:32 AM, Zoltan Szabadka 
>>>>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> I went over the diffs again, see below a few more minor findings.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Section 1.5
>>>>>>
>>>>>> "bytes with the MSB are also written on the left" should be changed to 
>>>>>> "we also write bytes with the MSB on the left"
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Section 3.1
>>>>>>
>>>>>> "If the dictionary is context dependent, it includes a lookup table of a 
>>>>>> 64 word list and transform list combinations."
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Here the indefinite article before 64 feels wrong, since it refers to 
>>>>>> combinations, which is plural, so "of a 64" should be changed to "of 64".
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Section 5.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> LZ7711 --> LZ77
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On Wed, Sep 3, 2025 at 4:38 PM Madison Church 
>>>>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> 
>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>> Hi Authors, *Francesca,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Authors - This is a friendly reminder that we have yet to hear back from 
>>>>>> you regarding this document’s readiness for publication.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> *Francesca - As responsible AD for this document, please review and 
>>>>>> approve the following change in the Abstract (see 
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-auth48diff.html).
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Please review the AUTH48 status page 
>>>>>> (http://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9841) for further information and 
>>>>>> the previous messages in this thread.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On Aug 27, 2025, at 2:07 PM, Madison Church 
>>>>>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> 
>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Hi Authors, *Francesca,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Authors - Thank you for your replies! We have updated the document per 
>>>>>>> your request. Please see below for updated files.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> *Francesca - As responsible AD for this document, please review and 
>>>>>>> approve the following change in the Abstract (see 
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-auth48diff.html).
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>> This document updates RFC 7932.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>> This document specifies an extension to the method defined in RFC 7932.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.txt
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.pdf
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.xml
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here:
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-diff.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status page, please see: 
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9841.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Once we receive all approvals, we will move this document forward in 
>>>>>>> the publication process.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> On Aug 26, 2025, at 7:53 AM, Zoltan Szabadka 
>>>>>>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> On Mon, Aug 25, 2025 at 9:59 PM Jyrki Alakuijala 
>>>>>>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>>>>>>> I think we should change: "This document updates RFC 7932."
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> It should be: "This document specifies an extension to the method 
>>>>>>>> defined in RFC 7932.""
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> As far as I see, there are two almost independent considerations here:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> 1) Whether the document should have the "Updates: 7932" field. This 
>>>>>>>> header was added during the AD review with the following reasoning 
>>>>>>>> (copied here for reference):
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> "I think this document should "Update" RFC 7932. The "Update" header 
>>>>>>>> tag is flexible in its usage, and doesn't necessarily mean that the 
>>>>>>>> updating document is a required feature of the original document 
>>>>>>>> ("extension" is a valid use of "Update"), instead it creates a forward 
>>>>>>>> link from the original doc to the update. The question in this case if 
>>>>>>>> having such a link from 7932 would be useful for readers of 7932. I 
>>>>>>>> tend to say yes."
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> I still agree with this, so I think we should keep the Updates header 
>>>>>>>> field.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> 2) How should this header field be reflected in the abstract.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> The relevant GENART review comment:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> "The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC7932, but 
>>>>>>>> the abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should."
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> In this regard I agree with Jyrki that the sentence "This document 
>>>>>>>> specifies an extension to the method defined in RFC 7932." expresses 
>>>>>>>> more accurately the relationship between the two RFCs.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> RFC9841 is its own thing that is strongly based on RFC7932, but does 
>>>>>>>> not change RFC7932.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> RFC7932 is unchanged in its previous use, including the "br" content 
>>>>>>>> encoding. Nothing is obsoleted, updated or changed.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> The RFC9841 defines a new different method "sbr" to the same 
>>>>>>>> ecosystem, but with different compromises. Most websites will likely 
>>>>>>>> keep using "br" (RFC7932), as "sbr" gives some speed gains, but 
>>>>>>>> requires a higher level of competence from the webmasters.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> What are your thoughts about this?
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> On Mon, Aug 25, 2025 at 6:32 PM Madison Church 
>>>>>>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> 
>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>> Hi Zoltan,
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Thank you for your feedback! We have updated the document as 
>>>>>>>> requested. Please see below for comments and updated files.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> On Aug 25, 2025, at 2:44 AM, Zoltan Szabadka 
>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Hi Madison,
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> I noticed some editorial changes that, in my opinion, changed the 
>>>>>>>>> meaning of the text. Could you restore these to the original version, 
>>>>>>>>> or maybe propose a wording that is even clearer?
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>>> Zoltan
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> ------------------
>>>>>>>>> In Section 3.1:
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> If the dictionary is context dependent, it includes a lookup table of
>>>>>>>>> 64 word list and transform list combinations.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>> If the dictionary is context dependent, it includes a lookup table of
>>>>>>>>> a 64-word list and transform list combinations.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> I think the original text should be restored here. The intended 
>>>>>>>>> meaning was that each entry of the lookup table is a word list and 
>>>>>>>>> transform list combination and there are 64 such entries.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> We appreciate the helpful explanation! The original text has been 
>>>>>>>> restored.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> --------------------
>>>>>>>>> In Section 8.4.10. The "per chunks listed:" heading got concatenated 
>>>>>>>>> to the end of the previous field (maybe an XML formatting mistake?). 
>>>>>>>>> I think it should remain in a separate line, as in the original:
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>> varint: Pointer into the file where the repeat metadata chunks are
>>>>>>>>> located or 0 if they are not present per chunk listed:
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> varint: Pointer into the file where this chunk begins.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> New:
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> varint: Pointer into the file where the repeat metadata chunks are 
>>>>>>>>> located or 0 if they are not present
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> per chunk listed: varint: Pointer into the file where this chunk 
>>>>>>>>> begins.
>>>>>>>>> ------------------------
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Thank you for catching this. We have updated this section to match the 
>>>>>>>> original formatting as closely as possible. Please let us know if the 
>>>>>>>> updates are correct.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.txt
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.pdf
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.html
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.xml
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-diff.html
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9841
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> On Fri, Aug 22, 2025 at 9:51 PM Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> 
>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>> Hi Authors,
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Zoltan - Thank you for the confirmation. We have updated the 
>>>>>>>>> indentation per your response.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> All - Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as 
>>>>>>>>> we do not make changes once it has been published as an RFC. Contact 
>>>>>>>>> us with any further updates or with your approval of the document in 
>>>>>>>>> its current form. We will await approvals from each author prior to 
>>>>>>>>> moving forward in the publication process.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.txt
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.pdf
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.html
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.xml
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-diff.html
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-auth48rfcdiff.html (side 
>>>>>>>>> by side)
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9841
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> On Aug 22, 2025, at 5:47 AM, Zoltan Szabadka 
>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> On Thu, Aug 21, 2025 at 9:33 PM Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> 
>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> Hi Zoltan,
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply! We have updated the document based on your 
>>>>>>>>>> response to our questions. Please see one followup query inline. 
>>>>>>>>>> Updated files have been posted below.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> 19) <!-- [rfced] May we update the following unordered list into a
>>>>>>>>>>> definition list for consistency with the rest of Section 8.2?
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>>       *  uncompressed: the raw bytes
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>       *  if "keep decoder", the continuation of the compressed 
>>>>>>>>>>> stream
>>>>>>>>>>>          which was interrupted at the end of the previous chunk.  
>>>>>>>>>>> The
>>>>>>>>>>>          decoder from the previous chunk must be used and its state
>>>>>>>>>>>          it had at the end of the previous chunk must be kept at the
>>>>>>>>>>>          start of the decoding of this chunk.
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>       *  brotli: the bytes are in brotli format [RFC7932]
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>       *  shared brotli: the bytes are in the shared brotli format
>>>>>>>>>>>          specified in Section 7
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>>>>       uncompressed: The raw bytes.
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>       "keep decoder": If "keep decoder", the continuation of the 
>>>>>>>>>>> compressed stream
>>>>>>>>>>>          that was interrupted at the end of the previous chunk.  The
>>>>>>>>>>>          decoder from the previous chunk must be used and its state
>>>>>>>>>>>          it had at the end of the previous chunk must be kept at the
>>>>>>>>>>>          start of the decoding of this chunk.
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>       brotli: The bytes are in brotli format [RFC7932].
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>       shared brotli: The bytes are in the shared brotli format
>>>>>>>>>>>       specified in Section 7.
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> The original unordered list format is correct here, since only one 
>>>>>>>>>>> of these is included, depending on the CODEC bits.
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> However, looking at this part now, the "X bytes: extra header 
>>>>>>>>>>> bytes" and "remaining bytes: the chunk contents" should be on the 
>>>>>>>>>>> same indentation level.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for the clarification! Regarding the indentation level of 
>>>>>>>>>> "X bytes: extra header bytes" and "remaining bytes: the chunk 
>>>>>>>>>> contents", please let us know how the text should be aligned. (That 
>>>>>>>>>> is, should "X bytes: extra header bytes" be indented further to 
>>>>>>>>>> align with "remaining bytes: the chunk contents"? Or should 
>>>>>>>>>> "remaining bytes: the chunk contents" be outdented to align with the 
>>>>>>>>>> current placement of "X bytes: extra header bytes"?)
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> The "remaining bytes: the chunk contents" should be outdented to 
>>>>>>>>>> align with the current placement of "X bytes: extra header bytes".
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>>> X bytes:  Extra header bytes, depending on CHUNK_TYPE.  If present,
>>>>>>>>>>    they are specified in the subsequent sections.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>    remaining bytes:  The chunk contents.  The uncompressed data in
>>>>>>>>>>       the chunk content depends on CHUNK_TYPE and is specified in the
>>>>>>>>>>       subsequent sections.  The compressed data has following format
>>>>>>>>>>       depending on CODEC:
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>       *  uncompressed: The raw bytes.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>       *  If "keep decoder", the continuation of the compressed stream
>>>>>>>>>>          that was interrupted at the end of the previous chunk.  The
>>>>>>>>>>          decoder from the previous chunk must be used and its state
>>>>>>>>>>          it had at the end of the previous chunk must be kept at the
>>>>>>>>>>          start of the decoding of this chunk.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>       *  brotli: The bytes are in brotli format [RFC7932].
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>       *  shared brotli: The bytes are in the shared brotli format
>>>>>>>>>>          specified in Section 7.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.txt
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.pdf
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.html
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841.xml
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9841-auth48rfcdiff.html (side 
>>>>>>>>>> by side)
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9841
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>
>>>>
>>
>> Lode Vandevenne
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