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Regards, -Pavan Juniper Business Use Only From: Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> Date: Monday, October 6, 2025 at 9:06 AM To: Balaji Rajagopalan <[email protected]>, Vishnu Pavan Kumar Beeram <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, John Scudder <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9863 <draft-ietf-pce-pcep-color-12> for your review [External Email. Be cautious of content] Hi Authors, This is a friendly reminder that we have yet to hear back from some of you regarding this document’s readiness for publication. 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Be cautious of content] >> >> >> Authors, >> >> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) >> the following questions, which are also in the source file. >> >> 1) <!--[rfced] We note that this document uses terms such as "PCEP Peer", >> "TE Tunnel", and "SR Policy" with the second word capitalized. If >> the intention is to use these terms with a specific meaning, would >> you like to add a sentence stating where to find that definition? >> For example: >> >> Perhaps: >> This document uses the following terms: >> >> PCEP Peer as defined in [RFC5440] >> SR Policy as defined in [RFC8402] >> --> >> >> [VPB] Yes, these terms have a specific meaning. It should be sufficient to >> add a reference at initial use. >> • "PCEP Peer" appears only once — please add RFC 5440 immediately after >> it. >> • "TE Tunnel" appears three times, while “TE tunnel” appears four times — >> RFC3209 uses both interchangeably. I would pick “TE Tunnel” and use it >> everywhere. >> • “SR Policy” and “SR policy” appear four times each; RFC9256 uses “SR >> Policy”. So, I would recommend using “SR Policy” everywhere. >> >> 2) <!-- [rfced] In many RFCs, the text following a TLV diagram is a >> definition >> list rather than a paragraph. Would you like to update this as follows? >> Current: >> Type has the value 67. Length carries a value of 4. The "color" >> field is 4 bytes long and carries the actual color value (specified >> as an unsigned integer). A color value of zero is allowed. >> Perhaps: >> Type: 67 >> Length: 4 >> Color: 4-byte field that carries the actual color value (specified >> as an unsigned integer). A value of zero is allowed. >> --> >> >> [VPB] No objection. >> >> 3) <!-- [rfced] Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to be >> used >> inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us know if/how they >> may be made consistent. >> COLOR TLV vs. Color TLV >> OPEN vs. open (one instance of each) >> TE Tunnel vs. TE tunnel >> SR Policy vs. SR policy >> --> >> >> [VPB] Please use COLOR TLV, TE Tunnel and SR Policy. >> The use of “Open” for referencing the Open message and “OPEN” for >> referencing the OPEN object is correct — please leave it as is. >> >> 4) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online >> Style Guide >> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/*inclusive_language__;Iw!!NEt6yMaO-gk!F5J-CjMecNcavet_CjRWiQ7PPub97i8j1wBJK4LCBFF6K-qfVcES5CYHhm5yQ3_r1HMtZf9omRUZe3m3sjK3nRAH$ >> > >> and let us know if any changes are needed. 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