Hi Sarah,

  1.
Abstract looks accurate to me.

Address for Andrew Stone can be updated to (since it was not filled in current 
version at all):  600 March Road, Ottawa Ontario K2K 2T6 Canada

  1.
No specific recommendations. Terminology section is following style of a few 
other PCEP RFCs (e.g. RFC8231 or RFC8281), but individual abbreviations were 
expanded based on comments/recommendations during IESG review.
  2.
References reviewed and looks fine to me.
  3.
Section 4.2 is updating multiple statements in RFC8664 and it is describing 
important extension potentially impacting future documents in PCEP WG.
  4.
I’m not aware about anything else.
  5.
Errata are not relevant.

Regards,
Samuel

From: Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]>
Date: Tuesday, 21 October 2025 at 18:25
To: Samuel Sidor (ssidor) <[email protected]>, Zoey Rose (atokar) 
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