Hi Brian,

We expect to announce the RFC later today, assuming there no issues discovered 
at this time. 

Thanks,
Sandy Ginoza
RFC Production Center



> On Nov 19, 2025, at 10:03 AM, Brian Campbell <[email protected]> 
> wrote:
> 
> Fantastic! Thanks again to all involved for the work in getting this done so 
> quickly. 
> 
> Sandy, I'm sorry to ask more of you, but can you say how long the remainder 
> of that publication process will likely take?
> 
> On Wed, Nov 19, 2025 at 9:55 AM Deb Cooley <[email protected]> wrote:
> That's the fastest Auth48 I've seen (since being an AD).  A mere 4 days?  
> Well done!
> 
> Deb
> 
> On Wed, Nov 19, 2025 at 11:21 AM Sandy Ginoza <[email protected]> 
> wrote:
> Authors,
> 
> Thank you for your reviews.  We have updated the document as requested and 
> posted the revised files.  With this update, we believe you have all approved 
> the RFC for publication.  As such, we will continue with the publication 
> process shortly. 
> 
> The approved files remain here until publication:
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901.xml
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901.txt
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901.pdf
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901.html
> 
> Diffs highlighting more recent updates only: 
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901-lastdiff.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side)
> 
> AUTH48 diffs: 
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901-auth48diff.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
> side)
> 
> Comprehensive diffs: 
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901-diff.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> 
> 
> Thank you,
> Sandy Ginoza
> RFC Production Center
> 
> 
> 
> > On Nov 18, 2025, at 4:27 PM, Brian Campbell <[email protected]> 
> > wrote:
> > 
> > Thank you Sandy (and Deb, Daniel, et. al),
> > 
> > I know this is a long and dense draft so have extra appreciation for the 
> > detailed work that's gone into the final editing. Thank you again.
> > 
> > I would like to request one more small update. Could you please remove Dick 
> > Hardt from the acknowledgements section? In the context of this document, 
> > Dick provided some tremendously unhelpful yet very time consuming feedback 
> > to the WG after the completion of WGLC. Despite frustration with that at 
> > the time, I followed my own somewhat liberal policy of naming everyone of 
> > whom I'm aware that has "contributed" in any fashion and added him to the 
> > Acknowledgements (in this PR). Just yesterday, however, this message was 
> > sent to the list that links back to this issue in the repo of a different 
> > draft, which is unrelated other than the Dick making the preposterous 
> > statement that he "participated in SD-JWT and provided guidance on JWT best 
> > practices to be included in SD-JWT", which is either a gross 
> > misrepresentation of his contribution or demonstrating a profound 
> > unawareness of the actual course of events. Neither is acceptable to me and 
> > I don't want the content of this document to further participate in the 
> > illusion.
> > 
> > Thank you for accommodating this last change request from me. Once that's 
> > done, I approve the content for RFC publication.
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > On Tue, Nov 18, 2025 at 10:24 AM Sandy Ginoza 
> > <[email protected]> wrote:
> > Hi Daniel, Deb,
> > 
> > Deb, thanks for your quick reply; we have noted your approval. 
> > 
> > 
> > Daniel, thanks again for your review.  We have updated the document as 
> > discussed below.  
> > 
> > >> [rfced] Unfortunately, it looks like I missed one previously. Please let 
> > >> us know how this line should be broken:
> > >> 
> > >> Warning: Too long line found (L4759), 1 characters longer than 72 
> > >> characters: 
> > >> "address": {"locality":"Schulpforta", "street_address":"Schulstr. 12"}
> > >> 
> > > This instance is in Appendix B, right? Then please add a line break after 
> > > the second colon.
> > 
> > Correct, Appendix B — apologies for not being more clear.  We have broken 
> > the line and indented the text after the break 3 spaces as shown below.  
> > Please let us know if any updates are desired.
> > 
> >    ...
> >    "family_name": "Möbius",
> >    "address": {"locality":"Schulpforta", "street_address":
> >       "Schulstr. 12"}
> >    ...
> > 
> > 
> > You can view the most recent updates (only) in the following diffs:
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901-lastdiff.html
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901-lastrfcdiff.html (side by 
> > side)
> > 
> > AUTH48 diffs (all changes made during AUTH48):
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901-auth48diff.html
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
> > side)
> > 
> > Comprehensive diffs:
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901-diff.html
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> > 
> > 
> > The current files are available here: 
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901.txt
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901.pdf
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901.html
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9901.xml
> > 
> > Please review and let us know if any additional updates are needed or if 
> > you approve the RFC for publication. 
> > 
> > Thank you,
> > Sandy Ginoza
> > RFC Production Center 
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > > On Nov 18, 2025, at 1:13 AM, Daniel Fett <[email protected]> wrote:
> > > 
> > > Hi Sandy,
> > > Thanks for your response and the changes to the document!
> > > Am 18.11.25 um 07:06 schrieb Sandy Ginoza:
> > >> Greetings Authors, Deb*,
> > >> 
> > >> * Deb, please see the update related to Appendix A.3 below and let us 
> > >> know if you approve. 
> > >> 
> > >> Thank you for your quick and thorough response to our questions! Please 
> > >> see some notes below. Note that we have snipped the resolved items. 
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >>> - Section 4.2.3: “The bytes of the output of the hash function MUST be 
> > >>> base64url 
> > >>> encoded”
> > >>> 
> > >>> DF: Is it correct to not hyphenize “base64url encoded” and “hex 
> > >>> encoded” in this sentence? I do understand that (and why) “base64url 
> > >>> encoding” is correct, as well as “base64url-encode”, but I would expect 
> > >>> “base64url-encoded” to be correct as well. (There are other instances 
> > >>> in the document as well.)
> > >>> 
> > >> [rfced] Per the Hyphenation Guide in the Chicago Manual of Style 
> > >> (Section 7.96), we believe no hyphen is correct. We believe it falls 
> > >> into the category of noun + participle, which means it would be 
> > >> hyphenated when appearing before then noun but otherwise open (for 
> > >> example, “a base64url-encoded value" but "a value that is base64url 
> > >> encoded"). We have not made any updates for this one; please let us know 
> > >> if you have concerns.
> > > Thank you for the explanation - makes sense. 
> > > 
> > >>> - Appendix A.3, first two sentences.
> > >>> 
> > >>> DF: The PID Rulebook referenced in the first sentence has since been 
> > >>> updated and an up-to-date example of how to use it with SD-JWT is now 
> > >>> provided in the SD-JWT VC specification. Nonetheless, the example in 
> > >>> the text is useful. The reference to the PID Rulebook should therefore 
> > >>> be removed. Please replace the first paragraph by the following text:
> > >>> 
> > >>> "This example shows how the artifacts defined in this specification 
> > >>> could be used in the context of SD-JWT-based Verifiable Credentials 
> > >>> (SD-JWT VC) [SD-JWT-VC] to represent a hypothetical identity credential 
> > >>> with the data of a fictional German citizen."
> > >>> 
> > >> [rfced] * Deb - We updated the text as requested and removed [EUDIW.ARF] 
> > >> from the references. Please review and let us know if this update is 
> > >> approved. 
> > >> 
> > > Thanks for the update, looks good to me. @Deb Let me know if there are 
> > > any questions regarding our preference to remove the ARF reference.
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Document title: We expanded "JWT" in the document 
> > >>> title. 
> > >>> Please let us know if you have any concerns. 
> > >>> 
> > >>> Original:
> > >>> Selective Disclosure for JWTs (SD-JWT)
> > >>> 
> > >>> Currently:
> > >>> Selective Disclosure for JSON Web Tokens (SD-JWTs) -->
> > >>> 
> > >>> DF: Works for me, but I don’t think we should use the plural for the 
> > >>> short form. (I see that in the edited document, plural forms were used 
> > >>> for JWT and JWS in the intro. My personal feeling is that this is not 
> > >>> required, but I can live with either.)
> > >>> 
> > >>> BC: I agree with not using plural for the short form. The title could 
> > >>> be “Selective Disclosure for JSON Web Token (SD-JWT)” or even 
> > >>> “Selective Disclosure for JSON Web Tokens (SD-JWT)” but the s on 
> > >>> SD-JWTs doesn’t work very well at all in my opinion. In the content of 
> > >>> the document I’d also generally prefer non-plural short forms like JWS 
> > >>> and JWT as referring to the conceptual thing. 
> > >>> 
> > >>> KY: I’m ok with Selective Disclosure for JSON Web Token (SD-JWT)
> > >>> 
> > >> [rfced] We removed the s. However, related to this discussion: 
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >>> a) The following terms appear to be used inconsistently in this
> > >>> document. Please let us know which form is preferred.
> > >>> 
> > >>> Selective Disclosure for JWTs (SD-JWT) /
> > >>> Selectively Disclosable JWT (SD-JWT)
> > >>> 
> > >> 
> > >> [rfced] We suggest removing the abbreviation from the document title. 
> > >> Perhaps the title could be: 
> > >> 
> > >> Selective Disclosure for JSON Web Tokens
> > >> 
> > >> That way, there will be one expansion and future documents will expand 
> > >> "SD-JWT” correctly as Selectively Disclosable JWT. 
> > >> 
> > >> We could add SD-JWT as a keyword in the database, so this document 
> > >> appears in RFC-Editor search results. 
> > > That sounds like a good solution to me.
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Sections 4 and 4.2.4.2: The following lines are too
> > >>> long for the text output. We get the following warnings from
> > >>> xml2rfc:
> > >>> 
> > >>> (252): Warning: Too long line found (L423), 5 characters longer than 72 
> > >>> characters: 
> > >>> <Issuer-signed JWT>~<Disclosure 1>~<Disclosure 2>~...~<Disclosure 
> > >>> N>~<KB-JWT>
> > >>> 
> > >>> (512): Warning: Too long line found (L786), 2 characters longer than 72 
> > >>> characters: 
> > >>> ["DE", {"...":"w0I8EKcdCtUPkGCNUrfwVp2xEgNjtoIDlOxc9-PlOhs"}, "US"]
> > >>> 
> > >>> Would the suggested line breaks be acceptable? If not, please let us
> > >>> know where these lines should be broken.
> > >>> 
> > >>> Perhaps: 
> > >>> <Issuer-signed JWT>~<Disclosure 1>~<Disclosure 2>~...
> > >>> ~<Disclosure N>~<KB-JWT>
> > >>> ...
> > >>> ["DE", {"...":"w0I8EKcdCtUPkGCNUrfwVp2xEgNjtoIDlOxc9-PlOhs"},
> > >>> "US"] -->
> > >>> 
> > >>> DF: In Section 4, a line break might confuse readers. I would suggest 
> > >>> instead to abbreviate “Disclosure” to “D.” and explain in the text:
> > >>> “The compact serialized format for the SD-JWT is the concatenation of 
> > >>> each part delineated with a single tilde ('~') character as follows, 
> > >>> where “D.1” to “D.N” represent the respective disclosures:
> > >>> 
> > >>> <Issuer-signed JWT>~<D.1>~<D.2>~...~<D.N>~”
> > >>> 
> > >>> — and the same for the following example.
> > >>> 
> > >> [rfced] We have updated as noted. Please review and let us know if the 
> > >> updates are as expected.
> > > - In the second example, a quotation mark was appended to the last tilda, 
> > > please remove that.
> > > - In the new text, typographic quotation marks (”) were used. In the rest 
> > > of the document, we have simple ones (").
> > > Other than that, the change looks good to me.
> > > 
> > >>> For Section 4.2.4.2, the proposed line break works.
> > >>> 
> > >>> KY: +1 to Daniel’s suggestion! Any other place in the spec we should be 
> > >>> using this abbreviation..?
> > >>> 
> > >>> DF: Not needed as far as I can see.
> > >>> 
> > >> [rfced] Unfortunately, it looks like I missed one previously. Please let 
> > >> us know how this line should be broken:
> > >> 
> > >> Warning: Too long line found (L4759), 1 characters longer than 72 
> > >> characters: 
> > >> "address": {"locality":"Schulpforta", "street_address":"Schulstr. 12"}
> > >> 
> > > This instance is in Appendix B, right? Then please add a line break after 
> > > the second colon.
> > 
> > Correct, Appendix B — apologies for not being more clear.  We have broken 
> > the line and indented the text after the break 3 spaces as shown below.  
> > Please let us know if any updates are desired.
> > 
> >    ...
> >    "family_name": "Möbius",
> >    "address": {"locality":"Schulpforta", "street_address":
> >       "Schulstr. 12"}
> >    ...
> > 
> > 
> > >>> DF: c) looks fine to me.
> > >>> 
> > >> [rfced] Ok - we have updated the lists using <strong> throughout. Please 
> > >> let us know if any updates are needed. 
> > >> 
> > >> Looking at where <strong> remains, we wonder whether the first 2 terms 
> > >> in section 1.2 should be updated as follows to be similar to the rest of 
> > >> the definition list appearing there. 
> > >> 
> > >> Current (Selective Disclosure included for context): 
> > >> *Base64url* denotes the URL-safe base64 encoding without padding
> > >> defined in Section 2 of [RFC7515].
> > >> 
> > >> Throughout this document, the term "claims" refers generally to
> > >> object properties (name/value pairs) as well as array elements.
> > >> 
> > >> Selective Disclosure:
> > >> Process of a Holder disclosing to a Verifier a subset of claims
> > >> contained in a JWT issued by an Issuer.
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> Perhaps: 
> > >> Base64url: Denotes the URL-safe base64 encoding without padding
> > >> defined in Section 2 of [RFC7515].
> > >> 
> > >> Claims: In this document, refers generally to object properties 
> > >> (name/value pairs) as well as array elements.
> > >> 
> > >> Selective Disclosure:
> > >> Process of a Holder disclosing to a Verifier a subset of claims
> > >> contained in a JWT issued by an Issuer.
> > >> 
> > > Works for me, but I would propose to use the singular form for Claims.
> > > 
> > >>> DF: d) Disclosure(s) should be upper-cased everywhere, except where 
> > >>> preceded by “selective”, “minimal”, or “unauthorized” as these 
> > >>> instances refer to the act of disclosing something instead of the data 
> > >>> structure. (Of course, where ‘disclosures’ refers to the property in 
> > >>> the data structure, it should not be upper-cased. These instances are 
> > >>> all formatted with <tt> or <sourcecode>.) 
> > >>> 
> > >> [rfced] We have reviewed instances of “disclosure” throughout and made 
> > >> some updates based on the guidance above. Please review closely and let 
> > >> us know any corrections. 
> > >> 
> > >> For example, we used Disclosure for "optional disclosure”, “disclosure 
> > >> data”, “disclosure object”, and “respective disclosures”.
> > >> 
> > >> Should “recursive disclosures” be “recursive Disclosures” as well?
> > > - Please use "recursive Disclosures", yes.
> > > - Please use upper case Disclosures in this sentence: " For example, use 
> > > of the ES512 signature algorithm would require a disclosure hash function 
> > > with at least 256-bit collision resistance, such as SHA-512."
> > > The other changes look good to me.
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> [rfced] New: 
> > >> e) Note that we added a period to <tt>nP5GYjw..</tt> (so it appears as 
> > >> <tt>nP5GYjw...</tt>) - please let us know if this is incorrect.
> > > That is correct, thanks.
> > > -Daniel
> > > 
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> Thank you again for your thorough review! 
> > >> 
> > >> Sandy Ginoza
> > >> RFC Production Center
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> 
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> > >>> RFC 9901 (draft-ietf-oauth-selective-disclosure-jwt-22)
> > >>> 
> > >>> Title : Selective Disclosure for JWTs (SD-JWT)
> > >>> Author(s) : D. Fett, K. Yasuda, B. Campbell
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