On Thu, Nov 20, 2025 at 2:14 PM Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]>
wrote:

> 1) As there may have been multiple updates made to the document during
> Last Call,
> please review the current version of the document:
>
> * Is the text in the Abstract still accurate?
>

Yes.


> * Are the Authors' Addresses, Contributors, and Acknowledgments
> sections current?
>

Yes.


> 2) Please share any style information that could help us with editing your
> document. For example:
>
> * Is your document's format or its terminology based on another document?
> If so, please provide a pointer to that document (e.g., this document's
> terminology should match DNS terminology in RFC 9499).
>

N/A


> * Is there a pattern of capitalization or formatting of terms? (e.g.,
> field names
> should have initial capitalization; parameter names should be in double
> quotes;
> <tt/> should be used for token names; etc.)
>

Nothing beyond what's already there.


> 3) Please review the entries in the References section carefully with
> the following in mind. Note that we will update as follows unless we
> hear otherwise at this time:
>
> * References to obsoleted RFCs will be updated to point to the current
> RFC on the topic in accordance with Section 4.8.6 of RFC 7322
> (RFC Style Guide).
>

OK.


> * References to I-Ds that have been replaced by another I-D will be
> updated to point to the replacement I-D.
>

OK.


> * References to documents from other organizations that have been
> superseded will be updated to their superseding version.
>

OK.

I believe all references are current, however.

4) Is there any text that should be handled extra cautiously? For example,
> are
> there any sections that were contentious when the document was drafted?


No.


> 5) Is there anything else that the RPC should be aware of while editing
> this
> document?


Nope.


> 6) This document uses one or more of the following text styles.
> Are these elements used consistently?
>
> * fixed width font (<tt/> or `)
> * italics (<em/> or *)
> * bold (<strong/> or **)
>

I believe all uses are consistent.


> 7) This document contains sourcecode:
>
> * Does the sourcecode validate?
>

Yes.  (It's example code.)


> * Some sourcecode types (e.g., YANG) require certain references and/or
> text
> in the Security Considerations section. Is this information correct?
>

I don't think there's any special requirement for the included examples.


> * Is the sourcecode type indicated in the XML? (See information about
> sourcecode types.)
>

No; where is this information?


> 8) Would you like to participate in the RPC Pilot Test for editing in
> kramdown-rfc?
> If so, please let us know and provide a self-contained kramdown-rfc file.
> For more
> information about this experiment, see:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>

No.


> 9) Would you like to participate in the RPC Pilot Test for completing
> AUTH48 in
> GitHub? If so, please let us know. For more information about this
> experiment,
> see:
>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=rpc-github-phase-0-pilot-test
> .
>

Sure.

-MSK
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