Hi Alana, 

> On Nov 28, 2025, at 5:28 PM, Acee Lindem <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Hi Alana, 
> 
> I have the following editorial comments on the current version. None of these 
> suggested changes should require AD approval. 
> 
> Note that I'm keeping my former LabN affiliation in the draft since I did 
> much of the work while working there. 
> 
> I have one question, does the YANG model itself need to have the first 
> instance of non-well-known acronyms expanded
> on the first usage? If so, there are some that need to be expanded (e.g., 
> SRMS, IP-FRR, and RLFA).

SRMS seems to be the only one needed. Please add the first-use expansion to the 
YANG model as well.

*** 694,703 ****

       grouping srms-preference-tlv {
         description
!          "The SRMS Preference TLV is used to advertise a preference
!           associated with the node that acts as an SRMS.  SRMS
!           advertisements with a higher preference value are preferred
!           over those with a lower preference value.";
         reference
           "RFC 8665: OSPF Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 3.4";
         container srms-preference-tlv {
--- 692,702 ----

       grouping srms-preference-tlv {
         description
!          "The Segment Routing Mapping Server (SRMS) Preference TLV is
!           used to advertise a preference associated with the node that
!           acts as an SRMS.  SRMS advertisements with a higher
!           preference value are preferred over those with a lower
!           preference value.";
         reference
           "RFC 8665: OSPF Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 3.4";
         container srms-preference-tlv {
***************


Thanks,
Acee


> 
> For the first change, note that we have been removing this statement from the 
> abstract in other RFCs (e.g., RFC 9020). 
> 
> ***************
> *** 74,82 ****
>     MPLS data plane.  The defined YANG data model is an augmentation to
>     the OSPF YANG data model [RFC9129].
> 
> -    The YANG data model in this document conforms to the Network
> -    Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) [RFC8342].
> -
>  1.1.  Requirements Language
> 
>     The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
> --- 74,79 ----
> ***************
> *** 105,111 ****
> 
>     The "ietf-ospf-sr-mpls" module defines both the data nodes to
>     configure OSPF Segment Routing MPLS extensions and the additions to
> !    the OSPF Link State Advertisements (LSAs) necessary to support
>     Segment Routing over MPLS (SR-MPLS).  The OSPF configuration
>     includes:
> 
> --- 102,108 ----
> 
>     The "ietf-ospf-sr-mpls" module defines both the data nodes to
>     configure OSPF Segment Routing MPLS extensions and the additions to
> !    OSPF Link State Advertisements (LSAs) necessary to support
>     Segment Routing over MPLS (SR-MPLS).  The OSPF configuration
>     includes:
> 
> ***************
> *** 348,354 ****
>         base extended-prefix-range-flag;
>         description
>           "Inter-Area flag.  Note that this is only applicable to OSPFv2
> !           since OSPFv3 advertises separate Inter-Area extended-LSA.";
>         reference
>           "RFC 8665: OSPF Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 4";
>       }
> --- 345,351 ----
>         base extended-prefix-range-flag;
>         description
>           "Inter-Area flag.  Note that this is only applicable to OSPFv2
> !           since OSPFv3 advertises separate Inter-Area extended-LSAs.";
>         reference
>           "RFC 8665: OSPF Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 4";
>       }
> ***************
> *** 500,506 ****
>           "RFC 8665: OSPF Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 4";
>         container extended-prefix-range-tlvs {
>           description
> !            "List of range of prefixes.";
>           list extended-prefix-range-tlv {
>             description
>               "Range of prefixes.";
> --- 497,503 ----
>           "RFC 8665: OSPF Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 4";
>         container extended-prefix-range-tlvs {
>           description
> !            "List of prefix ranges.";
>           list extended-prefix-range-tlv {
>             description
>               "Range of prefixes.";
> ***************
> *** 662,668 ****
>             leaf range-size {
>               type rt-types:uint24;
>               description
> !                "SID range.";
>             }
>             uses sid-tlv-encoding;
>           }
> --- 659,666 ----
>             leaf range-size {
>               type rt-types:uint24;
>               description
> !                "SID range.  The return of a zero value would indicate
> !                 an error.";
>             }
>             uses sid-tlv-encoding;
>           }
> ***************
> *** 869,875 ****
>           "This augments the OSPF protocol configuration with Segment
>            Routing over the MPLS data plane.  The following semantic
>            validation is to be performed for the configuration data:
> !            - Assure the binding policies prefixes do not overlap.";
>         reference
>           "RFC 9020: YANG Data Model for Segment Routing";
>         uses sr-mpls:sr-control-plane;
> --- 868,875 ----
>           "This augments the OSPF protocol configuration with Segment
>            Routing over the MPLS data plane.  The following semantic
>            validation is to be performed for the configuration data:
> !            - Assure prefixes specified in binding policies do not
> !              overlap.";
>         reference
>           "RFC 9020: YANG Data Model for Segment Routing";
>         uses sr-mpls:sr-control-plane;
> ***************
> *** 934,940 ****
>                  configuration.";
>             }
>             description
> !              "This augments LAN interface adj-sid with neighbor-id.";
>             leaf neighbor-id {
>               type inet:ip-address;
>               mandatory true;
> --- 934,941 ----
>                  configuration.";
>             }
>             description
> !              "This augments multi-access interface adj-sids with a
> !               neighbor-id.";
>             leaf neighbor-id {
>               type inet:ip-address;
>               mandatory true;
> ***************
> *** 1072,1078 ****
>           leaf protection-requested {
>             type boolean;
>             description
> !              "Describe if the Adj-SID is protected.";
>           }
>         }
>       }
> --- 1073,1079 ----
>           leaf protection-requested {
>             type boolean;
>             description
> !              "Indicate if the Adj-SID is protected.";
>           }
>         }
>       }
> ***************
> *** 1414,1420 ****
>             "This augmentation is only valid for OSPFv3.";
>         }
>         description
> !          "SR Prefix-SID Sub-TLV in OSPFv3 Link-Scoped Intra-Area-Prefix
>            TLV for OSPFv3 E-Inter-Area-Prefix LSAs.";
>         reference
>           "RFC 8666: OSPFv3 Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 6";
> --- 1415,1421 ----
>             "This augmentation is only valid for OSPFv3.";
>         }
>         description
> !          "SR Prefix-SID Sub-TLV in OSPFv3 Intra-Area-Prefix
>            TLV for OSPFv3 E-Inter-Area-Prefix LSAs.";
>         reference
>           "RFC 8666: OSPFv3 Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 6";
> ***************
> *** 1480,1486 ****
>              E-Router LSAs.";
>         }
>         description
> !          "SR Sub-TLVs in OSPFv3 link-tlv for OSPFv3 E-Router LSAs.";
>         reference
>           "RFC 8666: OSPFv3 Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 7";
>         uses ospfv3-adj-sid-sub-tlvs;
> --- 1481,1488 ----
>              E-Router LSAs.";
>         }
>         description
> !          "SR Sub-TLVs in OSPFv3 Router-Link TLV for OSPFv3 E-Router
> !           LSAs.";
>         reference
>           "RFC 8666: OSPFv3 Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 7";
>         uses ospfv3-adj-sid-sub-tlvs;
> 
> Thanks,
> Acee
> 
>> On Nov 25, 2025, at 3:58 PM, Alanna Paloma <[email protected]> 
>> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Authors, 
>> 
>> Thank you for your replies.  We have updated as requested.
>> 
>> ) FYI - We have moved Derek Yeung’s name out of the YANG module and into 
>> this sentence in the Acknowledgements section. Please review and let us know 
>> if any further updates are needed.
>> 
>> Original:
>>  The authors wish to thank Dean Bogdanovic and Kiran Koushik Agrahara
>>  Sreenivasa for their YANG module discussions.
>> 
>> Current:
>>  The authors wish to thank Dean Bogdanovic, Kiran Koushik Agrahara
>>  Sreenivasa, and Derek Yeung for their YANG module discussions.
>> 
>>> 9) <!--[rfced] We note that Derek Yeung is listed as an author in the
>>> YANG module but is not listed as an author of this document. Should
>>> we remove his name from the YANG module and add it to the
>>> Acknowledgements section?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>>       Author:   Derek Yeung
>>>                 <mailto:[email protected]>
>>> -->    
>>> 
>>> [Yingzhen]: Yes, please add Derek to the acknowledgements.
>> 
>> 
>> 
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>> 
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>> 
>> 
>>> On Nov 25, 2025, at 8:55 AM, Helen Chen <[email protected]> 
>>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Thanks to Yingzhen for adding my new email address.
>>> 
>>> Hello RFC Editor,
>>> 
>>> Please update my (Ing-Wher Chen) email address and affiliation if possible. 
>>>  Along with the affiliation change, please also remove the last paragraph 
>>> in the “Acknowledgments” section.  That paragraph currently states "Author 
>>> affiliation with The MITRE Corporation…”.
>>> 
>>> Thanks,
>>> Helen
>>> 
>>>> On Nov 21, 2025, at 2:30 PM, Yingzhen Qu <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Adding Helen's new email address.
>>>> 
>>>> Thanks,
>>>> Yingzhen
>>>> 
>>>> On Fri, Nov 21, 2025 at 10:58 AM <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>> Authors,
>>>> 
>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) 
>>>> the following questions, which are also in the source file.
>>>> 
>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
>>>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] We note that there is no mention of an "sr-protocol 
>>>> grouping"
>>>> in RFC 9020, but it does use "'sr-control-plane' grouping". Should the
>>>> parenthetical text below be updated to match what appears in RFC 9020?
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>>  *  OSPF instance level configuration imported from the ietf-segment-
>>>>     routing-mpls YANG module including the mapping server bindings and
>>>>     the per-protocol Segment Routing Global Block (SRGB) (refer to the
>>>>     sr-protocol grouping [RFC9020]).
>>>> 
>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>  *  OSPF instance level configuration imported from the ietf-segment-
>>>>     routing-mpls YANG module including the mapping server bindings and
>>>>     the per-protocol Segment Routing Global Block (SRGB) (refer to the
>>>>     "sr-control-plane" grouping [RFC9020]).
>>>> -->      
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] We note that RFCs 8665 and 8666 use "Extended Prefix Range 
>>>> TLV"
>>>> rather than "extended range TLV". May we update the two list items below
>>>> to match the corresponding RFCs?
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>>  *  OSPFv2 extended range TLV encodings [RFC8665] in the OSPF
>>>>     Extended-Prefix Opaque LSA [RFC7684].
>>>>  ...
>>>>  *  OSPFv3 extended range TLV encodings [RFC8666] in the OSPFv3 E-
>>>>     Intra-Area-Prefix-LSA, E-Inter-Area-Prefix-LSA, E-AS-External-LSA,
>>>>     and E-Type-7-LSA [RFC8362].
>>>> 
>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>  *  OSPFv2 Extended Prefix Range TLV encodings [RFC8665] in the OSPF
>>>>     Extended-Prefix Opaque LSA [RFC7684].
>>>>  ...
>>>>  *  OSPFv3 Extended Prefix Range TLV encodings [RFC8666] in the OSPFv3 E-
>>>>     Intra-Area-Prefix-LSA, E-Inter-Area-Prefix-LSA, E-AS-External-LSA,
>>>>     and E-Type-7-LSA [RFC8362].
>>>> -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] FYI - We have removed the following items from their
>>>> corresponding lists in Section 2 as they were each listed twice.
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>>  *  OSPFv2 Prefix SID Sub-TLV encodings [RFC8665] included the OSPF
>>>>     Extended Prefix TLV which is advertised in the OSPF Extended
>>>>     Prefix Opaque LSA [RFC7684].
>>>>  ...
>>>>  *  OSPFv3 extended range TLV encodings [RFC8666] in the OSPFv3 E-
>>>>     Intra-Area-Prefix-LSA, E-Inter-Area-Prefix-LSA, E-AS-External-LSA,
>>>>     and E-Type-7-LSA [RFC8362].
>>>>  ...
>>>>  *  OSPFv3 Adj-SID Sub-TLV [RFC8666] in the OSPFv3 Router-Link TLV
>>>>     [RFC8362].
>>>> -->   
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] We note that there is no mention of "Extended Prefix Range 
>>>> TLV" 
>>>> in RFC 8362, but it is defined in RFC 8666 (note that "Intra-Area-Prefix 
>>>> TLV",
>>>> "Inter-Area-Prefix TLV", and "External-Prefix TLV" are defined in RFC 
>>>> 8362).
>>>> Please review and let us know if/how the text or citation should be 
>>>> updated for
>>>> correctness.
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>>  *  OSPFv3 Prefix-SID Sub-TLV encodings [RFC8666] in the OSPFv3 Intra-
>>>>     Area Prefix TLV, Inter-Area Prefix TLV, External Prefix TLV, and
>>>>     OSPFv3 Extended Prefix Range TLV [RFC8362].
>>>> -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] We note that [RFC2328] and [RFC5340] are not referenced in 
>>>> the
>>>> YANG module but are listed in the introductory text for the YANG module.
>>>> Additionally, [RFC8665], [RFC8666], [RFC9020], and [RFC9129] are referenced
>>>> in the YANG module but are not listed in the introductory text. May we 
>>>> update
>>>> the introductory text as follows? Note that, if yes, we will also remove 
>>>> the
>>>> references for [RFC2328] and [RFC5340] from the Normative References 
>>>> section.
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>>  [RFC2328], [RFC4915], [RFC5340], [RFC6991], [RFC8102], [RFC8294],
>>>>  [RFC8349], [RFC9587], and [I-D.ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa] are
>>>>  referenced in the YANG module.
>>>> 
>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>  [RFC4915], [RFC6991], [RFC8102], [RFC8294], [RFC8349], [RFC8665],
>>>>  [RFC8666], [RFC9020]. [RFC9129], [RFC9587], and [RFC9855] are
>>>>  referenced in the YANG module.
>>>> -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 7) <!--[rfced] We are having some difficulty parsing this description text
>>>> in the YANG module, particularly with "interface" repeated. Please review
>>>> and let us know how it should be updated for clarity.
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>>  This augments broadcast and non-broadcast multi-access
>>>>  interface segment routing interface configuration.
>>>> 
>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>  This augments broadcast and non-broadcast multi-access
>>>>  interface Segment Routing and interface configuration.
>>>> -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 8) <!--[rfced] We have updated this description text in the YANG module for
>>>> clarity. Please review and confirm that the intended meaning has not been
>>>> altered.
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>>  A path providing node a disjoint path for SRLG
>>>>  links from the primary path will be selected over
>>>>  one that doesn't provide an SRLG disjoint path.
>>>> 
>>>> Current:
>>>>  A path providing a node with a disjoint path for SRLG
>>>>  links from the primary path will be selected over
>>>>  a path that doesn't provide an SRLG disjoint path.
>>>> -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 9) <!--[rfced] We note that Derek Yeung is listed as an author in the
>>>> YANG module but is not listed as an author of this document. Should
>>>> we remove his name from the YANG module and add it to the
>>>> Acknowledgements section?
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>>       Author:   Derek Yeung
>>>>                 <mailto:[email protected]>
>>>> -->    
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 10) <!--[rfced] FYI, we have made some updates to the Security 
>>>> Considerations to 
>>>> match Section 3.7 of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-28. Please let us know 
>>>> if any further updates are needed. Specifically:
>>>> 
>>>> - Should this sentence from the template be added? "There are no 
>>>> particularly sensitive RPC or action operations."
>>>> 
>>>> -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 11) <!--[rfced] Abbreviations
>>>> 
>>>> a) FYI - We have added expansions for the following abbreviations
>>>> per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each
>>>> expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
>>>> 
>>>> IP Fast Reroute (IP-FRR)
>>>> No Penultimate Hop-Popping) (No-PHP)
>>>> Remote Loop-Free Alternate  (RLFA)
>>>> Segment Routing Local Block (SRLB)
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> b) Both the expansion and the acronym for the following terms are used
>>>> throughout the document. Would you like to update to using the expansion
>>>> upon first usage and the acronym for the rest of the document for 
>>>> consistency?
>>>> 
>>>> Adjacency Segment Identifier, adjacency Segment ID, adjacency SID (Adj-SID)
>>>> Denial-of-Service (DoS)
>>>> Remote LFA (RLFA)
>>>> Segment ID, Segment Identifier (SID)
>>>> Segment Routing Mapping Server, SR Mapping Server (SRMS)
>>>> Segment Routing over MPLS (SR-MPLS)
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> c) FYI, we updated the expansion of "SRLG" from "Shared Resource Link
>>>> Group" to "Shared Risk Link Group" to match how it is expanded in 
>>>> past RFCs. 
>>>> 
>>>> d) FYI, we updated one instance of "SRBG" to "SRGB" (Section 4) to 
>>>> match usage in the rest of the document. 
>>>> -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
>>>> 
>>>> a) Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to be used 
>>>> inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us know if/how they
>>>> may be made consistent.  
>>>> 
>>>> Segment Routing vs. segment routing
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> b) For consistency and to reflect how they appear in previously published
>>>> RFCs, we have updated the terminology to the form on the right. Please 
>>>> review
>>>> and let us know if any further updates are needed.
>>>> 
>>>> Adj-SID sub-TLV, Adj-SID sub-tlv, Adj-sid sub-tlv > Adj-SID Sub-TLV
>>>> 
>>>> Prefix SID Sub-TLV, prefix SID sub-TLV, Prefix SID sub-TLV > Prefix-SID 
>>>> Sub-TLV
>>>> -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 13) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the 
>>>> online
>>>> Style Guide 
>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature 
>>>> typically
>>>> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
>>>> 
>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should 
>>>> still be reviewed as a best practice.
>>>> -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you.
>>>> 
>>>> Alanna Paloma and Alice Russo
>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> On Nov 21, 2025, at 10:57 AM, [email protected] wrote:
>>>> 
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>>>> 
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>>>> RFC9903 (draft-ietf-ospf-sr-yang-50)
>>>> 
>>>> Title            : A YANG Data Model for OSPF Segment Routing over the 
>>>> MPLS Data Plane
>>>> Author(s)        : Y. Qu, A. Lindem, Z. Zhang, I. Chen
>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Acee Lindem, Christian Hopps, Yingzhen Qu
>>>> Area Director(s) : Jim Guichard, Ketan Talaulikar, Gunter Van de Velde
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