Hi,

I approve.

Thanks


-----Original Message-----
From: Alanna Paloma <[email protected]> 
Sent: Friday, December 5, 2025 12:56 AM
To: Helen Chen <[email protected]>; Yingzhen Qu <[email protected]>
Cc: Acee Lindem <[email protected]>; Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) 
<[email protected]>; <[email protected]> 
<[email protected]>; Jeff Tantsura <[email protected]>; Editor RFC 
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Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9902 <draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-31> for your review
Importance: High

Hi Yingzhen and Helen,

Thank you for sending your approvals. They have been noted here:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9902

Once we’ve received approval from Stephane, we will move this document forward 
in the publication process.

Best regards,
Alanna Paloma
RFC Production Center

> On Dec 4, 2025, at 10:11 AM, Helen Chen <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> I approve.
> 
> Thanks,
> Helen
> 
>> On Dec 4, 2025, at 1:03 PM, Acee Lindem <[email protected]> wrote:
>> 
>> Helen and Stephane - Please review and approve ASAP. 
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> Acee
>> 
>>> On Dec 2, 2025, at 7:17 AM, Acee Lindem <[email protected]> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi Yingzhen, Helen, Jeff, and Stephane,
>>> 
>>> Please review and approve. 
>>> 
>>> Thanks,
>>> Acee
>>> 
>>>> On Dec 2, 2025, at 6:08 AM, Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) 
>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Hi Alanna,
>>>> 
>>>> Pleas see inline: GV>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> From: Alanna Paloma <[email protected]>
>>>> Sent: Monday, December 01, 2025 6:55 PM
>>>> To: Acee Lindem <[email protected]>; Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) 
>>>> <[email protected]>
>>>> Cc: Helen Chen <[email protected]>; <[email protected]> 
>>>> <[email protected]>; Yingzhen Qu <[email protected]>; 
>>>> Jeff Tantsura <[email protected]>; Editor RFC 
>>>> <[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]>; 
>>>> [email protected] <[email protected]>; [email protected] 
>>>> <[email protected]>; auth48archive <[email protected]>
>>>> Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9902 
>>>> <draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-31> for your review
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> CAUTION: This is an external email. Please be very careful when clicking 
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>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Hi Acee and Gunter (AD)*,
>>>> 
>>>> *Gunter - As the AD, please review and approve of the following updates:
>>>> - Section 1: removed text
>>>> GV> Approved
>>>> 
>>>> - Section 3 (within the YANG module): removed text
>>>> GV> 
>>>> 
>>>> - Section 6.1: removed the normative reference entry for RFC 8342
>>>> GV> Approved. The text referencing this was removed from the body during 
>>>> the rfc editing process.
>>>> 
>>>> Be well,
>>>> G/
>>>> 
>>>> See this diff file:
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902-auth48diff.html
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Acee - Thank you for your replies. We have updated the files accordingly.
>>>> 
>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
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>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902.pdf
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902.html
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902.xml
>>>> 
>>>> The relevant diff files are posted here:
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902-diff.html (comprehensive 
>>>> diff) https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902-auth48diff.html 
>>>> (all AUTH48 changes) 
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902-lastdiff.html (htmlwdiff 
>>>> diff between last version and this) 
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902-lastrfcdiff.html 
>>>> (rfcdiff between last version and this)
>>>> 
>>>> Please see the AUTH48 status page for this document here:
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9902
>>>> 
>>>> We will await any further changes you may have as well as approvals from 
>>>> each author and *Gunter (AD) prior to moving this document forward in the 
>>>> publication process.
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you,
>>>> Alanna Paloma
>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>> 
>>>>> On Dec 1, 2025, at 3:55 AM, Acee Lindem <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Hi Alana,
>>>>> I've attached my editorial comments including removal of the reference to 
>>>>> RFC 8342.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>> Acee
>>>>> <rfc9902.orig.diff.html>
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On Nov 29, 2025, at 3:51 PM, Acee Lindem <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Hi Alana,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I just have a couple editorial comments. See attached diff.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>> Acee
>>>>>> <rfc9902.orig.diff.html>
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Nov 25, 2025, at 3:51 PM, Alanna Paloma 
>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> All,
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thank you for your replies. Gunter’s approval has bee noted on the 
>>>>>>> AUTH48 status page:
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9902
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> We have also updated the files with the additional requested changes.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902.txt
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902.pdf
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902.xml
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> The relevant diff files are posted here:
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902-diff.html 
>>>>>>> (comprehensive diff) 
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902-auth48diff.html (all 
>>>>>>> AUTH48 changes) 
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902-lastdiff.html 
>>>>>>> (htmlwdiff diff between last version and this) 
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902-lastrfcdiff.html 
>>>>>>> (rfcdiff between last version and this)
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> We will await any further changes you may have as well as approvals 
>>>>>>> from each author prior to moving this document forward in the 
>>>>>>> publication process.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>> Alanna Paloma
>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Nov 25, 2025, at 8:48 AM, Helen Chen <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Hello RFCEditor,
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Yes, please update my (Ing-Wher Chen) email address and affiliation if 
>>>>>>>> possible.  Along with the affiliation change, please also remove the 
>>>>>>>> last paragraph in the “Acknowledgments” section.  That paragraph 
>>>>>>>> currently states "Author affiliation with The MITRE Corporation…”.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>>> Helen
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> On Nov 25, 2025, at 9:10 AM, Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) 
>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Inline: GV>
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>>>>>> From: Alanna Paloma <[email protected]>
>>>>>>>>> Sent: Monday, November 24, 2025 8:19 PM
>>>>>>>>> To: Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) 
>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]>; Yingzhen Qu 
>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]>; <[email protected]> 
>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]>; Acee Lindem <[email protected]>; 
>>>>>>>>> [email protected]; [email protected]; Jeff Tantsura 
>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]>
>>>>>>>>> Cc: Editor RFC <[email protected]>; [email protected]; 
>>>>>>>>> [email protected]; [email protected]; auth48archive 
>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]>
>>>>>>>>> Subject: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9902 
>>>>>>>>> <draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-31> for your review
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> CAUTION: This is an external email. Please be very careful when 
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>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Hi Authors and Gunter (AD)*,
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> *Gunter - As the AD please review and approve of the following 
>>>>>>>>> changes:
>>>>>>>>> - Section 2: deleted sentence of repetitive text
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> GV> Approved
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> - Section 6.1: added reference entry to RFC 8402 in the 
>>>>>>>>> Normative References section
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> GV> Approved
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Additionally, we asked the authors about the Security Considerations 
>>>>>>>>> text, as it does not exactly match what appears in Section 3.7 of 
>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-28. Please review Section 4 and confirm 
>>>>>>>>> that the missing sentence and added paragraphs are acceptable.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 7) <!--[rfced] FYI, we have made some updates to the Security 
>>>>>>>>>> Considerations to match Section 3.7 of 
>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-28. Please let us know if any further 
>>>>>>>>>> updates are needed. We note some differences, specifically:
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> a) Should this sentence from the template be added? "There are no 
>>>>>>>>>> particularly sensitive RPC or action operations."
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> [Yingzhen]: this should not be added as we have listed some 
>>>>>>>>>> sensitive writable nodes.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> GV> Approved. There is a clause in draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-28 
>>>>>>>>> that approves this.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> b) These paragraphs do not appear in the template. Please confirm 
>>>>>>>>>> they should remain.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>> The ability to disable or enable IS-IS Segment Routing 
>>>>>>>>>> support and/or change Segment Routing configurations can 
>>>>>>>>>> result in a Denial-of- Service (DoS) attack, as this may 
>>>>>>>>>> cause traffic to be dropped or misrouted.  Please refer to 
>>>>>>>>>> Section 5 of [RFC8667] for more information on Segment Routing 
>>>>>>>>>> extensions.
>>>>>>>>>> ...
>>>>>>>>>> Unauthorized access to any data node of these subtrees can 
>>>>>>>>>> disclose the operational state information of IS-IS protocol on a 
>>>>>>>>>> device.
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> [Yingzhen]: yes, they should remain.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> GV> Approved. The claim is valid and accurate
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> See this diff file:
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> GV> Many thanks,
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> G/
>>>>>>>>> RTG AD
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Authors - Thank you for your reply. We have updated the files 
>>>>>>>>> accordingly.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> ) We note that Yingzhen has added Helen’s new email address to this 
>>>>>>>>> thread. Should her email address and affiliation be updated in the 
>>>>>>>>> document?
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902.txt
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902.pdf
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902.html
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902.xml
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files are posted here:
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902-diff.html 
>>>>>>>>> (comprehensive diff) 
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9902-auth48diff.html 
>>>>>>>>> (all AUTH48 changes)
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Please review the document carefully as documents do not change once 
>>>>>>>>> published as RFCs.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> We will await any further changes you may have and approvals from 
>>>>>>>>> each author and *Gunter (AD) prior to moving forward in the 
>>>>>>>>> publication process.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Please see the AUTH48 status page for this document here:
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9902
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>>> Alanna Paloma
>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 21, 2025, at 4:28 PM, Yingzhen Qu <[email protected]> 
>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Hi,
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thanks for working on this document. Please see my answers below 
>>>>>>>>>> inline.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>>>>> Yingzhen
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> On Fri, Nov 21, 2025 at 10:57 AM <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as 
>>>>>>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the source 
>>>>>>>>>> file.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that 
>>>>>>>>>> appear in the title) for use on 
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
>>>>>>>>>> [Yingzhen]: I don't think we need more than what's in the title.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 2) <!--[rfced] We note that BCP 14 key words are not used in this 
>>>>>>>>>> document.
>>>>>>>>>> Therefore, we have removed the keywords paragraph in Section 
>>>>>>>>>> 1.1 and in the YANG module. We have also removed the references to 
>>>>>>>>>> RFCs 2119 and 8174.
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> [Yingzhen]: ok.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] This text in Section 2 reflects text in 
>>>>>>>>>> Section 1. As it is repeating information, may we remove this text 
>>>>>>>>>> from Section 2?
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Original (Section 1):
>>>>>>>>>> This document defines a device YANG data model [RFC7950] that 
>>>>>>>>>> can be used to manage IS-IS Extensions for Segment Routing 
>>>>>>>>>> [RFC8667] over the MPLS data plane.  It is an augmentation to 
>>>>>>>>>> the IS-IS YANG data model [RFC9130].
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Original (Section 2):
>>>>>>>>>> This document defines a YANG data model for IS-IS Extensions 
>>>>>>>>>> for Segment Routing over the MPLS data plane.  It is an 
>>>>>>>>>> augmentation of the IS-IS base model.
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> [ Yingzhen]: I'm ok with the suggested removal.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] RFC 8402 is only cited in the YANG module. May 
>>>>>>>>>> we add a citation to RFC 8402 to the this sentence preceding 
>>>>>>>>>> the YANG module as well as add a reference in the Normative 
>>>>>>>>>> References section?
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>> [RFC6991], [RFC8102], [RFC8294], [RFC8349], [RFC8667], 
>>>>>>>>>> [RFC9020], [RFC9130], and 
>>>>>>>>>> [I-D.ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa] are referenced in the YANG 
>>>>>>>>>> module.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>>> [RFC6991], [RFC8102], [RFC8294], [RFC8349], [RFC8402], 
>>>>>>>>>> [RFC8667], [RFC9020], [RFC9130], and [RFC9855] are referenced 
>>>>>>>>>> in the YANG module.
>>>>>>>>>> ...
>>>>>>>>>> [RFC8402]  Filsfils, C., Ed., Previdi, S., Ed., Ginsberg, L.,
>>>>>>>>>>       Decraene, B., Litkowski, S., and R. Shakir, "Segment
>>>>>>>>>>       Routing Architecture", RFC 8402, DOI 10.17487/RFC8402,
>>>>>>>>>>       July 2018, <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8402>.
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> [Yingzhen]: Yes, please.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] These two sentences in the description clauses 
>>>>>>>>>> of the YANG module are phrased similarly. Should they be rephrased 
>>>>>>>>>> to match?
>>>>>>>>>> If yes, should "IP" appear before "FRR" or before "interface"?
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>> This augments ISIS interface level-1 IP FRR with TILFA.
>>>>>>>>>> ...
>>>>>>>>>> This augments ISIS IP interface level-2 FRR with TILFA.
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> [Yingzhen]: It should be "This augments ISIS interface level-1 IP 
>>>>>>>>>> FRR with TILFA." and "This augments ISIS interface level-2 IP FRR 
>>>>>>>>>> with TILFA." .
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 6) <!--[rfced] We have updated this description text in the 
>>>>>>>>>> YANG module for clarity. Please review and confirm that the 
>>>>>>>>>> intended meaning has not been altered.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>> A path providing node a disjoint path for SRLG links from the 
>>>>>>>>>> primary path will be selected over one that doesn't provide 
>>>>>>>>>> an SRLG disjoint path.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>>> A path providing a node with a disjoint path for SRLG links 
>>>>>>>>>> from the primary path will be selected over a path that 
>>>>>>>>>> doesn't provide an SRLG disjoint path.
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> [Yingzhen]: The suggested change is fine.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 7) <!--[rfced] FYI, we have made some updates to the Security 
>>>>>>>>>> Considerations to match Section 3.7 of 
>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-28. Please let us know if any further 
>>>>>>>>>> updates are needed. We note some differences, specifically:
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> a) Should this sentence from the template be added? "There are no 
>>>>>>>>>> particularly sensitive RPC or action operations."
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> [Yingzhen]: this should not be added as we have listed some 
>>>>>>>>>> sensitive writable nodes.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> b) These paragraphs do not appear in the template. Please confirm 
>>>>>>>>>> they should remain.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>> The ability to disable or enable IS-IS Segment Routing 
>>>>>>>>>> support and/or change Segment Routing configurations can 
>>>>>>>>>> result in a Denial-of- Service (DoS) attack, as this may 
>>>>>>>>>> cause traffic to be dropped or misrouted.  Please refer to 
>>>>>>>>>> Section 5 of [RFC8667] for more information on Segment Routing 
>>>>>>>>>> extensions.
>>>>>>>>>> ...
>>>>>>>>>> Unauthorized access to any data node of these subtrees can 
>>>>>>>>>> disclose the operational state information of IS-IS protocol on a 
>>>>>>>>>> device.
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> [Yingzhen]: yes, they should remain.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 8) <!--[rfced] Both the expansion and the acronym for the 
>>>>>>>>>> following terms are used throughout the document. Would you 
>>>>>>>>>> like to update to using the expansion upon first usage and the 
>>>>>>>>>> acronym for the rest of the document?
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Adjacency Segment Identifier, adjacency SID, adjacency 
>>>>>>>>>> Segment ID
>>>>>>>>>> (Adj-SID)  Link State Database (LSDB)  Remote LFA (RLFA)  
>>>>>>>>>> Segment Routing (SR)
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> [Yingzhen]: We should use the acronym after the first use.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 9) <!--[rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion 
>>>>>>>>>> of the online Style Guide 
>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_langu
>>>>>>>>>> age> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of 
>>>>>>>>>> this nature typically result in more precise language, which 
>>>>>>>>>> is helpful for readers.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, 
>>>>>>>>>> but this should still be reviewed as a best practice.
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Alanna Paloma and Alice Russo RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 21, 2025, at 10:56 AM, [email protected] wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>>>>>> RFC9902 (draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-31)
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Title            : A YANG Data Model for IS-IS Segment Routing over 
>>>>>>>>>> the MPLS Data Plane
>>>>>>>>>> Author(s)        : S. Litkowski, Y. Qu, A. Lindem, I. Chen, J. 
>>>>>>>>>> Tantsura
>>>>>>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Acee Lindem, Christian Hopps, Yingzhen Qu
>>>>>>>>>> Area Director(s) : Jim Guichard, Ketan Talaulikar, Gunter Van 
>>>>>>>>>> de Velde
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>> 
> 


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