Hi! A gentle ping to see about getting this done before the end of the week when everybody is going to disappear (if they haven’t already :)
spt > On Dec 12, 2025, at 17:32, [email protected] wrote: > > Authors, > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) > the following questions, which are also in the source file. > > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in > the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> > > > 2) <!--[rfced] FYI - We moved the second sentence in the title of Figure 2 > out of > the title. It now directly follows the figure. Please review and let us > know of any objections. > > Original: > Figure 2: Simple example zone with the same configuration on the > apex and web domain. It is compatible with clients that do or do > not support HTTPS records. > > Current: > Figure 2: Simple Example Zone with the Same Configuration on the > Apex and Web Domain > > > The example above is compatible with clients that do or do not support > HTTPS records. > --> > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] Figures 1 and 3 are too long for the line limit of the text > output (72 characters in the text, which means 69 characters within the > sourcecode element in the XML file). Please let us know how these figures > should be updated. > > a) Figure 1 - perhaps break at the "/" > > Original: > ech="AEj+DQBEAQAgACAdd+scUi0IYFsXnUIU7ko2Nd9+F8M26pAGZVpz/KrWPgAEAAEAAWQ > VZWNoLXNpdGVzLmV4YW1wbGUubmV0AAA=" > > Perhaps: > ech="AEj+DQBEAQAgACAdd+scUi0IYFsXnUIU7ko2Nd9+F8M26pAGZVpz/ > KrWPgAEAAEAAWQVZWNoLXNpdGVzLmV4YW1wbGUubmV0AAA=" > > b) Figure 3 - perhaps change "two" to "2" > > Original: > $ORIGIN heterogeneous.example. ; Example zone with two pools of servers > > Perhaps: > $ORIGIN heterogeneous.example. ; Example zone with 2 pools of servers > --> > > > 4) <!-- [rfced] We updated <artwork> to <sourcecode> in the figures in this > document. Currently, the "type" attribute is not set. Please review the > types at https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types, > and let us know if one is applicable. If the list does not contain an > applicable > type, then feel free to let us know. 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