Hi all, and thank you very much for great catches, and sorry to replay late.
I was almost approved, but let me confirm that.

> SingleResponse.SingleExtensions

isn't it  "SingleResponse.singleExtensions" (lowercase letter s)?

Regards Tadahiko Ito

2026年2月3日(火) 9:45 Alanna Paloma <[email protected]>:

> Hi Clint,
>
> Your approval has been noted:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9919
>
> Once we’ve received Tadahiko’s approval, we will move this document
> forward in the publication process.
>
> Thank you,
> Alanna Paloma
> RFC Production Center
>
> > On Feb 2, 2026, at 12:38 PM, Clint Wilson <[email protected]> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Alanna,
> >
> > I have reviewed and approve this latest version of the document.
> >
> > Thank you!
> > -Clint
> >
> >> On Jan 30, 2026, at 2:39 PM, Alanna Paloma <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>
> >> Hi Authors,
> >>
> >> This is a friendly reminder that we await your reviews and approvals of
> the updated files prior to moving this document forward in the publication
> process. See the files below.
> >>
> >> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.txt
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.pdf
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.html
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.xml
> >>
> >> The relevant diff files are posted here:
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-diff.html (comprehensive
> diff)
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-auth48diff.html (all AUTH48
> changes)
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-lastdiff.html (htmlwdiff
> diff between last version and this)
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-lastrfcdiff.html (rfcdiff
> between last version and this)
> >>
> >> Please review the document carefully as documents do not change once
> published as RFCs.
> >>
> >> We will await any further changes you may have and approvals from each
> author prior to moving forward in the publication process.
> >>
> >> Please see the AUTH48 status page for this document here:
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9919
> >>
> >> Thank you,
> >> Alanna Paloma
> >> RFC Production Center
> >>
> >>> On Jan 23, 2026, at 11:34 AM, Alanna Paloma <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> Hi Roman,
> >>>
> >>> Thank you for your approval. We’ve noted it on the AUTH48 status page:
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9919
> >>>
> >>> Best regards,
> >>> Alanna Paloma
> >>> RFC Production Center
> >>>
> >>>> On Jan 23, 2026, at 11:25 AM, Roman Danyliw <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>
> >>>> Approved.
> >>>>
> >>>> -----Original Message-----
> >>>> From: Alanna Paloma <[email protected]>
> >>>> Sent: Thursday, January 22, 2026 12:45 PM
> >>>> To: Deb Cooley <[email protected]>; Sean Turner <[email protected]>;
> Corey Bonnell <[email protected]>; Clint Wilson <[email protected]
> >
> >>>> Cc: RFC Editor <[email protected]>;
> [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected];
> Roman Danyliw <[email protected]>; Russ Housley <[email protected]>;
> auth48archive <[email protected]>
> >>>> Subject: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9919
> <draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-12> for your review
> >>>>
> >>>> Warning: External Sender - do not click links or open attachments
> unless you recognize the sender and know the content is safe.
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> Authors and Deb*,
> >>>>
> >>>> *Deb - As the AD, please review and approve of the following removed
> text in Section 3.2.3:
> >>>>
> >>>> As such, this profile extends
> >>>> the [RFC6960] definition of "unauthorized" as follows:
> >>>>
> >>>> The response "unauthorized" is returned in cases where the client is
> >>>> not authorized to make this query to this responder or the responder
> >>>> is not capable of responding authoritatively.
> >>>>
> >>>> See this diff file:
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-auth48diff.html
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> Authors - Thank you for your responses and for confirming those
> updates. We have updated the files accordingly.
> >>>>
> >>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.txt
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.pdf
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.html
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.xml
> >>>>
> >>>> The relevant diff files are posted here:
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-diff.html (comprehensive
> diff)
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-auth48diff.html (all
> AUTH48 changes)
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-lastdiff.html (htmlwdiff
> diff between last version and this)
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-lastrfcdiff.html (rfcdiff
> between last version and this)
> >>>>
> >>>> Please review the document carefully as documents do not change once
> published as RFCs.
> >>>>
> >>>> We will await any further changes you may have and approvals from
> each author and *Deb prior to moving forward in the publication process.
> >>>>
> >>>> Please see the AUTH48 status page for this document here:
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9919
> >>>>
> >>>> Thank you,
> >>>> Alanna Paloma
> >>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>> On Jan 22, 2026, at 6:35 AM, Clint Wilson <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> These changes all look great to me (some really nice catches in here
> too, fwiw). Thank you all for working on this draft!
> >>>>>
> >>>>>> On Jan 21, 2026, at 8:32 AM, Sean Turner <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Okay on to the detailed review - co-authors please double check:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> 1) s3.1.1: There is no “RequestList” it’s “requestList”
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> OLD:
> >>>>>> OCSPRequest.RequestList
> >>>>>> NEW:
> >>>>>> OCSPRequest.requestList
> >>>>>> 2) s3.2.1: bump dash
> >>>>>> OLD:
> >>>>>> ... the id-
> >>>>>> pkix-ocsp-basic OID.
> >>>>>> NEW:
> >>>>>> ... the
> >>>>>> id-pkix-ocsp-basic OID.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> 3) s3.2.1: use elements instead of SingleResponses
> >>>>>> OLD:
> >>>>>> two SingleResponses in a BasicOCSPResponse
> >>>>>> NEW:
> >>>>>> two SingleResponse elements in a BasicOCSPResponse
> >>>>>> OLD:
> >>>>>> the CertID of one of the SingleResponses uses
> >>>>>> NEW:
> >>>>>> the CertID of one of the SingleResponse structures uses
> >>>>>> 4) s3.2.1: Refer to correct extension structure
> >>>>>> OLD:
> >>>>>> The responder MAY include the singleResponse.singleResponse
> >>>>>> extensions structure.
> >>>>>> NEW:
> >>>>>> The responder MAY include the SingleResponse.SingleExtensions
> >>>>>> extensions structure.
> >>>>>> 5) s3.2.3: Do we still extend the definition of unauthorized?
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> In 5019, the definition of unauthorized was extended. RFC 6960 was
> updated to match the definitions in RFC 5019. So can we drop this bit of
> text:
> >>>>>> As such, this profile extends
> >>>>>> the [RFC6960] definition of "unauthorized" as follows:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> The response "unauthorized" is returned in cases where the client
> is
> >>>>>> not authorized to make this query to this responder or the
> responder
> >>>>>> is not capable of responding authoritatively.
> >>>>>> 6) s8.2: rename title
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> OLD:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> 8.2. Man-in-the-Middle Attacks
> >>>>>> NEW:
> >>>>>> 8.2. On-Path Attacks
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Cheers,
> >>>>>> spt
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>> On Jan 21, 2026, at 10:48, Alanna Paloma <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Hi Sean and Clint,
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Thank you for confirming those two remaining questions. We have
> updated the document accordingly.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.xml
> >>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.txt
> >>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.html
> >>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.pdf
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here:
> >>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-diff.html
> (comprehensive
> >>>>>>> diff) https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-auth48diff.html
> >>>>>>> (AUTH48 changes)
> >>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-auth48rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>> (AUTH48 changes side by side)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> We will await approvals from each author prior to moving this
> document forward in the publication process.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> See here for the AUTH48 status page of this document:
> >>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9919
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Thank you,
> >>>>>>> Alanna Paloma
> >>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> On Jan 21, 2026, at 5:40 AM, Sean Turner <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> Clint,
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> Thanks for confirming!
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> spt
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> On Jan 20, 2026, at 17:39, Clint Wilson <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> The proposed update for #9 seems correct to me. I don’t think
> it’s likely for the direct document link to become outdated in the
> foreseeable future (it appears to have been stable for at least several
> years).
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>>>>> -Clint
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> On Jan 20, 2026, at 1:51 PM, Sean Turner <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> On Jan 20, 2026, at 14:58, Alanna Paloma <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> Hi Sean,
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply.  We have updated as requested.
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> Please note that we are awaiting for these two queries to be
> confirmed:
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced]  We were unable to find a document directly
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> matching the title provided in the original reference. The
> URL
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> provided goes to the homepage for the Open Mobile Alliance.
> We
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> did find the following URL, which points to the OCSP Mobile
> Profile:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.openmobilealliance.org/release/OCSP/V1_0-20040127-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> C/OMA-WAP-OCSP-V1_0-20040127-C.pdf
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> May we update this reference as follows?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> [OCSPMP]   Open Mobile Alliance, "OCSP Mobile Profile V1.0",
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>       www.openmobilealliance.org .
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> [OCSPMP] Open Mobile Alliance, "Online Certificate Status
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Protocol Mobile Profile", Candidate Version V1.0, 27 January
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 2004, <
> https://www.openmobilealliance.org/release/OCSP/V1_0-20040127-C/OMA-WAP-OCSP-V1_0-20040127-C.pdf
> >.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> I will defer to my co-authors on this one.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "type" attribute of each
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> sourcecode element in the XML file to ensure correctness. If
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> the current list of preferred values for "type"
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> (
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-ty
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> pes) does not contain an applicable type, then feel free to
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> let us know.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Also, it is acceptable to leave the "type" attribute not set.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> In addition, review each artwork element. Specifically,
> should
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> any artwork element be tagged as sourcecode or another
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> element?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> I will put this on my to do list ;)
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> I was being sooo slow. I pulled the xml and the three ASN.1
> code blocks include the correct tag:
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> <sourcecode type="asn.1”>
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> I believe then we are awaiting my co-auhors response on #9!
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> spt
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.xml
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.txt
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.html
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919.pdf
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here:
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>> (comprehensive diff)
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-auth48diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>> (AUTH48 changes)
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9919-auth48rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>> (AUTH48 changes side by side)
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> Please review the document carefully and contact us with any
> further updates you may have.  Note that we do not make changes once a
> document is published as an RFC.
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> We will await approvals from each party listed on the AUTH48
> status page below prior to moving this document forward in the publication
> process.
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9919
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
> >>>>>>>>>>> Alanna Paloma
> >>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> On Jan 20, 2026, at 7:39 AM, Sean Turner <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Hi!
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> On Jan 16, 2026, at 13:46, [email protected] wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Authors,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve
> (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the source file.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 1) <!--[rfced] Please note the title of the document has
> been
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> updated as follows. Abbreviations have been expanded per
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Updates to Lightweight OCSP Profile for High Volume
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Environments
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Current:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Updates to the Lightweight Online Certificate Status
> Protocol
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> (OCSP) Profile for High Volume Environments
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Because this document will obsolete RFC 5019 (rather than
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> update it), we suggest changing the title and abbreviated
> title as follows. Is this acceptable?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Updates to Lightweight OCSP Profile for High Volume
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Environments
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps (same title as RFC 5019):
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> The Lightweight Online Certificate Status Protocol (OCSP)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Profile for High-Volume Environments
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Similarly, may the abbreviated title (which appears in the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> running header of the PDF) be updated as follows?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Lightweight OCSP Profile Update
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Lightweight OCSP Profile
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Yes, since we’re obsoleting it there’s no need for the
> “Updates to” / “Update” words.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those
> that
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> appear in the title) for use on
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Revocation
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] FYI, we changed "RECOMMENDS" to "is
> RECOMMENDED
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> by" (2 instances), as "RECOMMENDED" is the defined keyword
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> from BCP 14. This update allows using the <bcp14> element
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> without warnings. We realize the original text matches RFC
> 5019. For example:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Clients SHOULD NOT include the requestExtensions structure.
> If
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> a requestExtensions structure is included, this profile
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> RECOMMENDS that it contain only the nonce extension
> (id-pkix-ocsp-nonce).
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Current:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Clients SHOULD NOT include the requestExtensions structure.
> If
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> a requestExtensions structure is included, it is RECOMMENDED
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> by this profile that the structure contain only the nonce
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> extension (id-pkix- ocsp-nonce).
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> WFM
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] Is this line within the sourcecode in Section
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 3.2.1 intended to be a comment within the sourcecode, or
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> should it be taken out of the sourcecode? (Note: This line
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> exceeded the 72-character limit so we included a line break
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> within the sourcecode.)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> The value for response SHALL be the DER encoding of
> BasicOCSPResponse.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> This sentence should be taken out of the source code, so I
> guess that means there’s two blocks of source code.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] May we update this sentence as follows to
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> clarify that the protocol in [RFC5019] is backward
> compatible, rather than the RFC itself?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Older responders which provide backward compatibility with
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> [RFC5019] MAY use the byName field to represent the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> ResponderID, but should transition to using the byKey field
> as soon as practical.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Older responders that provide backward compatibility with
> the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> protocol defined in [RFC5019] MAY use the byName field to
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> represent the ResponderID but should transition to using the
> byKey field as soon as practical.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Yes
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 6) <!--[rfced] We are having some trouble understanding how
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> "server name and base64-encoded OCSPRequest structure" fits
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> into the sentence below. Please review and let us know the
> sentence may be updated for clarity.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> When sending requests that are less than or equal to 255
> bytes
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> in total (after encoding) including the scheme and
> delimiters
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> (http://), server name and base64-encoded OCSPRequest
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> structure, clients MUST use the GET method (to enable OCSP
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> response caching).
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> When sending requests that are less than or equal to 255
> bytes
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> in total (after encoding), including the scheme and
> delimiters
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> (http://), server name, and base64-encoded OCSPRequest
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> structure, clients MUST use the GET method (to enable OCSP
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> response caching).
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> I think that’s right. The 255 bytes needs to include
> everything that is listed there.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 7) <!--[rfced] Should "productedAt" be "producedAt" (no 't')?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Even though RFC 5019 contains one instance of "productedAt",
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> it contains seven instances of "producedAt". We note that
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> other RFCs also use "producedAt" (e.g., RFCs 9654, 6960,
> 5912).
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> productedAt = March 19, 2023 01:00:00 GMT
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Suggested:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> producedAt = March 19, 2023 01:00:00 GMT
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> GREAT CATCH!
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Definitely needs to be “producedAt”!
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 8) <!--[rfced] May this sentence be updated as follows to
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> avoid citing RFC 9846 twice?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> This functionality has been specified as an extension to the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> TLS [I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis] protocol in Section 4.4.2 of
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> [I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis], but can be applied to any
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> client-server protocol.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Current:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> This functionality has been specified as an extension to the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> TLS protocol [RFC9846] in Section 4.4.2 of [RFC9846] but can
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> be applied to any client-server protocol.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Option A:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> This functionality has been specified as an extension to the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> TLS protocol in Section 4.4.2 of [RFC9846] but can be
> applied
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> to any client-server protocol.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Option B:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> In Section 4.4.2 of [RFC9846], this functionality has been
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> specified as an extension to the TLS protocol, but it can be
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> applied to any client-server protocol.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> I prefer option A.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced]  We were unable to find a document directly
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> matching the title provided in the original reference. The
> URL
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> provided goes to the homepage for the Open Mobile Alliance.
> We
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> did find the following URL, which points to the OCSP Mobile
> Profile:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.openmobilealliance.org/release/OCSP/V1_0-20040127-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> C/OMA-WAP-OCSP-V1_0-20040127-C.pdf
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> May we update this reference as follows?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> [OCSPMP]   Open Mobile Alliance, "OCSP Mobile Profile V1.0",
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>       www.openmobilealliance.org .
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> [OCSPMP] Open Mobile Alliance, "Online Certificate Status
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Protocol Mobile Profile", Candidate Version V1.0, 27 January
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 2004, <
> https://www.openmobilealliance.org/release/OCSP/V1_0-20040127-C/OMA-WAP-OCSP-V1_0-20040127-C.pdf
> >.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> I will defer to my co-authors on this one.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "type" attribute of each
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> sourcecode element in the XML file to ensure correctness. If
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> the current list of preferred values for "type"
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> (
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-ty
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> pes) does not contain an applicable type, then feel free to
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> let us know.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Also, it is acceptable to leave the "type" attribute not set.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> In addition, review each artwork element. Specifically,
> should
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> any artwork element be tagged as sourcecode or another
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> element?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> I will put this on my to do list ;)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 11) <!--[rfced] Should instances of "OCSP protocol" be
> updated
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> to simply "OCSP" to avoid redundancy (if expanded, "OCSP
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> protocol" would read "Online Certificate Status Protocol
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> protocol")? Please review and let us know if any updates are
> needed.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Future versions of the OCSP protocol may provide a way for
> the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> client to know whether the responder supports nonces or does
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> not support nonces.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> ...
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> The authors of this version of the document wish to thank
> Alex
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Deacon and Ryan Hurst for their work to produce the original
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> version of the lightweight profile for the OCSP protocol.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Yes please drop the extra “protocol” where appropriate.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 12) <!--[rfced] Abbreviations
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> a) Both the expansion and the acronym for the following term
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> are used throughout the document. Would you like to update
> to
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> using the expansion upon first usage and the acronym for the
> rest of the document?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> certification authority (CA)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> I am happy with that.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> b) We note that "AIA" has been expanded two different ways
> in the document.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Please review and let us know which version should be used
> for consistency.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> authorityInfoAccess (AIA) vs. authorityInformationAccess
> (AIA)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> So this is a bit weird maybe:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> s3.2.2:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> OLD:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> authorityInfoAccess
> >>>>>>>>>>>> (AIA) extension nor cRLDistributionPoints (CRLDP) extension
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> NEW:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Authority Information Access
> >>>>>>>>>>>> (AIA) extension nor CRL Distribution Points (CRLDP) extension
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> S4.1:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> OLD:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> authorityInfoAccess extension
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> NEW:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> AIA extension
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> OLD:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> authorityInformationAccess (AIA) extension
> >>>>>>>>>>>> cRLDistributionPoints extension
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> NEW:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> AIA extension
> >>>>>>>>>>>> CRLDP extension
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 13) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language"
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> portion of the online Style Guide
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> <
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_langua
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> ge> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> this nature typically result in more precise language, which
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> is helpful for readers.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> For example, please consider whether "man-in-the-middle"
> should be updated.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> I am fine with changing it to on-path if my co-authors are.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> spt
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Alanna Paloma and Alice Russo
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> On Jan 16, 2026, at 10:45 AM, [email protected]
> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
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> >>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC9919 (draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-12)
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> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Title            : Updates to Lightweight OCSP Profile for
> High Volume Environments
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Author(s)        : T. Ito, C. Wilson, C. Bonnell, S. Turner
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