Sarah:

Corey will work with you on the kramdown issues.  He is making the final edits 
that were included in -07 now.

Russ


> On Mar 16, 2026, at 5:49 PM, Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> 
> wrote:
> 
> Hi Russ,
> 
> Thank you for the speedy response!
> 
> 1) I don't have any recommendations for <tt> tags -- perhaps a coauthor has a 
> suggestion/preference?
> 
> 2) I've tried to make the markdown file work with kramdown-rfc, but I'm 
> running into issues. Could you please attach the self-contained kramdown-rfc 
> file in your response?
> 
> 3) Thank you for the usernames!!
> 
> Sincerely,
> Sarah Tarrant
> RFC Production Center
> 
>> On Mar 16, 2026, at 4:17 PM, Russ Housley <[email protected]> wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> 
>>> On Mar 16, 2026, at 4:54 PM, Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> 
>>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi Russ,
>>> 
>>> Thank you for your reply. We have three remaining questions:
>>> 
>>> 1) Regarding text styling, we did find <tt>1.3.6.1.5.5.7.8.12</tt> in 
>>> Section 3:
>>> 
>>> In this document "otherName", "OtherName" and "GeneralName.otherName"
>>> all refer to a GeneralName.otherName field included in a SAN or IAN.
>>> The new name form is identified by the OBJECT IDENTIFIER (OID)
>>> id-on-MACAddress (1.3.6.1.5.5.7.8.12) and declared below using the
>>> OTHER-NAME class declaration syntax. 
>>> 
>>> This is the only instance. Are these tags correct?
>> 
>> I am fine with whatever styling you suggest.
>> 
>>> 2) Regarding the markdown experiment, is the following markdown code up to 
>>> date? If not, please attach the self-contained kramdown-rfc file in your 
>>> response.
>>> 
>>> https://github.com/CBonnell/draft-housley-lamps-macaddress-on/blob/main/draft-ietf-lamps-macaddress-on.md?plain=1
>> 
>> I believe so.  Since the Internet-Draft repository was closed for IETF 125 
>> when -07 was posted, the "-latest" was changed to "-07" by hand so that the 
>> Secretariat could post the draft with AD approval.
>> 
>>> 3) Regarding the GitHub experiment, please provide all author, AD, and/or 
>>> document shepherd GitHub usernames.
>> 
>>  Russ Housley = russhousley
>>  Corey Bonnell = CBonnell
>>   Joe Mandel = mandelj7
>>  Tomofumi Okubo = tomofumiokubo
>>  Michael StJohns = mstjohns
>> 
>>  Tim Hollebeek = timfromdigicert
>> 
>>  Deb Cooley = debcooley
>> 
>>> 
>>> Sincerely,
>>> Sarah Tarrant
>>> RFC Production Center
>>> 
>>>> On Mar 16, 2026, at 3:38 PM, Russ Housley <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Hi Sarah.
>>>> 
>>>>> 1) As there may have been multiple updates made to the document during 
>>>>> Last Call, 
>>>>> please review the current version of the document: 
>>>>> 
>>>>> * Is the text in the Abstract still accurate?
>>>>> * Are the Authors' Addresses, Contributors, and Acknowledgments 
>>>>> sections current?
>>>> 
>>>> The -07 version addresses the changes that were needed to complete IESG 
>>>> Evaluation.
>>>> 
>>>>> 2) Please share any style information that could help us with editing 
>>>>> your 
>>>>> document. For example:
>>>>> 
>>>>> * Is your document's format or its terminology based on another document, 
>>>>> WG style guide, etc.? If so, please provide a pointer to that information 
>>>>> (e.g., "This document's terminology should match DNS terminology in 
>>>>> RFC 9499." or "This document uses the style info at 
>>>>> <https://httpwg.org/admin/editors/style-guide>.").
>>>>> * Is there a general pattern of capitalization or formatting of terms 
>>>>> that 
>>>>> editors can follow (e.g., "Field names should have initial 
>>>>> capitalization." 
>>>>> or  "Parameter names should be in double quotes." or "<tt/> should be 
>>>>> used 
>>>>> for token names." etc.)?
>>>> 
>>>> It is related to RFC 5280, which defines GeneralName.  This document 
>>>> defines a new otherName form of GeneralName.
>>>> 
>>>>> 3) Please carefully review the entries and their URLs in the
>>>>> References section with the following in mind. Note that we will 
>>>>> update as follows unless we hear otherwise at this time:
>>>>> 
>>>>> * References to obsoleted RFCs will be updated to point to the current 
>>>>> RFC on the topic in accordance with Section 4.8.6 of RFC 7322 
>>>>> (RFC Style Guide).
>>>>> 
>>>>> * References to I-Ds that have been replaced by another I-D will be 
>>>>> updated to point to the replacement I-D.
>>>>> 
>>>>> * References to documents from other organizations that have been 
>>>>> superseded will be updated to their superseding version.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Note: To check for outdated RFC and I-D references, you can use 
>>>>> idnits <https://author-tools.ietf.org/idnits>. You can also help the
>>>>> IETF Tools Team by testing idnits3 
>>>>> <https://author-tools.ietf.org/idnits3/>
>>>>> with your document and reporting any issues to them.
>>>> 
>>>> All references are already final.
>>>> 
>>>>> 4) Is there any text that requires special handling? For example:
>>>>> * Are there any sections that were contentious when the document was 
>>>>> drafted?
>>>>> * Are any sections that need to be removed before publication marked as 
>>>>> such 
>>>>> (e.g., Implementation Status sections (per RFC 7942)).
>>>>> * Are there any instances of repeated text/sections that should be edited 
>>>>> the same way?
>>>> 
>>>> The handling of name constraints was carefully crafted to align with the 
>>>> Section 4.2.1.10 of RFC 5280.
>>>> 
>>>>> 5) This document uses one or more of the following text styles. 
>>>>> Are these elements used consistently?
>>>>> 
>>>>> * fixed width font (<tt/> or `)
>>>>> * italics (<em/> or *)
>>>>> * bold (<strong/> or **)
>>>> 
>>>> These are not used.
>>>> 
>>>>> 6) This document contains sourcecode: 
>>>>> 
>>>>> * Does the sourcecode validate?
>>>>> * Some sourcecode types (e.g., YANG) require certain references and/or 
>>>>> text 
>>>>> in the Security Considerations section. Is this information correct?
>>>>> * Is the sourcecode type indicated in the XML? (See information about 
>>>>> types: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types.)
>>>> 
>>>> Yes, the ASN.1 compiles without errors.
>>>> 
>>>> There is pseudocode in Section 3.4 of the document.
>>>> 
>>>>> 7) Would you like to participate in the RPC Pilot Test for editing in 
>>>>> kramdown-rfc?
>>>>> If so, please let us know and provide a self-contained kramdown-rfc file. 
>>>>> For more
>>>>> information about this experiment, see:
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>> 
>>>> We used kramdown-rfc, and we will gladly participate in the experiment.
>>>> 
>>>>> 8) Would you like to participate in the RPC Pilot Test for completing 
>>>>> AUTH48 in 
>>>>> GitHub? If so, please let us know and provide all author, AD, and/or 
>>>>> document 
>>>>> shepherd GitHub usernames. For more information about this experiment, 
>>>>> see:
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=rpc-github-phase-0-pilot-test.
>>>> 
>>>> We are willing.
>>>> 
>>>>> 9) Is there anything else that the RPC should be aware of while editing 
>>>>> this 
>>>>> document?
>>>> 
>>>> No.
>>>> 
>>>> Russ
> 
> 

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