> On 20 Mar 2026, at 15:32, Kaelin Foody <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi *Deb, Eliot, all, > > *Deb - As AD, please review the following changes to this document. > > You may view them in the diff here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944-lastdiff.html. > > There is additional context in this email thread regarding these changes, but > we have summarized them below: > > Section 1.3: Added sentence re: line wrapping per RFC 8792. > Section 6.3.1: Updated paragraph that appears after Table 2. > Section 7.6: Removed sentence in first paragraph (per inclusive language > guidance). > Section 7.6.1: Updated definition of telemetryEnterpriseEndpoint. > Section 7.6.2: Updated one line of sourcecode. > > > Eliot, authors - Thank you for your review and replies. You may find the > updated files at the end of this email. > > A few follow-up questions: > > > i) For question 15 below, we have updated part a as requested. We want to > confirm how to proceed with the following: > > For part b -- should pointers to BLE 5.3 be updated to 5.4 throughout?
Go with 5.4. > > For part c -- is the “Current” text the correct reference? I need the text but probably the answer is “no” in relation to BLE. However, we have only tested against 5.4, and I will not make any claims about 5.5, which introduces new encrypted advertisement capabilities. > >> 15) <!-- [rfced] [BLE54]: Please review the following questions regarding >> this reference: >> >> a) We were unable to find "isRandom" mentioned in [BLE54] as seen >> below. Should this citation be updated? >> >> Original: >> >> isRandom: A boolean flag taken from [BLE54]. >> >>> You’re indeed correct. That flag itself is NOT taken from [BLE54]. The >>> description should be as follows: >>> >>> isRandom:A boolean flag. If FALSE, the device is using a public MAC >>> address. If TRUE, the device uses a random address. If an Identifying >>> Resolving Key (IRK) is present, the address represents a resolvable private >>> address. Otherwise, the address is assumed to be a random static address. >>> Non-resolvable private addresses are not supported by this specification. >>> This attribute is not required. It is mutable and is returned by default. >>> The default value is FALSE. See Vol 6 Part B, Section 1.3 of [BLE54] for >>> more information about different address types. >>> >>> We have one other issue to look at: we want to make sure we are pointing to >>> the amended 5.4 spec. The earlier one was withdrawn. The Section # above >>> is from the amended spec. >> >> b) We also note a few instances of "BLE core specifications 5.3" mentioned >> throughout this document. However, the Normative References section cites >> Version 5.4. Please review and let us know if/how to update accordingly. >> >> For example: >> >> "description": "The isRandom flag is taken from the BLE >> core specifications 5.3. If TRUE, device is using a >> random address. Default value is false.", >> >> c) Please review our updates to the text below. There are multiple volumes in >> [BLE54]; it appears Section 5.4.5 is referring to Volume 1, Part A, Section >> 5.4.5 of [BLE54]. Is this the correct section? >> >> Original: >> >> For more information about the use of the IRK, see Section 5.4.5 of >> [BLE54]. >> >> Current: >> >> For more information about the use of the IRK, see Volume 1, Part A, >> Section 5.4.5 of [BLE54]. >> --> >> >>> Yes. > > > > ii) To clarify, would you like these references below to remain as is (as two > separate references)? Actually, I think they’re one big PDF, so a reference to the same doc is fine. > >> 16) <!-- [rfced] References: >> >> a) We note that [draft-brinckman-nipc] was replaced by >> [draft-ietf-asdf-nipc]. >> Should these remain as two separate references? Or, would you like to remove >> the citation to [draft-brinckman-nipc] and only keep the >> reference to [draft-ietf-asdf-nipc]? >>> Yes. > > > iii) We have made the update below as requested. Please provide a reference > for [OAUTHv2]. RFC 6749. > >> OLD: >> >>> Note that either clientToken or certificateInfo is used for the >>> authentication of the application. If certificateInfo is NOT present when >>> an endpointApp object is created, then the server SHOULD return a >>> clientToken. Otherwise, if the server accepts the certificateInfo object >>> for authentication, it SHOULD NOT return a clientToken. If the server >>> accepts and produces a clientToken, then control and telemetry servers MUST >>> validate both. The SCIM client will know that this is the case based on the >>> SCIM object that is returned. >> >> >> Now there’s a nice big SHOULD in the middle of that, but it leads to a >> question as to when that SHOULD doesn’t apply. The obvious answer is with >> OAUTH. So we think the following text would address that point: >> >> NEW: >> >>> If certificateInfo is provided by the client and is accepted by the server, >>> the server MUST return that multivalued attribute in its response. >>> Otherwise, the server is expected to return a clientToken. If the server >>> returns neither certificateInfo nor a clientToken, then external >>> authentication such as [OAUTHv2] MUST be pre-arranged. If the server >>> accepts a certificate and produces a clientToken, then control and >>> telemetry servers MUST validate both. > > > iv) We have added Sriram to the Acknowledgments. Please let us know if there > is any additional text to include. > >> Finally, these matters were brought to our attention by Sriram Sekar who I >> would ask to be added to the acknowledgments. > > > v) Note that we have updated the expansion of NIPC to Non-Internet-Connected > Physical Components (NIPC) per Rohit Mohan’s email. Ok > >> c) FYI - We have added expansions for the following abbreviations. Please >> review >> each expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness. >> >> Certificate Authority (CA) >> Near Field Communication (NFC) >> Non-IP Device Control (NIPC) >> Universally Unique Identifier (UUID) >> --> > > > vi) Also note that we have added this Perhaps text to the document for now. > We will discuss with the team whether RESTful should be marked as well-known > (and not require expansion). Ok Thanks! Eliot > >> b) May we expand "RESTful" by providing a definition as follows? >> >> Original: >> >> confirmationNumber: An integer which some solutions require in >> RESTful message exchange. >> >> Perhaps: >> >> confirmationNumber: An integer that some solutions require in >> a RESTful message exchange (where RESTful refers to the Representational >> State Transfer (REST) architecture). >> >>> While I leave this to the RPC, might I suggest that RESTful now be consider >>> one of those industry terms of art that doesn’t require expansion? > > > > — FILES (please refresh): — > > The updated files have been posted here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944.xml > > Diff files showing changes between the last and current version: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944-lastdiff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side) > > Diff files showing changes made during AUTH48: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944-auth48diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > Diff files showing all changes: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944-diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944-rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9944 > > > Thank you, > > Kaelin Foody > RFC Production Center > > > On Mar 18, 2026, at 12:47 PM, Eliot Lear <[email protected]> > wrote: >> >> Hi RFC Editor and chairs and AD: >> >> In operational practice we have noticed two issues we would like to address >> in the RFC before it is closed. The first has to do with the use of OAUTH >> as a means to authenticate SCIM connections. Today we say in Section 6.3.1: >> >> OLD: >> >>> Note that either clientToken or certificateInfo is used for the >>> authentication of the application. If certificateInfo is NOT present when >>> an endpointApp object is created, then the server SHOULD return a >>> clientToken. Otherwise, if the server accepts the certificateInfo object >>> for authentication, it SHOULD NOT return a clientToken. If the server >>> accepts and produces a clientToken, then control and telemetry servers MUST >>> validate both. The SCIM client will know that this is the case based on the >>> SCIM object that is returned. >> >> >> Now there’s a nice big SHOULD in the middle of that, but it leads to a >> question as to when that SHOULD doesn’t apply. The obvious answer is with >> OAUTH. So we think the following text would address that point: >> >> NEW: >> >>> If certificateInfo is provided by the client and is accepted by the server, >>> the server MUST return that multivalued attribute in its response. >>> Otherwise, the server is expected to return a clientToken. If the server >>> returns neither certificateInfo nor a clientToken, then external >>> authentication such as [OAUTHv2] MUST be pre-arranged. If the server >>> accepts a certificate and produces a clientToken, then control and >>> telemetry servers MUST validate both. >> >> >> This is a bit more crisp and prescriptive. >> >> Then in Section 7.6.1, we’ve noted one other issue: >> >>> telemetryEnterpriseEndpoint:A string representing a URL of the enterprise >>> endpoint to reach an enterprise gateway for telemetry. When the enterprise >>> receives the SCIM object from the onboarding application, it adds this >>> attribute to it and sends it back as a response to the onboarding >>> application. This attribute is optional, case sensitive, mutable, and >>> returned by default. The uniqueness is enforced by the enterprise. An >>> implementation MUST generate an exception if telemetryEnterpriseEndpoint is >>> not returned and telemetry is required for the proper functioning of a >>> device. >> >> >> It is possible that this service may be externalized. That is, it’s there, >> but the SCIM implementation for $REASONs doesn’t know about it. To address >> this point, we propose to replace the last sentence (“An implementation … a >> device.”) as follows: >> >> NEW: >> >>> This attribute is populated when the enterprise provides a telemetry >>> endpoint (e.g., hosted by the enterprise gateway). If a telemetry service >>> is not known by the SCIM server, the attribute will not be returned. In >>> such cases, if the application requires telemetry, separate arrangements >>> must be made. >> >> >> Two other points: >> >> To answer Kaelin’s earlier question, we propose to add a note in Section 1.3 >> as follows: >> >>> When JSON is presented in this memo, it is folded in accordance with RFC >>> 8792. >> >> >> Also, we caught one error in an example in Section 7.6.2. >> >> OLD: >> >>> "telemetryEnterpriseEndpoint": "https://example.com/\ >> >> NEW: >> >>> "telemetryEnterpriseEndpoint": "mqtts://example.com/\ >> >> >> >> Noting the change of URI scheme. >> >> Finally, these matters were brought to our attention by Sriram Sekar who I >> would ask to be added to the acknowledgments. >> >> Eliot >> >>> On 11 Mar 2026, at 19:39, [email protected] wrote: >>> >>> *****IMPORTANT***** >>> >>> Updated 2026/03/11 >>> >>> RFC Author(s): >>> -------------- >>> >>> Instructions for Completing AUTH48 >>> >>> Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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