Hi Megan!

One of our dear chairs kicked us about this. Sorry! This email should go to the email address in the I-D and not this one. It was filtered into folders I rarely look at.

That aside: I approve publication of the document in its current form!

Viele Grüße,

Henk

On 19.05.26 19:33, Megan Ferguson wrote:
Authors,

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On Apr 22, 2026, at 4:11 PM, Megan Ferguson <[email protected]> 
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Hi Deb,

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On Apr 18, 2026, at 4:03 PM, Deb Cooley <[email protected]> wrote:

I approve.

Deb

On Fri, Apr 17, 2026 at 5:33 PM Megan Ferguson <[email protected]> 
wrote:
All,

*AD / *Deb - please review and approve the updates made to the code and 
surrounding text in the following diff:
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Antoine - Thank you for sending along this file and particularly for resolving 
the SVG issues (we have no trouble selecting or searching for the content now).

We believe the media type issue raised by Stephane and David (prepending with 
scitt) has been resolved in the document and it looks like it matches with the 
IANA registration on the main page (at 
https://www.iana.org/assignments/media-types/media-types.xhtml) but that IANA 
will still need to update the templates themselves (linked from the main page) 
to include scitt.  NOTE: we can request this update on your behalf when we 
request the other changes to the template to match the document (upon 
completion of AUTH48).

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On Apr 17, 2026, at 7:34 AM, Antoine Delignat-Lavaud <[email protected]> 
wrote:

Dear Megan,

Please find attached our latest corrections for 9943. We have checked with 
author-tools that this compiles without error.

These corrections should address all remaining open editorial comments and also 
includes a few editorial corrections we found while reviewing the editor 
changes. The corresponding problems in 9942 have also been addressed in a 
separate update I sent on the AUTH48 thread.

Best,
AntoineFrom: Megan Ferguson <[email protected]>
Sent: Tuesday, April 14, 2026 16:05
To: Antoine Delignat-Lavaud <[email protected]>
Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>; Birkholz, Henk <[email protected]>; Cedric Fournet 
<[email protected]>; Yogesh Deshpande <[email protected]>; [email protected] 
<[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]>; 
Amaury Chamayou <[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]>; [email protected] 
<[email protected]>
Subject: Re: [EXTERNAL] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9943 
<draft-ietf-scitt-architecture-22> for your review
Hi Antoine,

Unfortunately, we are unable to create outputs with the XML provided (you can 
use authors-tools.ietf.org to see the error warnings if you like).

Mostly the errors seem to be due to the use of the aasvg —stretch flag, which 
places the invalid attributes textLength and lengthAdjust in the SVG.

If you could update and resubmit to us, we’d appreciate it.

Thank you.

Megan Ferguson
RFC Production Center


On Apr 14, 2026, at 4:15 AM, Antoine Delignat-Lavaud <[email protected]> 
wrote:

Dear Megan,

We have batched all the updates in the enclosed XML file. This includes the 
updated ASCII art / SVG as discussed.

Let us know if you are happy with the remaining rfced opens.

Best,
Antoine (on behalf of the authors)

From: Megan Ferguson <[email protected]>
Sent: Thursday, April 2, 2026 00:49
To: Antoine Delignat-Lavaud <[email protected]>
Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>; Birkholz, Henk <[email protected]>; Cedric Fournet 
<[email protected]>; Yogesh Deshpande <[email protected]>; [email protected] 
<[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]>; [email protected]<[email protected]>; Amaury 
Chamayou <[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]>; 
[email protected]<[email protected]>
Subject: Re: [EXTERNAL] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9943 
<draft-ietf-scitt-architecture-22> for your review
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Antoine,

Thank you for your reply and guidance.

We have updated this document with Cédric’s responses to our cluster-wide 
queries (see our other mail) as well as your responses to the document-specific 
questions.  We had a few follow-up questions/comments related to the 
document-specific questions marked with [rfced] below (all resolved issues have 
been removed).


On Mar 27, 2026, at 8:23 AM, Antoine Delignat-Lavaud 
<[email protected]> wrote:


2) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions related to SVG used
throughout the document:> a) Please review our update to Figure 1 from 
"3rd-party" to
"third-party". It looks like making this change may have affected the
spacing of that sentence. Please regenerate.The SVG is generated automatically 
from this source ASCII syntax: 
https://github.com/ietf-wg-scitt/draft-ietf-scitt-architecture/blob/main/draft-ietf-scitt-architecture.md?plain=1#L209We
 can update this and generate a new one, is the correct way to proceed to do 
that and publish a new draft incorporating this change, or to send the a 
separate SVG file by email?

[rfced] We can do it by email.  It may be best to wait until AUTH48 completes 
to avoid multiple iterations. We have noted the two changes requested to SVG at 
the AUTH48 status page (see link below).

b) We note that the text within at least one (maybe more) of the SVG
figures is not able to be selected. Is it possible to modify the SVG
using your preferred SVG editing software to improve the rendering of
the string in the SVG?We have used https://github.com/martinthomson/aasvg 
produce the svg.
We are not sure what issue you are referring to, we are able to select the text 
in the figures, could you clarify?

[rfced] The SVG seems to have the following limitations:

1) When looking at the PDF version in my browser, searching two-word terms in the SVG does not 
result in a hit (e.g., "Falsification" results in a hit but "Falsification of” 
does not).

2) When attempting to copy and paste from one of the SVG figures in the PDF 
version in my browser, I can select text, but often too much text is 
highlighted or not the line I am going for.

If you used aasvg, perhaps you could tweak the 'spaces' attribute to improve 
search and selectability? This seems to be an issue with kramdown-rfc's default 
sometimes -- and seems likely here based on how the following looks:

                  <text x="224" y="404">Falsification</text>
                  <text x="292" y="404">of</text>
                  <text x="324" y="404">test</text>
                  <text x="376" y="404">results</text>



3) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions/comments related to the
    Terminology section:

a) We have moved the following paragraph to appear directly before the
list of terms defined in this document as the terms borrowed from
other documents (e.g., "header") are not capitalized in the text.  We
have also changed "corresponding" to "following" for clarity.  Please
review and let us know any objections.

Original:
   When used in text, the corresponding terms are capitalized.  To
   ensure readability, only a core set of terms is included in this
   section.

Current:
   When used in text, the following terms are capitalized.  To
   ensure readability, only a core set of terms is included in this
   section.We propose the following additional clarification:Current:
   When used in text in the sense defined, the following terms are
capitalized. To ensure readability, only a core set of terms is
included in this section.

[rfced] Just noting that the additional sentence you suggest above in (a) 
actually resolves our question (b) (that was not included in your mail).  We 
will consider question (b) resolved unless we hear otherwise.



b) We believe To Be Signed Bytes should be made To-Be-Signed Bytes to
match the use in the Terminology section. If this is the case, please
update and regenerate the SVG.We agree, should we push a new draft, or send the 
SVG separately?

[rfced] Just noting that this would be another SVG update as mentioned above.


11) <!-- [rfced] The reference entries for [SPDX-CBOR] and
[SPDX-JSON] are identical. Should these references be condensed
down into one reference?They should be condensed down to one reference.
[rfced] Please review our update to use [SPDX-CBOR] only and let us know any 
objections.

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