Thank you Jeff. Looks good to me for #16.

Thanks,
Ketan


On Wed, May 27, 2026 at 5:02 PM Jeffrey Haas <[email protected]> wrote:

> Ketan,
>
> On 5/27/26 04:32, Ketan Talaulikar wrote:
> > Hi Jeff,
> >
> > Can you please check question #16 and let me know your views from the
> > authors' perspective? Even though the question was directed to the AD, I
> > would like to understand the reasons (if any) for deviating from the
> > authors' perspective.
>
> Deviations are likely due to the thrash in this cluster of documents as
> to what lived in which document rather than by intention.
>
> On 5/22/26 16:08, [email protected] wrote:
> > 16) <!--[rfced] *AD, we note that the YANG Security Considerations
> > (Section 15.2 in this document) varies from the template
> > in Section 3.7.1 of RFC 9907. We updated the first
> > three paragraphs in this document to match the template. Please
> > review and also provide guidance for the following questions:
> >
> > a) Paragraph 4 from the template is missing in this document. Should
> > "There are no particularly sensitive writable data nodes." be included
> > in this document to address this?
>
> This is correct.
>
> > b) Paragraph 5 from the template is missing in this document. Should
> > "There are no particularly sensitive readable data nodes." be included
> > in this document to address this?
> This is correct.
> > c) Paragraph 6 from the template is missing in this document. Should
> > "There are no particularly sensitive RPC or action operations." be
> > included in this document to address this?
>
> This is correct.
>
> > d) Paragraph 4 in this document almost matches paragraph 8 in the
> > template (which begins with "The YANG module defines a set of
> > identities, types, and groupings."). Note that "types" and "groupings"
> > haven been omitted. Please let us know if this is okay or if any
> > updates are needed for consistency with the template.
>
> The text contained in the document best reflects the nature of the
> intention here.
>
> -- Jeff
>
>
>
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