Alanna, Alice, Thank you for reviewing and editing our document!
Replies inline as jhead>> From: [email protected] <[email protected]> Date: Friday, May 29, 2026 at 6:33 PM To: Head, Jordan <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, Przygienda, Tony <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]> Subject: Re: Final review: RFC-to-be 9992 (draft-ietf-rift-kv-tie-structure-and-processing) Authors, While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the source file. 1) <!--[rfced] Tony, we note that the email address used in this document does not match your email addresses as they appear here: https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://datatracker.ietf.org/person/Tony*20Przygienda__;JQ!!NpxR!g2r540mi05sUS4XCIajxx4ubLhMmveiSk-R9wqI3OEW_RapTaFEFFgzZ83qOryc45ApVIxoMqnB8NtHP4-EVRew$ Which email address would you like to appear in the RFC? --> jhead>> Spoke with Tony, the HPE e-mail is correct. 2) <!--[rfced] May we clarify this citation as follows? Original: [RIFT-AUTO-EVPN] is an example of this type of implementation. Perhaps: For example, [RIFT-AUTO-EVPN] describes this type of implementation. --> jhead>> Good with this. 3) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether this note should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container for content that is semantically less important or tangential to the content that surrounds it" (https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary*aside__;Iw!!NpxR!g2r540mi05sUS4XCIajxx4ubLhMmveiSk-R9wqI3OEW_RapTaFEFFgzZ83qOryc45ApVIxoMqnB8NtHP6jMKCS0$ ). Original: *NOTE:*Like [RFC9692], this section uses terms to denote directionality, specifically, "northbound" meaning "toward the top of the fabric" and "southbound" meaning "toward the bottom of the fabric". --> jhead>> Yes, <aside> works here. 4) <!--[rfced] In Figure 6, is the second comma necessary? Original: | (System ID, | Level), Perhaps: | (System ID, | Level) —> jhead>> A matter of taste really, it can be removed. 5) <!-- [rfced] Three lines in Figure 9 exceeded the 69-character line limit. We updated as follows; please let us if they should be modified otherwise. Original: /// given a system ID delivers the bits set by the according Bloom Filter in the southbound /// key value target. pub (crate) fn target2bits(target: UnsignedSystemID) -> KeyValueTargetType { (0 as usize .. 3) .map(|s| { let rot = (target ^ RANDOMSEEDS[s]).rotate_left(s as _); rot.to_ne_bytes().iter().fold(0, |v: u8, nv| v.rotate_right(4) ^ *nv) % 64 }) .fold(0, |v, nv| v | (1 << nv)) } Current: /// given a system ID delivers the bits set by the according /// Bloom Filter in the southbound key value target. pub (crate) fn target2bits(target: UnsignedSystemID) -> KeyValueTargetType { (0 as usize .. 3) .map(|s| { let rot = (target ^ RANDOMSEEDS[s]).rotate_left(s as _); rot.to_ne_bytes().iter().fold(0, |v: u8, nv| v.rotate_right(4) ^ *nv) % 64 }) .fold(0, |v, nv| v | (1 << nv)) } --> jhead>> This is fine. 6) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "type" attribute of the sourcecode element in Section 3.2 in the XML file to ensure correctness. If the current list of preferred values for "type" (https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types__;!!NpxR!g2r540mi05sUS4XCIajxx4ubLhMmveiSk-R9wqI3OEW_RapTaFEFFgzZ83qOryc45ApVIxoMqnB8NtHPsfFFxuk$ ) does not contain an applicable type, then feel free to let us know. Also, it is acceptable to leave the "type" attribute not set. In addition, review each artwork element. Specifically, should any artwork element be tagged as sourcecode or another element? --> jhead>> Not setting it is fine. No other figures need to be set as <sourcecode> 7) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have added expansions for the following abbreviations per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness. Link State Database (LSDB) Organizationally Unique Identifier (OUI) --> jhead>> I’m good with your expansions. 8) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online Style Guide <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/*inclusive_language__;Iw!!NpxR!g2r540mi05sUS4XCIajxx4ubLhMmveiSk-R9wqI3OEW_RapTaFEFFgzZ83qOryc45ApVIxoMqnB8NtHPTb-pMFc$ > and let us know if any changes are needed. Updates of this nature typically result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers. Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should still be reviewed as a best practice. --> jhead>> No further changes required here. Thanks for the reminder. Thank you. 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Thank you for your cooperation, RFC Editor -------------------------------------- RFC 9992 (draft-ietf-rift-kv-tie-structure-and-processing) Title : Routing in Fat Trees (RIFT) Key/Value Topology Information Elements Structure and Processing Author(s) : J. Head, Ed., T. Przygienda WG Chair(s) : Zhaohui Zhang, Jeff Tantsura Area Director(s) : Jim Guichard, Ketan Talaulikar, Gunter Van de Velde
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