Hi Sarah,

We have a few code blocks that don’t really fit any of those “normal” types 
since they are representations meant mainly for better understanding and not 
“normal” encodings. I’ve chosen the normal/fitting identifiers for everything 
that fits (cddl, asn.1, json, etc.) and type identifiers that roughly fit for 
the few weird ones (like the jwt header + payload example), but happy to adjust 
if anyone has better ideas for those.

I’ve removed all includes and moved the examples into the core markdown file. 
PR is currently here: 
https://github.com/oauth-wg/draft-ietf-oauth-status-list/pull/357 , but I am 
getting some weird nits like wrong indentation in the sections if I run the 
generated txt through idnits which don’t really seem to make sense to me.
Could I kindly ask you to take a look at the file in that branch 
(https://raw.githubusercontent.com/oauth-wg/draft-ietf-oauth-status-list/refs/heads/editorial-fixes-kramdown/draft-ietf-oauth-status-list.md)
 and comment if that looks good to you/your tooling?

Best Regards,
Christian

> On 15. Jun 2026, at 15:16, Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> 
> wrote:
> 
> Hi Christian,
> 
> Very good!
> 
> For the code blocks, if you need a type, check out our list here: 
> https://rpc-wiki.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types. Also, 
> anything on IANA's media types list is also acceptable: 
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/media-types/media-types.xhtml.
> 
> As for the TBDs, please hold off on adding those. We can add those later.
> 
> I'll be on the lookout for a new version and a new markdown file!
> 
> Thank you,
> Sarah Tarrant
> RFC Production Center
> 
>> On Jun 15, 2026, at 7:08 AM, Christian Bormann <[email protected]> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Sarah,
>> 
>> I am working on a PR that addresses these points - here are a few comments:
>> 
>> B) I believe those are the inline code blocks - I didn’t associate those 
>> with your question, sorry! Those are intentional to signal parameters/claims 
>> in the text - basically every time a concrete parameter etc. is referenced.
>> 
>> C) Sorry, I only thought about source code, not code blocks with JSON/CBOR 
>> etc. We have quite a few code blocks that aren’t any of the “normal" formal 
>> types - for example annotated cbor or JWT in <header>.<payload> annotation. 
>> We weren’t really sure what code-block type to use for those, so we left it 
>> empty, but I found custom types in other RFCs that I will re-use.
>> 
>> D) I’ll move all examples into the core markdown file and remove the 
>> includes.
>> 
>> We should be able to publish a new version with those changes this week.
>> Since we also got a mail regarding the pending IANA registrations (that we 
>> will answer in a few days) and had a few “TBD”s in the text, should I also 
>> update these TBDs to the numbers that were created by IANA now?
>> 
>> Best regards,
>> Christian
>> 
>>> On 11. Jun 2026, at 16:25, Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> 
>>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi Christian, Paul, and Tobias,
>>> 
>>> Thank you for your reply! I do have some followup questions/comments:
>>> 
>>> A) Regarding 3), yes, please! If you want to fix up those lists, please 
>>> submit a new version to the datatracker. Once you do that, be sure to send 
>>> me the updated self-contained markdown file as well.
>>> 
>>> B) Regarding 5), please take another look at the submitted XML file as I 
>>> found <tt> throughout (e.g., bits, StatusList, lst, aggregation_ur, typ, 
>>> etc.). If this was done unintentionally, please submit a corrected version 
>>> that aligns with your intentions. However, if this was intentional, please 
>>> let us know what patten you followed so that we can help keep the usage 
>>> consistent in the document.
>>> 
>>> C) Regarding 6), I'm seeing sourcecode elements in the XML, particularly 
>>> json, cddl, and (possibly) asn.1. This can get blurred between the markdown 
>>> and the xml files, as markdown doesn't always have a "type" selected. If it 
>>> is helpful to think of these elements as "formal language", see: 
>>> https://authors.ietf.org/formal-languages. We just want to verify that what 
>>> is in the submitted XML is correct and intentional, so please let us know 
>>> that.
>>> 
>>> D) Regarding 7), I'm not able to parse the markdown file at: 
>>> https://github.com/oauth-wg/draft-ietf-oauth-status-list/blob/main/draft-ietf-oauth-status-list.md?plain=1.
>>>  It looks like a couple {::include elements were used; so, if you would 
>>> like to proceed with markdown, we would need a self-contained file.
>>> 
>>> Sincerely,
>>> Sarah Tarrant
>>> RFC Production Center
>>> 
>>>> On Jun 11, 2026, at 2:07 AM, Christian Bormann 
>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Dear RPC team,
>>>> 
>>>> Thanks, below are the answers to the questions:
>>>> 
>>>>> 1) As there may have been multiple updates made to the document during 
>>>>> Last Call, 
>>>>> please review the current version of the document: 
>>>>> 
>>>>> * Is the text in the Abstract still accurate?
>>>>> * Are the Authors' Addresses, Contributors, and Acknowledgments 
>>>>> sections current?
>>>> 
>>>> Abstract is still accurate and Author’s names & email addresses are 
>>>> current.
>>>> Acknowledgements should be current as well.
>>>> 
>>>>> 2) Please share any style information that could help us with editing 
>>>>> your 
>>>>> document. For example:
>>>>> 
>>>>> * Is your document's format or its terminology based on another document, 
>>>>> WG style guide, etc.? If so, please provide a pointer to that information 
>>>>> (e.g., "This document's terminology should match DNS terminology in 
>>>>> RFC 9499." or "This document uses the style info at 
>>>>> <https://httpwg.org/admin/editors/style-guide>.").
>>>>> * Is there a general pattern of capitalization or formatting of terms 
>>>>> that 
>>>>> editors can follow (e.g., "Field names should have initial 
>>>>> capitalization." 
>>>>> or  "Parameter names should be in double quotes." or "<tt/> should be 
>>>>> used 
>>>>> for token names." etc.)?
>>>> 
>>>> Everything introduced in terminology is capitalised.
>>>> In terms of terminology, RFC9901 (SD-JWT) is an important reference for 
>>>> the issuer-holder-verifier model that we’ve been following for this draft.
>>>> 
>>>>> 3) Please carefully review the entries and their URLs in the
>>>>> References section with the following in mind. Note that we will 
>>>>> update as follows unless we hear otherwise at this time:
>>>>> 
>>>>> * References to obsoleted RFCs will be updated to point to the current 
>>>>> RFC on the topic in accordance with Section 4.8.6 of RFC 7322 
>>>>> (RFC Style Guide).
>>>>> 
>>>>> * References to I-Ds that have been replaced by another I-D will be 
>>>>> updated to point to the replacement I-D.
>>>>> 
>>>>> * References to documents from other organizations that have been 
>>>>> superseded will be updated to their superseding version.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Note: To check for outdated RFC and I-D references, you can use 
>>>>> idnits <https://author-tools.ietf.org/idnits>. You can also help the
>>>>> IETF Tools Team by testing idnits3 
>>>>> <https://author-tools.ietf.org/idnits3/>
>>>>> with your document and reporting any issues to them.
>>>> 
>>>> We found a few smaller issues like sd-jwt vc having published a new 
>>>> version (and I’d assume they will publish another version before IETF 
>>>> Vienna). There also seem to be some minor problems with the txt rendering 
>>>> of lists in the IANA section that I will try to resolve.
>>>> Should we release a new version with those fixes?
>>>> 
>>>>> 4) Is there any text that requires special handling? For example:
>>>>> * Are there any sections that were contentious when the document was 
>>>>> drafted?
>>>>> * Are any sections that need to be removed before publication marked as 
>>>>> such 
>>>>> (e.g., Implementation Status sections (per RFC 7942)).
>>>>> * Are there any instances of repeated text/sections that should be edited 
>>>>> the same way?
>>>> 
>>>> Document history is present that is marked as “to be removed from the 
>>>> final specification”
>>>> There are some TBD placeholders for IANA registration which need to be 
>>>> adjusted once identifiers are assigned
>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 5) This document uses one or more of the following text styles.  
>>>>> Are these elements used consistently?
>>>>> 
>>>>> * fixed width font (<tt/> or `)
>>>>> * italics (<em/> or *)
>>>>> * bold (<strong/> or **)
>>>> 
>>>> No
>>>> 
>>>>> 6) This document contains sourcecode: 
>>>>> 
>>>>> * Does the sourcecode validate?
>>>>> * Some sourcecode types (e.g., YANG) require certain references and/or 
>>>>> text 
>>>>> in the Security Considerations section. Is this information correct?
>>>>> * Is the sourcecode type indicated in the XML? (See information about 
>>>>> types: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types.)
>>>> 
>>>> No
>>>> 
>>>>> 7)  Would you like to participate in the RPC Pilot Test for editing in 
>>>>> kramdown-rfc?
>>>>> If so, please let us know and provide a self-contained kramdown-rfc file. 
>>>>> For more
>>>>> information about this experiment, see:
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>> 
>>>> If it doesn’t delay publication, sure! Our repository containing the 
>>>> markdown is at https://github.com/oauth-wg/draft-ietf-oauth-status-list It 
>>>> is not a fully self-contained file right now though with the examples in 
>>>> separate files.
>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 8) Would you like to participate in the RPC Pilot Test for completing 
>>>>> Final Review 
>>>>> in GitHub? If so, please let us know and provide all author, AD, and/or 
>>>>> document 
>>>>> shepherd GitHub usernames. For more information about this experiment, 
>>>>> see:
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=rpc-github-phase-0-pilot-test.
>>>> 
>>>> Same as 7) 
>>>> 
>>>> https://github.com/oauth-wg/draft-ietf-oauth-status-list
>>>> Author’s GitHub handles: c2bo, paulbastian, tplooker
>>>> AD: debcooley
>>>> Document Shepherd: rifaat-ietf
>>>> 
>>>> (Deb, Rifaat please check, but these seem to be correct?)
>>>> 
>>>>> 9) Is there anything else that the RPC should be aware of while editing 
>>>>> this 
>>>>> document?
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Nothing we are aware of
>>>> 
>>>> ---
>>>> 
>>>> Best Regards,
>>>> 
>>>> Paul, Tobias, Christian
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>>> On 4. Jun 2026, at 23:30, [email protected] wrote:
>>>>> 
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>>>>> 1) As there may have been multiple updates made to the document during 
>>>>> Last Call, 
>>>>> please review the current version of the document: 
>>>>> 
>>>>> * Is the text in the Abstract still accurate?
>>>>> * Are the Authors' Addresses, Contributors, and Acknowledgments 
>>>>> sections current?
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 2) Please share any style information that could help us with editing 
>>>>> your 
>>>>> document. For example:
>>>>> 
>>>>> * Is your document's format or its terminology based on another document, 
>>>>> WG style guide, etc.? If so, please provide a pointer to that information 
>>>>> (e.g., "This document's terminology should match DNS terminology in 
>>>>> RFC 9499." or "This document uses the style info at 
>>>>> <https://httpwg.org/admin/editors/style-guide>.").
>>>>> * Is there a general pattern of capitalization or formatting of terms 
>>>>> that 
>>>>> editors can follow (e.g., "Field names should have initial 
>>>>> capitalization." 
>>>>> or  "Parameter names should be in double quotes." or "<tt/> should be 
>>>>> used 
>>>>> for token names." etc.)?
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 3) Please carefully review the entries and their URLs in the
>>>>> References section with the following in mind. Note that we will 
>>>>> update as follows unless we hear otherwise at this time:
>>>>> 
>>>>> * References to obsoleted RFCs will be updated to point to the current 
>>>>> RFC on the topic in accordance with Section 4.8.6 of RFC 7322 
>>>>> (RFC Style Guide).
>>>>> 
>>>>> * References to I-Ds that have been replaced by another I-D will be 
>>>>> updated to point to the replacement I-D.
>>>>> 
>>>>> * References to documents from other organizations that have been 
>>>>> superseded will be updated to their superseding version.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Note: To check for outdated RFC and I-D references, you can use 
>>>>> idnits <https://author-tools.ietf.org/idnits>. You can also help the
>>>>> IETF Tools Team by testing idnits3 
>>>>> <https://author-tools.ietf.org/idnits3/>
>>>>> with your document and reporting any issues to them.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 4) Is there any text that requires special handling? For example:
>>>>> * Are there any sections that were contentious when the document was 
>>>>> drafted?
>>>>> * Are any sections that need to be removed before publication marked as 
>>>>> such 
>>>>> (e.g., Implementation Status sections (per RFC 7942)).
>>>>> * Are there any instances of repeated text/sections that should be edited 
>>>>> the same way?
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 5) This document uses one or more of the following text styles.  
>>>>> Are these elements used consistently?
>>>>> 
>>>>> * fixed width font (<tt/> or `)
>>>>> * italics (<em/> or *)
>>>>> * bold (<strong/> or **)
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 6) This document contains sourcecode: 
>>>>> 
>>>>> * Does the sourcecode validate?
>>>>> * Some sourcecode types (e.g., YANG) require certain references and/or 
>>>>> text 
>>>>> in the Security Considerations section. Is this information correct?
>>>>> * Is the sourcecode type indicated in the XML? (See information about 
>>>>> types: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types.)
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 7)  Would you like to participate in the RPC Pilot Test for editing in 
>>>>> kramdown-rfc?
>>>>> If so, please let us know and provide a self-contained kramdown-rfc file. 
>>>>> For more
>>>>> information about this experiment, see:
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 8) Would you like to participate in the RPC Pilot Test for completing 
>>>>> Final Review 
>>>>> in GitHub? If so, please let us know and provide all author, AD, and/or 
>>>>> document 
>>>>> shepherd GitHub usernames. For more information about this experiment, 
>>>>> see:
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=rpc-github-phase-0-pilot-test.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 9) Is there anything else that the RPC should be aware of while editing 
>>>>> this 
>>>>> document?
>>>> 
>>> 
>> 
> 

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