Hi Acee, Thank you for your reply.
I have one followup question regarding the sourcecode in the XML. >> 5) This document appears to contain a formal language (or code / code >> snippets that will be marked with <sourcecode> in this document's >> XML file). See https://authors.ietf.org/formal-languages. >> >> * Does it validate? >> >> * Some formal languages (e.g., YANG) require certain reference entries >> and/or boilerplate in the Security Considerations section (see the link >> above for more information). Please confirm that this document matches >> the current guidance for the language type. >> >> * Unless already indicated in a submitted XML file for this document, >> please let us know what type should be used for the <sourcecode> element >> for each module/snippet/etc. (See information about <sourcecode> types >> at https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types.) > > This is taken care. It appears that the artwork elements in Sections 2.2, 2.3, 2.4, 2.5, 3, and 4 and Appendix A should be marked as sourcecode. Could you confirm if these need to be marked as sourcecode and, if so, which type (e.g., yang-tree, yang, etc.)? Thank you, Sarah Tarrant RFC Production Center > On Jun 23, 2026, at 5:11 AM, Acee Lindem <[email protected]> wrote: > > See inline. > >> On Jun 22, 2026, at 4:58 PM, [email protected] wrote: >> >> CC: [email protected] >> Subject: Document intake questions about draft-foo-00 >> >> Author(s), >> >> Congratulations, your document has been successfully added to the RFC Editor >> queue! >> The team at the RFC Production Center (RPC) is looking forward to working >> with you >> as your document moves forward toward publication. To help reduce processing >> time >> and improve editing accuracy, please respond to the questions below. 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For example: >> >> * Are there any sections that were contentious when the document was drafted? >> >> * Are any sections that need to be removed before publication marked as such >> (e.g., Implementation Status sections (per RFC 7942))? >> >> * Are there any instances of repeated text/sections that should be edited >> the same way? > > No. > > >> >> >> 5) This document appears to contain a formal language (or code / code >> snippets that will be marked with <sourcecode> in this document's >> XML file). See https://authors.ietf.org/formal-languages. >> >> * Does it validate? >> >> * Some formal languages (e.g., YANG) require certain reference entries >> and/or boilerplate in the Security Considerations section (see the link >> above for more information). Please confirm that this document matches >> the current guidance for the language type. >> >> * Unless already indicated in a submitted XML file for this document, >> please let us know what type should be used for the <sourcecode> element >> for each module/snippet/etc. (See information about <sourcecode> types >> at https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types.) > > This is taken care. > > >> >> >> 6) Is there anything else that the RPC should be aware of while editing this >> document? > > No > > Thanks, > Acee -- auth48archive mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
