Authors,

While reviewing this document during Final Review, please resolve (as necessary)
the following questions, which are also in GitHub issues
(see https://github.com/rfc-editor-drafts/FinalReview-rfc10017/issues).

1) <!--[rfced] Should this document be assigned a new BCP number, or 
should it be part of an existing BCP such as BCP 212 or BCP 240?    

See the complete list of BCPs here:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/bcps
-->


2) <!-- [rfced] FYI: We updated [I-D.ietf-httpbis-rfc6265bis] to [PRE-RFC10025]
for now. We will make the final updates in RFCXML (i.e., remove "PRE-" in 
"PRE-RFC10025" and"PRE-10025").
-->


3) <!-- [rfced] FYI: We updated the formats of the W3C and WHATWG
references to include "this version" and "latest version" URLs. In the
case of WHATWG, we added "commit snapshots" to the references to
provide a snapshot of the specification as it existed at the time of
publication.
-->


4) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. 
-->


5) <!-- [rfced] Does applications "executing in a browser" mean applications 
that run/operate in a browser? If so, would the perhaps text be clearer?

Original:
   This specification describes different architectural patterns for 
   implementing OAuth 2.0 clients in applications executing in a browser.

Perhaps:
   This specification describes different architectural patterns for 
   implementing OAuth 2.0 clients in browser-based applications.
-->


6) <!--[rfced] We note that "resource owner" is only used within the term 
"Resource Owner Password Credentials Grant". Given this, should it be 
removed from the text below, or is it okay to leave it as is?

Current:
   This specification uses the terms "access token", "authorization
   endpoint", "authorization grant", "authorization server", "client",
   "client identifier" (client ID), "protected resource", "refresh
   token", "resource owner", "resource server", and "token endpoint" as
   defined by OAuth 2.0 [RFC6749].
-->


7) <!--[rfced] We updated the following term descriptions for consistency
(i.e., expansion first and then the description). Please let us know
of any objections.

Original:
   "PKCE":  Proof Key for Code Exchange (PKCE) [RFC7636], a mechanism to
      prevent various attacks on OAuth authorization codes.

   "DPoP":  OAuth 2.0 Demonstrating of Proof of Possession (DPoP)
      [RFC9449] is a mechanism to restrict access tokens to be used only
      by the client they were issued to.

   "CORS":  Cross-Origin Resource Sharing [Fetch], a mechanism that
      enables exceptions to the browser's same-origin policy.

   "CSP":  Content Security Policy [W3C.CSP3], a mechanism of
      restricting which resources a particular web page can fetch or
      execute.

Current:
   PKCE:  Proof Key for Code Exchange [RFC7636].  A mechanism that prevents
      various attacks on OAuth authorization codes.

   DPoP:  Demonstrating Proof of Possession [RFC9449].  An OAuth
      2.0 mechanism that restricts access tokens for use only by the
      client they were issued to.

   CORS:  Cross-Origin Resource Sharing [Fetch].  A mechanism that
      enables exceptions to the browser's same-origin policy.

   CSP:  Content Security Policy [W3C.CSP3].  A mechanism that 
      restricts which resources a particular web page can fetch or
      execute.
-->


8) <!--[rfced] We note three instances of "Implicit flow". Should this term be 
updated as "implicit grant" to match use in RFCs 6749 and 9700 or as 
"Implicit grant" to match "Implicit grant type" as used elsewhere in this 
document?

Original:
   This limitation was one of the motivations for the
   definition of the Implicit flow (Section 4.2 of [RFC6749]), which
   returns the access token in the front channel via the fragment part
   of the URL, bypassing the need for a cross-origin POST request.
-->


9) <!--[rfced] We added "in requests" before "to resource servers" for clarity. 
Please let us know if that is not correct.

Original:
   In essence, abusing a stolen refresh token enables long-term impersonation 
   of the legitimate client application to resource servers.

Current:
   In essence, abusing a stolen refresh token enables long-term impersonation 
   of the legitimate client application in requests to resource servers.
-->


10) <!--[rfced] Please review whether any of the notes in this document
should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container for 
content that is semantically less important or tangential to the 
content that surrounds it" 
(https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside).
-->


11) <!--[rfced] FYI: We updated the second sentence as shown below for 
clarity as "items are only not "MUSTs" reads oddly.

Original:
   Note: In new deployments, all of the above requirements are likely 
   to be straightforward to implement. The "SHOULD" items are only not 
   "MUSTs" so that existing architectures can be compliant.

Current:
   Note: In new deployments, all of the above requirements are likely 
   to be straightforward to implement. The "SHOULD" items are not 
   deemed as "MUST" items so that existing architectures can be compliant. 
-->


12) <!--[rfced] In Section 6.2.2.3, may we clarify "relying on [RCF8707]"?

Original:
   The token-mediating backend can use a similar mechanism to
   downscoping when relying on [RFC8707] to obtain access token for a
   specific resource server.

Perhaps:
   The token-mediating backend can use a similar mechanism to the
   downscoping mechanism when relying on the extension described in 
   [RFC8707] to obtain an access token for a specific resource server.

Similarly, in the list in Section 9.1, may we clarify "Use [RFC8707]"?

Original:
   *  Use [RFC8707] to restrict access tokens to a single resource

Perhaps:
   *  Restrict access tokens to a single resource using the extension
      described in [RFC8707]
-->


13) <!--[rfced] Is "Serving" correct here, or should it be "Hosting" since 
"web host" is mentioned in the next sentence?

Original:
   Serving the static JavaScript or WASM code is a separate responsibility from 
   handling interactions with the authorization server.

Perhaps:
   Hosting static JavaScript or WASM code is a separate responsibility 
   from handling interactions with the authorization server.
-->


14) <!-- [rfced] Please review. RFC 9700 does not have a Section 
4.18. Which section of RFC 9700 should this sentence cite?

Current:
   Section 4.18 of [RFC9700] provides additional details about the
   security of in-browser communication flows and the countermeasures
   that browser-based applications and authorization servers MUST apply
   to defend against these attacks.
-->


15) <!-- [rfced] Please review. [HTML] does not contain a section named 
"Session history and navigation". However, there is a section named 
"Navigation and session history" 
(see: https://html.spec.whatwg.org/#navigation-and-session-history). 
Is this the correct section? 

Current:
    Modern browsers now have the Session History API (described in
    "Session history and navigation" of [HTML]), which provides a
    mechanism to modify the path and query string component of the URL
    without triggering a page reload.
    
Perhaps:
    Modern browsers now have the Session History API (described in
    "Navigation and session history" of [HTML]), which provides a
    mechanism to modify the path and query string component of the URL
    without triggering a page reload.
-->


16) <!--[rfced] Should the storage API in [W3C.IndexedDB] be mentioned for 
consistency? Would adding "IndexedDB" be correct?

Original:
   The persistent storage APIs currently available in browsers as of
   this writing are localStorage ([WebStorage]), sessionStorage
   ([WebStorage]), and [W3C.IndexedDB].

Perhaps:
   The persistent storage APIs currently available in browsers as of
   this writing are localStorage [WebStorage], sessionStorage
   [WebStorage], and IndexedDB [W3C.IndexedDB].
-->


17) <!--[rfced] We note that this document uses text styling. Please review 
the related terms for consistency, and let us know if any further updates 
are needed. We note the following differences:

 `httpOnly` vs. httpOnly
 `<scheme, hostname, port>` vs. *<scheme, hostname, port>*
-->


18) <!--[rfced] Terminology

a) We updated the following terms to reflect the form on the right 
for consistency. Please review and let us know if you have any 
objections.  

 Authorization Server -> authorization server 
 Backend-For-Frontend -> Backend for Frontend 
 CORS-safelisted Requests -> CORS-safelisted requests
 CRSF -> CSRF
 ID token -> ID Token
 OpenID connect -> OpenID Connect
 Refresh Token request -> refresh token request
 Token-Mediating Backend -> token-mediating backend

 b) We note instances of "(step C)" vs. "(C)", "(step E)" vs. "(E)", 
 etc. Is this variance okay, or should any of these instances 
 be made consistent? If so please let us know the preferred form.
-->


19) <!--[rfced] Abbreviations
 
 a) FYI - We have added expansions for the following
 abbreviations per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide").
 Please review these and each expansion in the document
 carefully to ensure correctness. 

 Content Delivery Network (CDN)
 Open Worldwide Application Security Project (OWASP) 
 Multiview Video Coding (MVC)
 WebAssembly (WASM)

 b) As recommended in the Web Portion of the Style Guide 
 <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#exp_abbrev>, 
 once an abbreviation is introduced, the abbreviated form 
 should be used thereafter. Please consider if you would 
 like to apply this style for the following terms:

 JavaScript -> JS
-->


20) <!--[rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online 
Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature typically
result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.

For example, please consider whether the following should be updated: 
 - native

In addition, please consider whether "traditional" should be updated for 
clarity.  
While the NIST website 
<https://web.archive.org/web/20250214092458/https://www.nist.gov/nist-research-library/nist-technical-series-publications-author-instructions#table1>
indicates that this term is potentially biased, it is also ambiguous.  
"Tradition" is a subjective term, as it is not the same for everyone.
-->


Thank you.

Karen Moore and Alanna Paloma
RFC Production Center


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RFC 10017 (draft-ietf-oauth-browser-based-apps)

Title            : OAuth 2.0 for Browser-Based Applications
Author(s)        : A. Parecki,
                  P. Ryck,
                  D. Waite
WG Chair(s)      : Hannes Tschofenig, Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
Area Director(s) : Deb Cooley, Christopher Inacio

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