Hi Rishabh,

Thank you for your reply! We have updated the document according to your 
responses to our questions. We just have a few followup items for your review 
(marked with [rfced] below in this thread). Updated files are also posted below.

> On Jul 21, 2026, at 7:32 PM, Rishabh Parekh 
> <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> RFC editors,
> Please find responses inline @  [RP]
> 
> Thanks,
> Rishabh
> 
> From: [email protected] <[email protected]>
> Date: Monday, July 20, 2026 at 9:46 PM
> To: Rishabh Parekh <[email protected]>; [email protected] 
> <[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]>; 
> [email protected] <[email protected]>; [email protected] 
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> Subject: Re: Final Review: RFC-to-be 10018 
> (draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-evpn-sr-p2mp) in XML
> 
> Authors,
> 
> While reviewing this document during Final Review, please resolve (as 
> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the source file.
> 
> 
> 1) <!-- [rfced] Document title
> 
> a) Please note that the title of the document has been updated as
> follows. The abbreviation "P2MP" has been expanded per Section 3.6 of RFC
> 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review.
> 
> Original:
>   Multicast and Ethernet VPN with Segment Routing P2MP and Ingress
>   Replication
> 
> Current:
>   Multicast and Ethernet VPN with Segment Routing Point-to-Multipoint
>   (P2MP) and Ingress Replication
> 
> b) In the abbreviated title (appears in the running header at top of each page
> in the PDF output), may we remove "BGP" to align more closely with the
> document title?
> 
> Original:
>   BGP MVPN and EVPN with SR P2MP and IR
> 
> Perhaps:
>   MVPN and EVPN with SR P2MP and IR
> —>
> 
> [RP] Fine.
> 
> 
> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->

[rfced] We wanted to highlight question 2 just in case it may have been 
overlooked. Please confirm if you would like to add any keywords for this 
document.

> 3) <!-- [rfced] Please review the placement of the [RFC7988] citation. Is the
> intent to state the that "This document extends procedures in [RFC7988]"? Note
> that we also added "an" before "SR-MPLS data plane" and "SRv6 data plane".
> 
> Current:
>  This document extends procedures for MVPN service with IR over an SR-MPLS
>  [RFC7988] data plane with an SLA.  New procedures are defined for MVPN
>  service with IR over an SRv6 data plane with or without an SLA.
> 
> Perhaps:
>  This document extends procedures in [RFC7988] for MVPN service with IR over 
> an SR-MPLS
>  data plane with an SLA.  New procedures are defined for MVPN
>  service with IR over an SRv6 data plane with or without an SLA.
> —>
> 
> [RP] Looks good to me.
> 
> 
> 4) <!-- [rfced] Please review "is by". Is a word missing here?
> 
> Original:
>    An SR P2MP tree instance is by a Candidate path of an SR
>    P2MP Policy [I-D.ietf-pim-sr-p2mp-policy].
> —>
> 
> [RP] Yes the word “instantiated is missing”, but the fix should change the 
> preceding sentence too.
> 
> Section 2.
> 
> OLD:
> 
> For MVPN or EVPN, Provider Edge (PE) routers can steer customer
>  traffic into a P-tunnel that can be instantiated by SR-MPLS or SRv6
>  P2MP trees.  An SR PTI is by a CP of an SR P2MP Policy [RFC9960].
> 
> NEW:
> 
> For MVPN or EVPN, Provider Edge (PE) routers can steer customer
>  traffic into a P-tunnel realized by an SR-MPLS or SRv6
>  PTI.  An SR PTI is instantiated by a CP of an SR P2MP Policy [RFC9960].
> 
> 
> 5) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We updated "IR over SR-MPLS or SRv6 data plane" as 
> follows
> to improve readability.
> 
> Current:
> MVPN service can be provided using SR P2MP trees or IR over SR-MPLS
> or SRv6 data plane.
> 
> Updated:
> MVPN service can be provided using SR P2MP trees or IR over either an SR-MPLS
> or SRv6 data plane.
> —>
> 
> [RP] Looks good to me.
> 
> 6) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We updated "Leaf Info Required" here to "Leaf 
> Information
> Required" to align with usage in Section 3.2.2.
> 
> Original:
>    *  Flags: See Section 3.2.2 for use of "Leaf Info Required bit".
> 
> Current:
>    *  Flags: See Section 3.2.2 for use of the "Leaf Information Required" 
> flag.
> —>
> 
> [RP] Fine.
> 
> 
> 7) <!-- [rfced] RFC 9960 appears to use "<Root, Tree-ID>" rather than 
> "<Tree-ID,
> Root>". Should the following be updated accordingly, or is the current
> correct?
> 
> Current:
>    Tunnel Identifier: The SR P2MP P-tunnel identifies an SR P2MP Policy
>    with the identifier <Tree-ID, Root> [RFC9960] in
>    the order below:
> 
>    -  Tree-ID: A 32-bit unsigned value that uniquely identifies an SR
>       P2MP Policy at the Root.
> 
>    -  Root: An IP address identifying the Root of the SR P2MP Policy.
>       This can be either an IPv4 or IPv6 address.  The address type
>       can be inferred from the PTA length.
> 
> Perhaps:
>    Tunnel Identifier: The SR P2MP P-tunnel identifies an SR P2MP Policy
>    with the identifier <Root, Tree-ID> [RFC9960] in
>    the order below:
> 
>    -  Root: An IP address identifying the Root of the SR P2MP Policy.
>       This can be either an IPv4 or IPv6 address.  The address type
>       can be inferred from the PTA length.
> 
>    -  Tree-ID: A 32-bit unsigned value that uniquely identifies an SR
>       P2MP Policy at the Root.
> —>
> 
> [RP] The order is significant because it keeps the fixed length Tree-ID (32 
> unsigned value) before the variable length Root address (32-bit IPv4 or 
> 128-bit IPv6  address) in the encoding of the PTA. This enables decoding  
> logic to use the last sentence in the Root field : “The address type can be 
> inferred from the PTA length” since all preceding fields are fixed length. 
> Perhaps a combination of the two approaches with strict directive on encoding 
>  as shown below:
> 
> Section 3.2.1
> 
> NEW
> 
>    Tunnel Identifier: The SR P2MP P-tunnel identifies an SR P2MP Policy
>    with the identifier <Root, Tree-ID> [RFC9960] encoded in
>    the exact order below:
> 
>    -  Tree-ID: A 32-bit unsigned value that uniquely identifies an SR
>       P2MP Policy at the Root.
> 
>    -  Root: An IP address identifying the Root of the SR P2MP Policy.
>       This can be either an IPv4 or IPv6 address.  The address type
>       can be inferred from the PTA length.
> 
> 
> 
> 8) <!-- [rfced] Is "Function" correct below, or should it be updated to 
> "Function
> part" or something else? Note that this text appears 3 times in the
> document.
> 
> Original:
> If Transposition scheme is used, ingress PE MUST merge Function in
> MPLS Label field of PTA with SRv6 SID in SID Information TLV using
> the Transposition Offset and Length fields from SID structure
> sub-sub TLV to create SRv6 Multicast Service SID.
> 
> Perhaps:
> If the Transposition Scheme is used, the ingress PE MUST merge the
> Function part of the MPLS Label field of the PTA with the SRv6 SID in the SID
> Information TLV using the Transposition Offset and Length fields
> from the SID Structure sub-sub-TLV to create the SRv6 Multicast Service
> SID.
> —>
> 
> [RP] Update to “Function part”. I see inconsistent usage of “Function” and 
> “function” in the text, but question is which is correct? SRv6 RFC 8986 uses 
> “function” but BGP SRv6 services RFC 9252 (normative reference for Prefix SID 
> and Transposition scheme uses “Function”, so I would go with “Function part”. 
> Of course, without the quotes.    
> 
> 
> 9) <!-- [rfced] Is "look at next SID in SRH" supposed to be quoted text from
> [RFC9524]?  We are unable to find the quote in that RFC, though we do see
> one instance of "looking at the next SID".
> 
> Current:
>    The egress PE, in role of Leaf or Bud node of Replication segment
>    associated with shared SR P2MP P-tunnel tree, uses "look at next SID
>    in SRH" [RFC9524] behavior to process the SRv6 Multicast Service SID.
> —>
> 
> [RP] This refers to the following text in Section 2.2 of RFC 9524, supported 
> by the last bullet in the Section - starting with "There MAY be SIDs after 
> the Replication-SID in the SRH of a packet. …"
> 
> For leaf and bud nodes, local delivery off the tree is per Replication-SID or 
> the next SID (if present in the SRH). For some usages, this may involve 
> getting the necessary context either from the next SID (e.g., MVPN with a 
> shared tree) or from the Replication-SID itself (e.g., MVPN with a non-shared 
> tree). 
> 
> Processing of “next SID” is captured in the below pseudo-code statement in 
> Section 2.1.1 
> 
> S20.       Derive packet processing context (PPC) from Segment List
> 
> 
> 
> 10) <!-- [rfced] Should "constrains" be updated to "constraints" in the 
> following
> sentence?
> 
> Current:
>    A PE interacts with an SR P2MP Policy module to create a CP, with
>    optional traffic engineering constrains and optimization objective,
>    of an SR P2MP Policy when it originates an Intra-AS I-PMSI A-D
>    route [RFC6514], or an Inter-AS I-PMSI A-D route for intra-AS segment
>    [RFC6514], or a S-PMSI A-D route [RFC6514], or "wildcard" S-PMSI A-D
>    route [RFC6625], with a PTA having SR P2MP P-tunnel type.
>    ...
>    A PE interacts with SR P2MP Policy module to create a CP, with
>    optional traffic engineering constrains and optimization objective,
>    of an SR P2MP Policy when it it originates an IMET A-D route
>    [RFC7432], or a S-PMSI A-D route [RFC9572], with a PTA having SR P2MP
>    P-tunnel type.
> 
> Perhaps:
>    A PE interacts with an SR P2MP Policy module to create a CP, with
>    optional traffic engineering constraints and optimization objectives,
>    of an SR P2MP Policy when it originates an Intra-AS I-PMSI A-D route
>    [RFC6514], an Inter-AS I-PMSI A-D route for an intra-AS segment
>    [RFC6514], an S-PMSI A-D route [RFC6514], or a "wildcard" S-PMSI A-D
>    route [RFC6625] with a PTA that has an SR P2MP P-tunnel type.
>    ...
>    A PE interacts with an SR P2MP Policy module to create a CP, with
>    optional traffic engineering constraints and optimization objectives,
>    of an SR P2MP Policy when it originates an IMET A-D route [RFC7432]
>    or an S-PMSI A-D route [RFC9572] with a PTA that has an SR P2MP P-tunnel 
> type.
> —>
> 
> [RP] Yes, please fix this typo with same copy-and-paste typo in Section 
> 4.1.3.1     
> 
> 
> 11) <!-- [rfced] The series in this sentence includes both "or" and "and". Is 
> the
> intent to just use one of these?
> 
> Original:
>    A PE advertises Intra-AS I-PMSI A-D, Inter-AS I-PMSI A-D,
>    or Selective PMSI A-D and Leaf A-D routes with PTA for IR.
> 
> Perhaps:
>    A PE advertises Intra-AS I-PMSI A-D, Inter-AS I-PMSI A-D,
>    Selective PMSI A-D, and Leaf A-D routes with the PTA for IR.
> —>
> 
> [RP] A PE can use a combination of these route types it PTA for IR. For 
> example, just an Intra-AS I-PMSI route, or a combination of an Inter-AS 
> I-PMSI route and Leaf A-D route from another PE in response, or a combination 
> of an S-PMSI A-D route and Leaf A-D  route from another PE in response 
> depending on different policies and use cases. So it a combination of “and" 
> and “or” and “and/or” 😊
> 
> 
> 
> 12) <!-- [rfced] Use of "Split Horizon"
> 
> a) Should "Split Horizon" in this title be updated to "Split-Horizon
> Filtering"?
> 
> Original:
>   4.1.2.  Split Horizon for ES Multihoming
> 
> Perhaps:
>   4.1.2.  Split-Horizon Filtering for ES Multihoming
> 
> 
> b) In the first sentence below, we updated "split-horizon" to "split-horizon
> filtering". In the second sentence, we updated "split-horizon filter" to
> "split-horizon filtering". Let us know any concerns.
> 
> Original:
>    Note, the
>    MPLS label stack may have ESI label at the bottom of label stack if
>    ESI-based split-horizon is used.
>    ...
>    Note, the End.DT2M
>    SID S10 may also have an Arg.FEs Argument if ESI-based split-horizon
>    filter is used.
> —>
> 
> [RP] Looks good to me.
> 
> 
> 13) <!-- [rfced] Should "and ES of origin" be "an ES of origin" in the 
> sentence below?
> 
> Original:
> For an SR P2MP P-tunnel, the Arg.FE2 SID Argument is an
> upstream-assigned value assigned by an ingress PE and identifies
> and ES of origin.
> 
> Perhaps:
> For an SR P2MP P-tunnel, the Arg.FE2 SID argument is an
> upstream-assigned value assigned by an ingress PE and identifies
> an ES of origin.
> —>
> 
> [RP] Yes.   
> 
> 
> 14) <!-- [rfced] TLV names
> 
> a) We see both of the following forms in this document:
> 
>   SID structure sub-sub TLV
>   SRv6 SID Structure Sub-Sub-TLV
> 
> Should instances of "SID structure sub-sub TLV" be updated to "SRv6 SID
> Structure Sub-Sub-TLV" (per RFC 9252)?
> 
> b) We also see both of the following:
> 
>   SRv6 SID Information Sub-TLV
>   SID Information TLV
> 
> Are these referring to the same thing or to different things? Let us know if
> any updates are needed.
> —>
> 
> [RP]
>     • Yes
>     • These are the same thing. Please update to SRv6 SID Information Sub-TLV 
> everywhere.
> 
> 15) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
> a) RFC 7432 uses "BGP MPLS-Based Ethernet VPN" rather than "BGP MPLS Ethernet
> VPN". If there are no objections, we will update the instances below as 
> follows
> for consistency.
> Current:
>    For BGP MPLS Ethernet VPN specified in [RFC7432] and extensions
>    [RFC9572], P-tunnels are advertised for handling multi-destination
>    traffic.
>    ...
>    BGP MPLS Ethernet VPN specified in [RFC7432] specifies IMET route to
>    support BUM traffic.
> Perhaps:
>    For BGP MPLS-Based EVPN specified in [RFC7432] and extensions
>    [RFC9572], P-tunnels are advertised for handling multi-destination
>    traffic.
>    ...
>    BGP MPLS-Based EVPN, specified in [RFC7432], specifies IMET route to
>    support BUM traffic.
> b) We see the following forms in this document. We updated to the second form,
> (no quotation marks).
> MPLS Label field
> "MPLS Label" field
> We also see "label field" in the document. We updated to "Label field"
> (capitalized). Should these be further updated to "MPLS Label field"?
> c) We see the following inconsistencies in the document. We updated to the
> latter form per usage in RFC 8986. Please review and let us know any concerns.
> SRv6 endpoint behavior
> SRv6 Endpoint Behavior
> SRv6 Endpoint behavior
> d) Should "optimization objective" be updated to "optimization objectives"
> (plural) in the sentences below?
> Original:
>    This CP can have optional traffic
>    engineering constraints and/or optimization objective by provisioning
>    or by a local policy.
>    ...
>    The SR P2MP Policy module signals the CP along
>    with the constraints and optimization objective to the controller
>    using a protocol mentioned above.
>    ...
>    Given a Leaf set of an SR P2MP Policy and a CP with constraints and
>    optimization objective, the controller computes and instantiates the
>    PTI on the nodes that are part of the tree by stitching Replication
>    segments [RFC9524] at Root (ingress PE) node, intermediate
>    replication nodes and Leaf nodes (egress PEs).
>    ...
>    A PE interacts with SR P2MP Policy module to create a CP, with
>    optional traffic engineering constrains and optimization objective,
>    of an SR P2MP Policy when it it originates an Intra-AS I-PMSI A-D
>    route [RFC6514], or an Inter-AS I-PMSI A-D route for intra-AS segment
>    [RFC6514], or a S-PMSI A-D route [RFC6514], or "wildcard" S-PMSI A-D
>    route [RFC6625], with a PTA having SR P2MP P-tunnel type.
>    ...
>    A PE interacts with SR P2MP Policy module to create a CP, with
>    optional traffic engineering constrains and optimization objective,
>    of an SR P2MP Policy when it it originates an IMET A-D route
>    [RFC7432], or a S-PMSI A-D route [RFC9572], with a PTA having SR P2MP
>    P-tunnel type.
> —>
> 
> [RP]
>     • Fine
>     • Fine and yes please change the occurrences of Label field to MPLS Label 
> field
>     • Fine
>     • A CP may have one optional optimization objective (usually with a 
> default when the objective is not specified)  but may have zero or more  
> constraints (optional too).

[rfced] Thanks for your clarification! To further clarify that a CP may have 
one optional optimization objective, may we update the instances below as 
follows?

Original:
   This CP can have optional traffic
   engineering constraints and/or optimization objective by provisioning
   or by a local policy.
   ...
   Given a Leaf set of an SR P2MP Policy and a CP with constraints and
   optimization objective, the controller computes and instantiates the
   PTI on the nodes that are part of the tree by stitching Replication
   segments [RFC9524] at Root (ingress PE) node, intermediate
   replication nodes and Leaf nodes (egress PEs).
   ...
   A PE interacts with SR P2MP Policy module to create a CP, with
   optional traffic engineering constrains and optimization objective,
   of an SR P2MP Policy when it it originates an Intra-AS I-PMSI A-D
   route [RFC6514], or an Inter-AS I-PMSI A-D route for intra-AS segment
   [RFC6514], or a S-PMSI A-D route [RFC6514], or "wildcard" S-PMSI A-D
   route [RFC6625], with a PTA having SR P2MP P-tunnel type.
   ...
   A PE interacts with SR P2MP Policy module to create a CP, with
   optional traffic engineering constrains and optimization objective,
   of an SR P2MP Policy when it it originates an IMET A-D route
   [RFC7432], or a S-PMSI A-D route [RFC9572], with a PTA having SR P2MP
   P-tunnel type.

Perhaps:
   This CP can have optional traffic
   engineering constraints and/or an optional optimization objective by 
provisioning
   or by a local policy.
   ...
   Given a Leaf set of an SR P2MP Policy and a CP with optional traffic 
   engineering constraints and an optimization objective, the controller 
   computes and instantiates the PTI on the nodes that are part of the tree 
   by stitching Replication segments [RFC9524] at Root (ingress PE) node, 
intermediate
   replication nodes and Leaf nodes (egress PEs).
   ...
   A PE interacts with SR P2MP Policy module to create a CP, with
   optional traffic engineering constrains and an optional optimization 
objective,
   of an SR P2MP Policy when it it originates an Intra-AS I-PMSI A-D
   route [RFC6514], or an Inter-AS I-PMSI A-D route for intra-AS segment
   [RFC6514], or a S-PMSI A-D route [RFC6514], or "wildcard" S-PMSI A-D
   route [RFC6625], with a PTA having SR P2MP P-tunnel type.
   ...
   A PE interacts with SR P2MP Policy module to create a CP, with
   optional traffic engineering constrains and an optional optimization 
objective,
   of an SR P2MP Policy when it it originates an IMET A-D route
   [RFC7432], or a S-PMSI A-D route [RFC9572], with a PTA having SR P2MP
   P-tunnel type.

The files have been posted here:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc10018.txt
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc10018.pdf
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc10018.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc10018.xml

Diff files are posted below:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc10018-diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc10018-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc10018-auth48diff.html
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For the Final Review status page, please see: 
https://queue.rfc-editor.org/final-review/rfc10018/.

Thank you!
Madison Church
RFC Production Center

> 16) <!-- [rfced] We added articles (i.e., "a", "an", and "the") in a number of
> instances, for example, before names of fields, flags, and attributes.
> Please review and let us know if any further updates are needed.
> —>
> 
> [RP] Looks good to me.
> 
> 17) <!-- [rfced] Abbreviations
> a) How should the following abbreviations be expanded in this document?
> SLA
>   Note: Perhaps as "Service Level Agreement (SLA)"?
> LOC
> BoS label
>   Note: Perhaps as "label at the bottom of the stack"?
> b) FYI - We have added expansions for abbreviations upon first use
> per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each
> expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
> Label Switched Paths (LSPs)
> Path Computation Element Communication Protocol (PCEP)
> Network Configuration Protocol (NETCONF)
> Segment Routing over MPLS (SR-MPLS)
> Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6)
> —>
> 
> [RP]
>     • Service Level Agreement (SLA) works. 
>               LOC is the locator part of SRv6 SID - Section 3.1 RFC 8986. 
> Perhaps locator (LOC)
>              BoS label is Bottom-of-Stack MPLS label but I cannot remember 
> the RFC reference for this.>
>         b) Fine
> 
> 
> 18) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online
> Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature typically
> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should
> still be reviewed as a best practice.
> —>
> 
> [RP] Looks good to me.
> 
> Thank you.
> Madison Church and Rebecca VanRheenen
> RFC Production Center
> On Jul 20, 2026, at 9:43 PM, [email protected] wrote:
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> RFC 10018 (draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-evpn-sr-p2mp)
> Title            : Multicast and Ethernet VPN with Segment Routing P2MP and 
> Ingress Replication
> Author(s)        : R. Parekh, Ed.,
>                   D. Voyer, Ed.,
>                   C. Filsfils,
>                   H. Bidgoli,
>                   Z. Zhang
> WG Chair(s)      : Matthew Bocci, Stephane Litkowski, Zhaohui Zhang
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