Daniel wrote:
The basic principle is pretty simple:

    "Make your sentences as simple as possible"

The slight more elaboarate version is:

    * Imperative mood rocks.
    * "You" form is ok.
    * Passive voice is icky.
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In conclusion: Avoiding the passive voice is a means, not an end. The end
is simplicity.

Corollary: Whenever the passive voice actually *is* simpler, go for it!

Now I'll let Jean and Janet slap my hand if what I just said is wrong. :-)

Excellent summary and explanation, Daniel. Thank you!

(You sure you don't want a career as a technical editor? <big grin>)

Cheers, Jean



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