Comments inline:
On Friday 01 December 2006 07:00 am, Michele Zarri wrote:
> Dear All,
>
> I have taken a quick look at chapter 1 and made some editorial
> modifications as well as added some notes on parts that are either
> not correct or superfluous.
> I have tried to follow the instructions on the OOoAuthors web site,
> but I am not sure I did the right thing :)
> 1. I have retracted Jean's document
> 2. I have uploaded the document with my revisions and notes, but I
> have a couple of questions:
> a) who should I [Ping]? is it Jean or Dan?
Unless Jean contradicts me later today, the person to PING is the
person listed as the maintainer of the document. In this case, that
seems to be me for this chapter.
> b) have I made some mistakes in following the procedures? (quite
> likely) c) what should be the title of the revision? should I put a
> time stamp? d) is the file named correctly? (This I hope I got
> right...)
The title should remain the same although I would think
shortening it to IntroductionToImpress_01Dec06_JHW_MZ.odt would be
more appropriate to use in the feedback folder. When it is properly
reviewed and published, it will then have the full name:
0501IG-IntroductionToImpress.odt.
> Cheers,
>
> Michele
I have downloaded this file for further review. I will be looking
at your changes and making some additional changes of my own.
Dan
