1. I read this not only with an eye for typos and spelling mistakes, but also for things which made me need to read it again to understand.
2. I wondered as I was reading, is there a particular reason that the order of the sections is that way. My preference would be to put the order of the instructions in the same relative order as the sections in the dialogs. For example Page Order, Detail and Scale. - included Zero values (oversight?) - "on a sheet of paper" seems superfluous to me and maybe misleading. I thought at first it meant a sort of nup feature. You know, printing two pages to a sheet of paper, but this is more to do with scale. 3. Same question about order of explanation being the same as presentation on dialogs. - adjusted drawing object to fit in between pictures. - non-contiguous might be more accurate, but separate won't get them reaching for a dictionary. Figure 7 needs to be updated. oodev-2.3 has up arrows on the More button. - inserted comment about blinking cursor. (I was confused as to where the text needed to be typed in.) In heading and footer appearance would it be hard to have a reference to the section in the formatting chapter explaining how to use the dialog in Figure 9? Figure 10 (icons) plus the icons in the text showing the custom header buttons are different to what I am seeing. Is this a change in oo-dev-2.3 or because of the OS I'm using? Shelagh Manton
