Sorry about the delay in uploading my review of this chapter. I've
made some further changes and put the file here:
http://oooauthors.org/en/authors/userguide3/writer3/feedback/0202WG-SettingUpWriter_MZ_JHW_20080823.odt/file_view
Turn on show changes to see what I've done. I have NOT gone through
the file in detail. In summary:
I amended some bits that I had originally written on language settings
and replaced two figures in the same section.
In the section on ODF format version, I cut out a lot of what Michele
wrote. It's good information but I think it's not really relevant to
this particular place in the book, which IMO really only needs to say
what's important about the choice of version, not what's important
about OpenDocument as a format. (I suspect my original request to
Michele was too vague, suggesting the latter instead of the former.)
Perhaps there is somewhere else in the Writer Guide where the info I
cut on ODF would fit? I intend to use what Michele wrote in a new
appendix I'm writing for the Getting Started book, to include info I
cut out of Ch1 of GS, about the history and licensing of OOo, among
other things.
--Jean