[authors] **PING** Drew

[Grandpa Dan]

    I have looked through your notes. I first copied the text and its 
attached note for each place which had a note to a separate ODT file. 
Then I modified the text. Would you please look over these modifications 
to see if they are more accurate than what I first wrote? Once we can 
agree on the language for these, then I will be placing them back into 
the complete chapter document. At that point I envision perhaps doing a 
little more modification to fit the new text into the flow of the 
complete document.
    I uploaded my file into the Base 3 feedback folder for your 
consideration.
    The reason I only included the problem text areas was I saw no 
reason to include the entire 1.8 MB file just to correct the errors.

Dan