On Sat, Jul 11, 2009 at 12:00 PM, Grandpa Dan <[email protected]>wrote:
> I have looked through your notes. I first copied the text and its > attached note for each place which had a note to a separate ODT file. Then I > modified the text. Would you please look over these modifications to see if > they are more accurate than what I first wrote? Once we can agree on the > language for these, then I will be placing them back into the complete > chapter document. At that point I envision perhaps doing a little more > modification to fit the new text into the flow of the complete document. > I uploaded my file into the Base 3 feedback folder for your > consideration. > The reason I only included the problem text areas was I saw no reason to > include the entire 1.8 MB file just to correct the errors. > > Dan > > Hi Dan, Had a chance to look at the changes last night - it will be another day before I can offer further feedback, sorry for the delay. Will try hard to get into the meat of the chapter also. Drew
