David, your concern regarding length of text is totally legitimate. But I like it long because it looks more "real", more legitimate, coming really from an organization, more credible.
I thought that the visitors would not have much time to read it anyways and rapidly be thrown into the secret side of it... It's not a problem to shorten it, these are my thoughts. Alex On Mon, Jan 3, 2011 at 1:49 PM, david blanchard <[email protected]>wrote: > Alex, > > here is an option that I like for the design of the site, including your > first draft of the text. Have a look :) > > My only concern is that the text looks quite long, especially becaue people > usually don't love too much to read the home page. I did not realize before > actually seing the attached design. What do you think ? > > So my advice while you rework the text would be to cut when possible. > Another option is to have a short option and a long one for each part, and > we'll display the short part on the home page and we'll definitely find some > use for the long part somewhere else. > > Thoughts ? > > > > -------- Original Message -------- > Subject: Re: [Farsides] [The Humanity Project][design] Site. > Date: Mon, 3 Jan 2011 19:35:18 +0100 > From: tartaruga feliz <[email protected]> > Reply-To: [email protected] > To: [email protected] > > > > here we go! > > _______________________________________________ > Farsides mailing list - [email protected] > > Wiki: http://farsides.com/ > List: http://farsides.com/ml/ > Forum: http://farsides.com/forum/ > Ideas: http://farsides.com/ideas/ > Chat: http://farsides.com/chat/ > -- Best, Alex Vachon cartouchecreations.com Follow me on Twitter <http://twitter.com/cartouchefilms> Follow me on Facebook <http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=602172865> Montreal Loves New York Loves Montreal<http://www.facebook.com/home.php?sk=group_135269469856078&ap=1> New York - Montreal - Vancouver
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