Hi Ben, Thanks for your comments. Please see my response inline.
> -----Original Message----- > From: Ben Campbell [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Thursday, December 03, 2015 6:29 AM > To: The IESG > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; > [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-virtual-subnet-06: > (with > COMMENT) > > Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-bess-virtual-subnet-06: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email > addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory > paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-virtual-subnet/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Just a couple of editorial comments: > > - section 1, first paragraph, 2nd sentence: > The sentence is confusing, and may suffer from an editing or copy-paste error. > I'm not sure what "costly at the risk" of means. How about doing the following change: OLD: " It's generally admitted that IP renumbering of servers (i.e., VMs) after the migration is usually complex and costly at the risk of extending the business downtime during the process of migration. " NEW: "It's generally admitted that IP renumbering of servers (i.e., VMs) after the migration is usually complex and costly." > Also, who "generally admits" this to be true? I think the IETF community at least has admitted that. That's the reason why NVo3 WG is formed and several LAN or subnet extension proposals have been accepted by the IETF. Best regards, Xiaohu _______________________________________________ BESS mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bess
