Hi Ben, > -----Original Message----- > From: BESS [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Ben Campbell > Sent: Thursday, December 03, 2015 10:59 AM > To: Xuxiaohu > Cc: [email protected]; The IESG; [email protected]; > [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Re: [bess] Ben Campbell's No Objection on > draft-ietf-bess-virtual-subnet-06: (with COMMENT) > > On 2 Dec 2015, at 20:30, Xuxiaohu wrote: > > > Hi Ben, > > > > Thanks for your comments. Please see my response inline. > > > > [...] > > >> > >> > >> --------------------------------------------------------------------- > >> - > >> COMMENT: > >> --------------------------------------------------------------------- > >> - > >> > >> Just a couple of editorial comments: > >> > >> - section 1, first paragraph, 2nd sentence: > >> The sentence is confusing, and may suffer from an editing or > >> copy-paste error. > >> I'm not sure what "costly at the risk" of means. > > > > How about doing the following change: > > > > OLD: > > > > " It's generally admitted that IP renumbering of servers (i.e., VMs) > > after the migration is usually complex and costly at the risk of > > extending the business downtime during the process of migration. " > > > > NEW: > > > > "It's generally admitted that IP renumbering of servers (i.e., VMs) > > after the migration is usually complex and costly." > > That works to me, but see next comment. > > > > >> Also, who "generally admits" this to be true? > > > > I think the IETF community at least has admitted that. That's the > > reason why NVo3 WG is formed and several LAN or subnet extension > > proposals have been accepted by the IETF. > > If so, then how about "The IETF community has recognized..."
OK, I will update it accordingly in the next version. Best regards, Xiaohu > Thanks! > > Ben. > > _______________________________________________ > BESS mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bess _______________________________________________ BESS mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bess
