Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bess-evpn-na-flags-06: No Objection

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Thank you for the work put into this document. Even if I mainly rely on the
int-dir review (see below), I quickly reviewed the document and found it very
useful and readable.

Thanks to Ralf Weber who did the INT directory review, at
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-bess-evpn-na-flags-05-intdir-lc-weber-2020-08-28/

Please find below a couple of non-blocking COMMENT and NIT points.

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

== COMMENTS ==
-- Section 2  --
For my curiosity sake, why bit 5 of the 'Flags field' is not described? I would
have naively assumed that all flags would be contiguous.

== NITS ==

-- Section 2 --
While it is specified that the reserved fields are set to 0, the usual 'and
ignored by the receiver' is not present.

When describing the 'Router Flag', I suggest s/belongs to a router. /belongs to
an IPv6 router./ even if fairly obvious



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