I had a couple of minor editorial nits on this.  I sent them offline to
Linda and she suggested I send them to the list.

SDWAN is normally written SD-WAN.

C-PE is not defined.

We are missing an expansion/reference for NHRP, and also expansion for
DMVPN/DSVPN.  I wonder if we can have better references for DMVPN/DSVPN
since the references provided (URLs) are likely to become
inaccessible after some time.

On Sun, Jan 29, 2023 at 3:11 PM <[email protected]> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the BGP Enabled ServiceS WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : BGP Usage for SDWAN Overlay Networks
>         Authors         : Linda Dunbar
>                           James Guichard
>                           Ali Sajassi
>                           John Drake
>                           Basil Najem
>                           David Carrel
>   Filename        : draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-07.txt
>   Pages           : 28
>   Date            : 2023-01-29
>
> Abstract:
>    The document discusses the usage and applicability of BGP as the
>    control plane for multiple SDWAN scenarios. The document aims to
>    demonstrate how the BGP-based control plane is used for large-scale
>    SDWAN overlay networks with little manual intervention.
>
>    SDWAN edge nodes are commonly interconnected by multiple types of
>    underlay networks owned and managed by different network providers.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage/
>
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-07
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-07
>
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org:
> :internet-drafts
>
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